Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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criticat (Chapter 108) - Mon 20 Feb 2012

Hooray for silliness! Poor Inuyasha, there are some things which can't be unheard lol


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 108) - Mon 20 Feb 2012

O_O The hanyou's brain isn't the only one broken... O_O

Thanks for writing.


Saraniya (Chapter 107) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

Yay! Eagle boy got stumped by the (sometimes) smart heroine and now he's going to fess up... can't wait to see where you'll take things next though I do wonder what's going on in the West with Sesshoumaru right now. 


WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 107) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

I'm so glad we're spending time on Minoru getting them to agree... that way, we're not focused on the death and destruction that will rain down upon all and sundry later, huh?  Like, if we don't look at it, it's not there?  I know... you're going, "Lalalala, can't hear you!"  Aren't you? ;D  Still, I am more in love than ever with this delectable, delightful tale - and ever-so-HAPPY that Lenny is back and you are updating again!!!!

:D

~~me~~


Lyra (Chapter 107) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

YES!  Go Kagome's intelligence!  Go Minoru's honest nature!  :D :D  And I think to myself...hmm...candidness and Kagome - perhaps he'll get better results than he's expecting :D 


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 107) - Sun 19 Feb 2012

Gosh I love this story! But I've told you that already, haven't I?

Anyway, this just keeps getting better and better. Minoru has to be one of my all time favorite original characters, and the way you write him only makes him that much more amazing. (Which, by default, makes YOU amazing, by the way *grin*) 

I'll be looking forward to another update! Keep up the magnificent work! 

~Aubrey

p.s. - congrats on winning second place best serial! you totally deserve it!


Shay (Chapter 106) - Fri 17 Feb 2012

Go Kagome! Don't let that Eagle boss you around! The blinking thing was funny, I feel sorry for poor Rin just sitting there listening to the grownups negotiate. Must be boring, unless she understands whats going on.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Gah! Is he going to tell her NOW that Sesshomaru doesn't want Rin like that? :headdesks. REPEATEDLY:

Thanks for writing.


criticat (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Oh lookie here, not everyone left completely dumb in the presence of his beauty lol I wonder how he will get out of this one.


Saraniya (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Yay! Kagome gains the upper hand over Minoru!!! I loved the last part!


Lyra (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Wheee!  Another chapter, so quickly after the huge one! :D  I like Kagome's intelligence, something she never really gets an opportunity to show off very much.  I'm waiting breathlessly to see how Minoru is going to respond to this - because while he obviously expected her to be educated, I'm not sure he's prepared for what the difference in time has done to education.  Kagome may be in possession of a great deal more information than he expected, at least on certain subjects. 

There is, however, this looming question in my mind: what about the enormous gap in Kagome's knowledge that comes from humans in the future believing youkai don't exist?  Youkai seem to have some influence on the movement of human politics in this story, so I wonder...is she missing key pieces of the history she thinks she knows, because none of her teachers knew about youkai? 

::excited bouncing::  More Minoru!  More Kagome!! And Sesshomaru's reaction....go Naq, go!  I can't wait! :D


Aubrey Simone (Chapter 106) - Thu 16 Feb 2012

Ooohhh talk about blowing holes in someone's logic! You get 'im, Kagome!

*grin*

I can't wait to see how Minoru handles this development! 

~Aubrey

p.s. - the blinking? totally a "Kagome" moment. genius, naq darling, genius!


Saraniya (Chapter 105) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

Wow! I did not see that coming, I knew he wanted Kagome to watch over her but to send Rin to the future and keep her there was not expected... wonder what's going to happen next... looks like you've got a couple surprises up your sleeve.


Trelweny Rosephoenixwolf (Chapter 105) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

gah! He didn't get to explain that Sesshomaru's not a pedo!

Wait... how does he know ENGLISH in his travels but not LATIN? :confused: I figured if anything he's know that part first...

But... liking the idea of sending them to the future. MUCH safer for Rin. But... how will she continue to soften our favorite daiyoukai There? Really like that Kagome would be trained... but how DOES Minoru plan on getting that to happen if he wants both girls in the future?

oh... and sorry for spelling Minoru's name wrong last review. :sheepish: I should have checked it, instead of thinking I remembered it correctly. Which obviously I'm Not. woops.

Thanks for writing!


The Hatter Theory (Chapter 105) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

Since I have been utterly spoiled plot wise (not that I'm complaining) I'll say that your execution is wonderful. I've really enjoyed this chapter, and I eagerly await the next. That being said, Minoru's view of Chaucer makes me laugh. I dislike Chaucer intensely (I know, such a sin!) but it is what it is. Also, the first copies bit made me giggle. 

I think you're carrying this whole thing really well, and I can't wait for more. I hope this offesets whatever ill feelings lingered from whatever review had you chewing nails this morning.


Michi (Chapter 105) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

Minoru is an ass!! I can understand his reasoning, but.. but... Kagome needs to tell him what will happen to Rin if she takes her to the future. Won't she vanish?! Time paradoxes in such! I don't wanna see Rin vanish! And and, taking care of a child is expensive! Bad Minoru, you've put poor Kagome in a tough position. But i's not like he can blackmail her or anything. Selling her out to Naruku spells detah for them all. PLEASE don't go back to drabble format, it was fun for awhile but now it's TORTURE!!!


FurvusCorvus (Chapter 105) - Wed 15 Feb 2012

I really, really, really don't like him. and I have a bad feeling about all of this. he might be well read but he is a fool. that is my opinion alone.this whole plan did stratch me right ya know. it is funny, weird and all. but I will still read to see what will happen. he be thumped on the head for this dumb acted figuritivily speaking and never mind that word I don't use it much so the spelling might be off.


koneji (Chapter 105) - Tue 14 Feb 2012

*Fingers quivering too much to due to the ingeniousness of this twist- can't type how excited I am about this in under one minute* So..will...settle..for...EEEEEE[... and etc.]K! Keep up the amazing writing!


Lyra (Chapter 105) - Tue 14 Feb 2012

THis is the best chapter so far - and not just beause it's three times as long as it should be :p  Minoru was very blank before, his history very open - and now we know more about him, which is super awesome, yay! Also ,the fact that he's gone to this tremendous amount of trouble for Rin is interesting - not just because of SEsshoaru does he do this, I think, but because he can't help his own protective instincts - how cute.  He protects Sesshomaru from Rin, and Rin from the world in general.  And then Kagome, who has been granted her deepest desire...but at a price which we can't yet fully comprehend. 

So.  AWESOME. 

::waves pompoms::


Lumi (Chapter 105) - Tue 14 Feb 2012

That seems like a rather selfish plan any way you slice it. I can't quite wrap my brain around how it's going to work at all.

 


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