Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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Yudelle (Chapter 30) - Tue 19 Jan 2010

OMG!! I love, and I mean LOVE this chapter. They were able to express their love in a physical way, which is Awww. And Kagome finally said 'I love you.' All we need is for Sesshoumaru to say it lolz can't wait. Awesome job on the lemon. Gods I love you, you are one of my favorite authors of all time. You did such an awesome, wonderful, great, and  beautifully done work. ^-~


Valore (Chapter 30) - Tue 19 Jan 2010

wow that was.... *pulls at shirt collar* is it hot in here?


Yudelle (Chapter 29) - Tue 19 Jan 2010

What an amazing, thrilling, and awesome chapter that was. Awww only once though? But knowing you it won't be their last. I absolutely love your story.


MoMo (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Wow That was awesomeness do more!


Tana_san (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Oh how beautifully written! I don't think you've ever quite described their first union so emotionally intense before. What an amazing way to express all that he was feeling and thinking at that very moment and I just loved his thought that "once could be taken in more than one context". I believe that they'll both find that like the Pringle's Potato Chip ad says, "Once you Pop you just can't stop!"  JEN


CarmMeldoll (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Good Lawd...I don't know if it could get any better...I think I need a cigerette, and I don't smoke!  I love this chapter...love it love it love it.  The way you expressed the emotions they felt....outstanding.


Patricia (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Wow the long awaited lemon does not dissapoint. it was so detialed and showed the long reslease of all the bottled up frustration. i love the part where she told him she loved him and he couldnt get enough. hes used to being feared or looked down on so when he heard someone actualy loved him it meant everything. the whole thing was just wonderful.

whats gonna happen with them now?


iloveprettysilverhair (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

This was sweet and saucy and mighty hot!  Those two definitely deserved such a night of pleasure and you delivered it beautifully.  I have a feeling their "one time" is not going to suffice for long ;) 

Great job!


BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

The cliffy at the end of the last chapter may have been cruel but this chapter more than made up for it. This was one of the most amazingly erotic scenes that I have ever read. Thank you for not making me wait too long and for your amazing writing skills. I look forward to seeing what drama this will bring.


Midnight Cat (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Oh lord! If I could describe how my body tensed while reading this chapter, I would drop everything and become a writer! It made me hold my breath, bite my lips, and ignore everything and everyone around me!! It made everything dissapear and the only thing that mattered was the sweet torture of your words written in my screen!!

What a wonderful completion between those two! How impossibly blissfull! It was almost like a boundless set of emotions that I never wanted to end!!

Thank you so much for updating! God knows I was praying for an update to see the culmination to so much pent up desire between those two!

There is only one thing left to say:

I love you!


StarriEyedAlexz (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

I love this Fanfiction it is beautiful and i cant wait to read more


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Mander B (Chapter 30) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

WOW! WOW! WOW! My mouth is dry. Well... that was exciting. I want that kind of love in my bed, Im jealous.


Midnight Cat (Chapter 29) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Oh my God woman!! what a way to leave a cliffhanger!! I read this before going to sleep and now I very much doubt I will be able to!!

You have me so addicted to this story I find myself haunting my mailbox in expectation from a notice to let me know that you updated.

I am so looking forward to the next update!

THANK YOU!


Tana_san (Chapter 29) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

You just thrive on this don't you? You just love having us get all hot and bothered with want that they jump each other's bones like there's no tomorrow, only to leave us a cliffie!?! You are marvelous, darling, simply marvelous! The tension of being so close, yet knowing they shouldn't feel this way, the immense emotion, need, want and desire just screaming to be unleashed. You wrote this all so perfectly my heart beat with anticipation of what was to happen....then my eye couldn't help but look over to the scroll bar...noooo...You are one of the best of the best when it comes to building up the suspense and then leaving us hanging until the next chapter. If there were awards for who writes the best cliffhangers, you'd definitely be a contender.  JEN


Lena (Chapter 29) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

WAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Why did you stop there it was just getting good? This is a really great story your had me since the 1st chapter. Keep up the great work and I can't wait to read the rest of this story.


Yudelle (Chapter 28) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Awesome chapter. I loved how you described and explained about a demon's inner beast. Keep up with the awesome writtng that you do, you wonderful author you. ^^


love you so much (Chapter 29) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

Ahhhhhhhhh!!!

*breathe*

 

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

 

I love your creativity. I love your fanfics. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!  :)

 

This fic is GREAT!!!!


BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 29) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

That cliffy was cruel and painful. I love your writing and I adore this story but this is just uncalled for. Please update again soon so we can all read what we've been waiting for. Keep up the good work.


just a fan (Chapter 1) - Mon 18 Jan 2010

I absolutely love this story! This is one of the greatest SessKag fanfictions I have read. The feelings and emotions seem to jump out of the computer! I am completely hooked and cannot wait for the next chapter!


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