Oh oh oh oh oh! She mad, unusual...something seems to be provoking her beyond the memory she had. We gonna finally see some Kagome/Mer Prince time??? Can't wait! I think I know who the prince is, but I'll wait until the next chapter to maybe find out!
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 23) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
It seems like this was/is a suppressed memory. Did it really happen?
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 22) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Wow, the background history is very dark. It'll be interesting to see what it will all lead to.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 21) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Seeing the slayers now arriving, it's going to start getting serious?
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 20) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Nice, onto the next!
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 19) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Okay, pretty sure that The Lord is not Sesshomaru. I'll wait just a few more chapters just to make sure though.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 18) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Now who are these two mysterious figures?
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 17) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
The legend of how the merfolk came to exist is fascinating. Did you happen to make it up or have a reference to go off of? It's a brilliant piece of work, makes it seem believable :)
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 16) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
The reactions in this chapter are awesome. I love Shippo's explanation to Rin of what Miroku smells like, haha.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 15) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Love, love love love loved this!! The way it's told from Kagome's side, to the merman's is fantastic!
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 14) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Ahh, I have to real words for this. Just love for chapter, I can't read the next.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 13) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
The information that Sango gives is fascinating! And her story about being kidnapped by the mermaid is neat too.
Is Kagome perhaps feeling disappointment or jealousy to her dream where the merman claims Rin as his?
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 12) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Well this was interesting to read. The tone of it seems dark, and one could think The Lord to be Sesshomaru, but I'm still not convinced. Something tells me it's another as the western Daiyoukai.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 11) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Kaede's reaction is mildly surprising, thank goodness Matsu handled her so well.
Shippo's lessons with his foxfire was rather brilliant. It's nice to see the interaction between kit and father :)
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 10) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Omg I loved this chapter, and I did laugh throughout it. The mermans initial panicking, thinking she was going to leave, then confusion of what she was going to do, then daziness to her stripping was awesome.
And his reaction to Kagome cleaning herself-hilarious. And the mention of bad fish, lol.
It was cute when we wrapped himself around her and kissed her.
I'm still guessing at who the merman is...nothing solid yet.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 9) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
I wonder if Kagome's dreams will actually become reality in the future?
And that silly woman is crazy to bathe and then purify herself in such conditions. Hopefully she won't take ill from it.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 8) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Ohh I love Shippo in this, and Matsu (well done with his character!) is awesome too. Rin is as always adorable too :). I love when Miroku asks Rin who she will marry and her immediate response, haha. Shippo sure got himself good there. I went back and read that a couple more times just to giggle over it.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 7) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
I wonder if the Western Daiyoukai is Sesshomaru? It sounds like it might be but I'm not fully convinced...
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 6) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Nice, calling for backup is wise.
Kessa
Kessa (Chapter 5) - Wed 20 Mar 2013
Oh wow, I think this is a favourite chapter. It's so...intense! I love how you've wrote the descriptions of the interaction between the merman and Kagome as well as the shore and ocean.
If this is how the rest of the story will be, I'm shivering with delight and can't wait to read more.
Kessa
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