Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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Saraniya (Chapter 101) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

I'm speechless except for the fact that I kept grinnig while reading this and my professor who put me down kept staring at me but I guess I really shouldn't read fanfiction updates during seminars.


Lumi (Chapter 101) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

I received many an odd look from the laughter this chapter caused me to admit. To list which parts were hilarious, I would have to copy+paste the entire thing in here.

Also, what an amusing way to settle the Kagome-Inuyasha thing. Quick, effective, and absolutely guffaw-inducing.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 100) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

I knew it!!! Can't wait to see how these two get on.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 99) - Wed 25 Jan 2012

I enjoy Minoru very much. lol Poor Rin. She's probably not too sure what to make of this angry, naked guy swinging a big sword around. :P Alright, alright! Where's Kagome? This should be her cue to run in and straighten things out.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 100) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

 I am. Not. Good. With. These. Snivelling. Bundles. Of. Joy.”

This will be what I say from now on when anyone tries to ask/tell me to hold their children. Period.

And as for it being 790 words, it's the hundreth chapter. I'm sure you get some leeway.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 99) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

....

I really, really loved this chapter, and I love it when you show what's going on in Minoru's head. He's probably insufferably annoying, but he's just so d**m likeable.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 98) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

....And all I can see is Inu Yasha doing this naked, flopping *ahem* in the wind.

 

It's a very strange image.


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 97) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

While everyone who knew Inuyasha agreed that he was an action-now-thinking-later sort of person, they meant it as a euphemism for act-first-because-thinking-takes-too-much-energy sort of person. 

THis is perhaps the best description of Inu Yasha I've ever read.


*does a cheer*

*goes back to reading*


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 96) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

*blinks*

Hmm, this was actully an awesome perspective on pack dynamics, and it's one peole generally don't put up in stories. I guess my only question would be if kagome would even still be alive when Shippou was old enough to try for alpha.

 

And it was Minoru that suggested it, wasn't it?

 

*goes to read and see*


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 95) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

Oh jesus. See, this is why you're cute Naq. I stand by my point made earlier today. You fluffyized Inu Yasha. 


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 94) - Tue 24 Jan 2012

*blinks*

Potato flowers?

 

You know, it actually makes sense. Nevermind.


Saraniya (Chapter 100) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

Very much a chapter that is worth remembering! The cat is finally out of the bag! Or should I say the human?


Lumi (Chapter 100) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

It amuses me that they're having this entire discussion while Inuyasha is in the nude. Unless I missed something.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 100) - Mon 23 Jan 2012

What a way to handle chapter 100 of a drabble series -without a drabble! :laughs: Although I suppose to some under 800 is still drabble-worthy.

Loved it. Awesome touch having a surprisingly Thoughtful Inuyasha there. And the descriptions were beautifully rendered.

So I suppose the cliffie question is: is it Kaede or Kagome to whom Minoru is speaking?

Thanks for writing!


Saraniya (Chapter 99) - Sun 22 Jan 2012

Awesome chapter! I loved how you illustrated the internal debate in his head and that he even had time for that considering the fact Inuyasha went psycho on him. :)


Saraniya (Chapter 98) - Sun 22 Jan 2012

Figures Inuyasha would go psycho... sometimes I don't know who's the worse of the two brothers.


criticat (Chapter 98) - Sun 22 Jan 2012

Boys will be boys :) Silly Inuyasha, what if Rin got hurt? 


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 98) - Sat 21 Jan 2012

ah... did both forget that RIN IS RIGHT THERE? geesh.

So is this deviating from canon then, or expounding on what went on behind the scenes of the story we know longer into the timeline?

Thanks for writing.


KEdakumi (Chapter 98) - Sat 21 Jan 2012

So, in other words, they both need a good slap?  I can see Rin getting in the way here.  Can't wait for more!


Saraniya (Chapter 97) - Sat 21 Jan 2012

I like! Although I really should be doing school readings instead of this...need to ignore your name when the updates come through but sometimes you need the distraction. Thanks for the update!


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