How very presumptuous of Sess to think she'd want to be 'pupped' back to back like that.  SMH - men!  How rude *LOL* Sex?  Yes, awesome - especally with him.  Yup, totally for lots & lots & lots & lots & lots & lots & lots of getting it on with Sess... :-) Being preggers ALL the damn time?  Heeeeeeeell no!  Hell to the no to the infinitive power.  300 kids... is he crazy?  I should go slap my husband upside the head just for GP on that one *LOL*

I do have a question though: who is the trapped princess to Sesshomaru?

I LOVE the story so far, this champter is by far my favorite =]. Keep up the great work!!!!!

You never cease to brighten my day! This spring break has been great. Hope you're feeling better and thanks for the awesome update, I love seeing them start to develop a relationship!

This chapter was sad, keep it coming.

Wow...I kinda feel bad for him now~! :-( Such a horrible childhood! His father and Grandfather are absolutely terrible!!!

Yay!!! I knew it lol! Love it!

 yay! Action time!!! Aside that, hows ur health now Starfyre? Hope your health is much better now! Tc.

 ~Voracious

Poor Kid. Looks like him and his mom got the brunt end of the cruelty of their family. I wonder if there is any saving him. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

o_0 Umm... okay so yeah... right on about the warning at the beginning of the chap *LOL* Good grief.  Very disturbing & dark - so you hit the mark dead center with this one.  Great freaking job!  Whew!  That was... creepy... & all skin-crawley & weirdy.  Yes, I know those are not real words - but I have to make up stuff to convey respect for your sheer awesomeness at weaving that chapter together because I'm speechless agan (I really wish you'd stop doing that to me *LOL*).  Simply amazing.

aww...poor hideaki..or umishi...whoever. is inuyasha in this story as well?

Can you please bring hideaki's father and grandfather back to life so they can be killed again...and again?  Wow, I feel for the false lord now.  So is kags the long lost merpup? Great update. Disturbing and sad as it is

I'm glad to know who the western lord is, I hope Sesshomaru kills him, keep it coming.

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT O.O YOU LEFT ME IN SHOCK AFTER I READ "SESSHOUMARU"

WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT O.O YOU LEFT ME IN SHOCK AFTER I READ "SESSHOUMARU"

Well now we know who the merprince is! Let the speculation bout the western lord begin!! This chapter shows more of the scope of their power and world. didn't know the merprince could get around the world like that and so quickly, or be able to make air bubbles and stuff. I wonder where there conversation will lead them, and how long he will keep her before returning her to her friends. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

yay! finally our Sesshou acknowledging he is THE Sesshou :)

looking forward to next chappies ^_^

~Voracious

Finally our dear ice lord!!! (I know, I know, I was mistaken all the last times I said finally -_-' ) Sorry dear couldn't pen a review for the last couple of chappies. Heard you're ill, I hope you're recovering fast now (else we may miss out on those lovely darlings you provide us daily with :P) Just kidding! Seriously, do get better soon and no, dont tempt fate (and your chapter belting out speed) by not taking enough rest, food, sleep yada yada etc etc. Get well soon and maybe you can post multiple chapters in a day (by way of catching up, of course!)  :D 

And I'm hooked and on the edge now. Love the cliffhangers! <hugs>

~Voracious

Quite a full chapter - lots happening here! Don't tell me that the "Great Reef" is the Great Barrier Reef ... did Sesshoumaru swim all the way to Australia to provide for Kagome? (Even at Youkai / superfast Merman speeds, that seems incredible ... plus I'm sure he didn't want to leave Kagome for any longer than necessary). 

So now you've revealed what your readers were suspecting (or hoping) for some time - namely, that Sesshoumaru is indeed the Mer-Prince (am I wrong or were you refering to him as the Mer-King for a few chapters there? If not then I've been incorrectly calling him the King in all my reviews!)  But you've also created another twist here - I guess I was assuming the Western Lord's mother (the woman he is keeping captive) was also the Mer-Prince's mother...but nope, as you have now revealed to us, it turns out Sesshoumaru has his own Mermaid mother thriving at the bottom of the sea.  My bad for assuming they were one and the same ... does this mean Sesshoumaru does not actually have blood rights to the Western kingdom?

This is so interesting and confusing! I was WONDERING if it was Sesshoumaru that was the Mer prince. Then....who's the Western Lord? O.o

Lol. I ask hypothetical questions. I really don't want answers outside o the story. 

I shall await more! >.<

--Silver

This is so interesting and confusing! I was WONDERING if it was Sesshoumaru that was the Mer prince. Then....who's the Western Lord? O.o

Lol. I ask hypothetical questions. I really don't want answers outside o the story. 

I shall await more! >.<

--Silver