Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Noacat (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Wow. This last chapter is a real kick in the pants. The tension built is perfect -- it's as taught as a bowstring and I feel like I'm gonna snap! The longing and the desire... god, it was all done so well! This is why I love your fics so much.


Sess Koibito (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Oh, don't stop now! It's just getting good! I've been waiting for them to 'give in' for too many chapters! :)

Great job as usual! I wonder how hard it will be for them after this???


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

HA!!!!!!!!!!!!! Just once my asss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 

Okay.... I need the next chapter like.... yesterday!!!!!!!!!!!!

There is NO WAY this can be just once can it... its already so hot and heavy, and they didnt even have sex yet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

COME ON!!!!

But I'm loving it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

OMG. finally...acknowledgement!  This chapter was so great, it lifted some of the weight off my heart...to love so much but never acknowledge it....even if it is just once.  I love this story...thank you so much!!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

That's just wrong.  But oh-so-deliciously ebil.  That is quite the cliffhanger, if I do say so myself and I absolutely love the torture!  I'm sooooo glad that they finally FINALLY were able to say it out in the open that they wanted one another.  Quite a journey that was in and of itself!

Wonderful chapter Miss O, I can't wait for the next XD


Valore (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

oh ma gawd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *giggles* YEY! it's about time they got it on :D i love your story to bits


darkangelelf07 (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I absolutely love this story!! Wonderful!!


Ceferadel (Chapter 29) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Wow!!! I think my heart just stopped beating....


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I hope much good and an awesomely mind blowing rutting session comes from their conversation :-) 


Valore (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

*fangirl squeal*


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

I know a culminating moment when I read it, and this was definitely one!  OMG FINALLY they will be hashing out their feelings, and it's about time! 

This was such a good chapter, I loved poor tortured Sesshoumaru, laying on his bed thinking about naked Kagome XD 

Keep up the awesome work!


Tana_san (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

Looks like things are going to finally happen between Sessh and Kagome since she's now determined to get him to admit he does have feelings toward her as she does for him. I can only hope. Kagome is dressed beautifully since she went to a wedding and Sesshoumaru is sexually frustrated because she was in his home using his bathroom and his desire for her being in overdrive from his overactive imagination....oh please, let him lose that blasted control of his for once and do what they both have been dreaming of...or at least allow him to lose SOME control and ....oh yeah, have alittle fun time??? I'll be waiting anxiously to find out what happens. Knowing Sesshoumaru, he'll find a way to get away from her so nothing 'inappropriate' happens but...I can dream can't I? The suspense is driving me crazy...........JEN


Patricia (Chapter 28) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

SO FREAKING GOOD! I HAVE TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER! WHAT A CLIFFY THIS IS PURE TORTURE TO WAIT FOR!

I just kno the next chapter is what we have been waiting for, juciy goodness!

please hurry! :))))


Yudelle (Chapter 27) - Sun 17 Jan 2010

How sweet! Sesshoumaru crossed the bridge to see if Kagome waas ok and just to see her. You're doing a really good job on this story, and I mean REALLY good job. Oh God I just want to know what will happen next ^^


loveyaa (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

I like it...I really like it. I love that he is slowly discovering his powers and the way you describe the sensations he gets is beautifully done. Hopefully Kagome can bring a few more things out of him :) til next time...


Patricia (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

love love love how you always update everyday! i look forward to it.

now kagomes feelings are ut in the open its only a matter of time before sess breaks. i wonder whats gonna happen at the wedding?!

and how are mirokus plans gonna work out?


Stacerue (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

Just wanted to let you know how much I really enjoy reading this story.  It's very unique. You have a very fine talent of making the story come alive. I really can't wait to read more and knowing how often you update it won't be long. Maybe they should add an award for most dedicated writer. You always seem to have another story up , right after the last and they are always well written. I would definetly nom you. Of course, I could probaly win most undedicated reader since I spend mega time reading on here but am really bad at leaving reviews. I'm working on that as one of my New Years resolutions.


LM Bluejay (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

Another awsome chapter, can't wait for the next!!!


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

My my my Miss Oroyukae!  You have yet again captured my rapt attention with one of your intriguing and creative stories!  I don't know where you pull all of this creativeness from, but you never fail to impress me.  I haven't been able to put this story away and have spent the better part of the last four days reading all the chapters :D  I love seeing the developments between Sesshoumaru and Kagome; you have a way with making them both very frustrating yet unbelievably loveable.

Keep up the great work! 


love you so much (Chapter 27) - Sat 16 Jan 2010

STALKER SESSHY! lol. ooooooh, what next? what next? Wonderful progress!!!


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