You Madam...are just plain evil,lol....hmmm....who comes to Kagome's rescue I wonder!!

What the?!!!!  ::throws shoe at author::  nooooooooooooo Kagome, don't die!  Sesshomaru help your woman! lol good update.

OH, Oh, oh! You girly, are being viciously cruel by leaving that story hanging off there!!! ~steam coming out from ears~ You better update soonest soon!! ~chases author with a shoe in hand!~ Seriously though, I just about completely lapped up the last 4-5 chapters. It was such a delicious treat reading them all at once! And somehow I feel your writing has become better, not that it was very bad to begin with, but I get the feeling that the story oozes confidence now. ;)

Waiting on tenterhooks!

~Voracious

can't until the next chapter! keep writing when you can.

Omg what a chapter!!! Awesome as always. I just wonder if kagome and rin will be ok IN

Love this chapter!   I hope your migraine and studying is going well.  I liked seeing the small interactions between Kagome and Sesshomaru. 

Yikes, I hope both Rin and Kagome are going to be okay!  Can't wait til the next chapter, I love how fast your updating.  Kinda wish I could do that, haha.  

Kessa

You! You are so sneaky and...bad! Cliffies are evil!! But keep going!

Both chapters are great, keep it coming.

Ohh noo!!! Poor kagome :O!!!!  will sesshoumaru help??? ><

this story is so amazig and different to anything hi have read keep tje updates coming

Oh, the Western Lord...mhmmm...now that just sent a shiver down my spine lol Let him come! Onwards!

P.S. You mentioned pointing out any mistakes, right? Well, so far, this is what I've noticed in all the chapters I've read. Some misspelling, the words like 'anything' or somehow' and all similars are not two separate words, after 'although', 'though', however' there must always be a comma (or at least in most cases).These were the repeated mistakes. If I spot more, I will mention them later on. Hope that helps <3

P.P.S. After all that I feel like I should give you some praise to balance it out, so here it is. You really have a good grasp on verb tenses and I am so grateful for that!

See? Preparation against all is a must when you face an unknown foe. Better to be overly prepared than terribly lacking. Good thinking, y'all *salutes*

ONWARDS!

Wow, I really loved this chapter! The metaphors were sublime and it pulsed with dark, twisted sensuality. That's def my kind of read! Onwards! Yeah, I'll keep repeating that word unless the chapters are no more :p (Or sleep finally claims me)

Enter the merry monk who can make any situation perverted! Wait...that came out wrong! It's the opposite :p

Slowly the cast is starting to gather! Yay! Onwards!

Once again a great chapter! Can't believe they had sex in front nine year old Sango Lool. I hope no one realised anything...hmm I wonder how long till Sesshoumaru and Kagome get to have some alone time and rut! Hahahaha "beautiful bitch" I bet you laugh writing that lol anyway update soon! Your update come through t like 3:30 am lol I'm dreading this war tho, serious. Lol 

Oh! Prophetic dreams are added to the mix to make it even more intriguing! I do wonder though if what Kaede said is true. Did the gods sent Kagome these dreams to prepare her? Hm....

On another note. There was a wall of words in the middle. You might want to consider splitting it into 2 paragraphs to make it easier on the eyes. It is but a simple suggestion. One someone else gave to me as well not long ago lol

Now that is a mighty fine villain if I do say so myself! Plans of world dominations, epic ambitions and the ego of a god! I am so looking forward to seeing this story unfold! Onwards!

Ohhh a very intriguing starting chapter! I have had my eye on this story for a while now, but I finally decided to push the title's button. I'm so glad that I did! Onwards! So excited to read the next chapter!

Hurray!! Progress!! Keep it coming

This was a sweet chapter.  I like how Sango diverted further questioning and will support Kagome :)

Kessa