Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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DemonQueen17 (Chapter 250) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

Interestinger and interestinger. More! Want to see what else happens with our misguided hanyou.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 249) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

Loving this more. Onward!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 248) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

SWEET!! I'm loving this. Onward!


Kayelyn (Chapter 250) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

Mwuahahahahahaha! Grandson indeed! ::cackles:: I love the subtle protection Sesshoumaru is giving here, though Kagome doesn't know it. Not too mention just how wound up he is about the situation to start dripping posion, despite his misgivings on Hoshihikari's strength. Because it does indeed mean something to have survived to such an age. But Yay for the making of new friends and also 250 chapters!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 250) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

lmao CONTECT THE DOTS! hahahahahahaha yusssssssssssssssss! more!


Kayelyn (Chapter 249) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

I think that I am going to like Hoshihikari. She is definitely uncertain about Kagome, but she has not dismissed her outright. This can only (hopefully) mean good things for Kagome... and will get Sesshoumaru to calm down a bit about the safety of her and her place in his house.


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 249) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

oh! this is getting interesting :3 more please!


Kayelyn (Chapter 248) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

Yay! Perhaps Kagome has found a willing ally in the palace....well, if her unknowing faux-paus doesn't ruin it of course!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 248) - Sun 02 Dec 2012

oh! i wonder how much trouble kagome will get into with this? more please!


mrslegume (Chapter 247) - Mon 19 Nov 2012

I read your entire story again and again, it's so well written and detailed, a movie I can see playing clearly. Why haven't you updated? You were so consistent, now not a word. Are you done? Moved to another site? I miss your updates. Please let me know!


Melinda (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Sep 2012

This story is one wonderful! Usually I don't read oneshot collections because they give me carpal tunnel! No, really. But many of your chapters are long enough to give my poor abused wrist time to rest between chapters. I believe Sesshomaru would take his sweet time with falling for Kagome, and I beleive your timing seems believable and natural. Thank you for being careful with your grammar and spelling -it helps me focus on the story :) I love the sublte romance you have built between our favorite two lovers, I love how it's all in the little details when it comes to these two. Also, thanks for making Kagome not a wimp or a super-hero, but something in between that makes her approachable and relatable, but she is still someone I can be proud of (I'm not constantly cringing at her making the same old mistakes).

Thank you for the masive amount of thought and work you've put into this. It was worth me reading from begining to end a second time, and I'll read a third time when it's finished. I appreciate it! Thank you, thank you!


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 247) - Mon 03 Sep 2012

My, my. This is a rather interesting chapter. Meet the Council. Onward!


Haven (Chapter 247) - Mon 03 Sep 2012

Awesome! Kagome is having her power moment. Can't wait to find out more about these ladies...


Katlyn (Chapter 247) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

So wait...Kagome is allowing her power to guide her to demons who are there that she can trust, is that what your author note telling us? Lol I enjoyed how Kagome seem to easily fluster Sesshomaru and how he allows her to do her own thing instead of telling her stuff like 'no you can't do that cuz of this or that'. Tehe and that Kagome is badass and shows her strength by burning those idiots. <3 As always, looking forward to more!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 247) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

i can totally see her just being the exact same as sess onely with her words and ruthless shows of power, not so muc in battle but still able to slay just as easily. I rather love this. :3


Katlyn (Chapter 246) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

Okay first off I am delighted to see Shippo and Rin back in the story! I'm also delighted with your take on how Sesshomaru feels for Rin. That he can even acknowledge to him self and then to Kagome how he sees her is unique among this fandom. She isn't mate or daughter (by blood) but something else and the way he says it speaks so much to what she is to him. I'm also pleased with how you have Sesshomaru acknowledge shippo; again its unique because he isn't dismissing him or pushing training on him. He knows that shippo has seen and done much already even for a demon and respects that. I agree with him, Kagome tends to underestimate shippo, but he grows strong and well due to her nurturing as well. I'm just so excited to see this aspect fleshed out.

Moving onto Sesshomaru and Kagome and what will happen during the umm ritual? Ceremony?  I'm really looking forward to see how they both participate and capture each other with everything. The animalistic and grace of Sesshomaru and the futuristic and sensual of Kagome coming together. There plus I'd love to see Sesshomaru's and the other youkai's reaction to our modern dancing, dirty <3


Pricila (Chapter 246) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

Loved it and agree; Shippo is stronger then Kagome gives credit!  Can't wait till the next chapter.


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 246) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

This makes for a sweet chapter. Onward!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 246) - Sun 02 Sep 2012

Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!

If she wronged him, she should totally have to make it up to him >:3 This was cute i rather liked it! *throws more c0okies in your gneral direction* :333333


Haven (Chapter 244) - Fri 31 Aug 2012

Uh, WOW! This chapter was spectacular. You are so talented! This will be a re-read chapter for sure.  Awesomeness...just love it!


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