Reviews for Capital Offense by Oroyukae

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sara (Chapter 56) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

While I have nothing against Kikyou it´s really weird how forward you´ve made her; they are moving too fast for my taste. It was only a short time ago when she was really mean to Inuyasha and even if she is regretting that it´s just weird that she is now kissing him in his sleep, I would be creeped out. Sorry, but I just don´t like it when a pairing gets together in such a short time or having sex in such a short time and I can already see that it won´t be long until they have sex.

Well, I´ll be waiting until you write more about Kagome and Sesshoumaru again.


knifethrower (Chapter 56) - Tue 02 Mar 2010

Not a big member of the Kikyo fanclub here, even if the girl in this story is a different Kikyo than the one I love to hate so much...  I always just want to see her suffer.  I'm just waiting for you to get back to Kagome and Sesshy, I know it's coming soon... 


ceres (Chapter 55) - Mon 01 Mar 2010

Damn, I really wanted to read more about Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Kind of disappointing that you wrote about everyone and introduced another character but nothing about the main characters.


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

woo-hoo, Sato  XP


moonlight's.kiss (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

ah, Kikyou and Inuyasha fluff. got to love it, rite? and things are looking up! finally! i love the way you made Kikyou actually have a life you know. some authors just say, she's mean and nasty, nobody likes her and that's the way it is and the way it's gonna be. loving this story more each day(: but i swear to goodness if you kill somebody like sato or inuyasha i'm gonna be oh so mad! but anyway, update soon!


Snowfall (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

WooHoo!  The Sishi found a woman!  Nice.  I'm glad that Kikyou is finally coming out of her shell, but I'm still so worried about Kagome and Sesshoumaru.  I hope it doesn't take too much longer to resolve their issues.  It can't be good for the pups.  :-(


snowbird (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

I hope this waitress is no more than an innocent female wanting a good rut.  I'm just so anxious for Sato to find out the truth and reveal it to Kagome and Sesshoumaru. 

I'm glad Miroku said nothing to Sango about Sato and his mission because I suspect her even more now because of the way she behaved and her words.  If she is guilty of the letter swapping, I don't think she's the mole.  I just think she believes she was doing the right thing for a friend but not knowing of how deeply their love was for each other.  If she is guilty, then when the truth comes out, there's going to be a lot of hurt feelings against her from Kagome and even Miroku.  He will probably feel like she abused his trust in her.  Anyway, whoever is guilty, I want them to suffer in some way for the pain that Sesshoumaru and Kagome are going through.


Eve (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

OMG this is so good!!!   I am so stuck to this story!!!!!!!

Can hardly wait for the next one! 

 

Keep up the great work!

Eve (Kiri Kyohaku)


Ceferadel (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

damn, you just had to leave us there! Right when everything was really moving!


Silver Silence 89 (Chapter 55) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

LMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!

Men and their hormones..... he just couldn't pass it up could he?


Patricia (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

i cant wait till sato sees kag! i hope he can get to the bottom of this all! what is he gonna do when he sees shes pregnant!

your updates are very frequant, but your writing style is so detailed that it takes a long time to get to the big points in the story. even though its a little slow, its not bad beacuse every chapter is really good, and instead of being rushed like other stories, it makes the big moments better then ever beacuse it has been leading up to it! i hope that makes sense to you.

keep up the good work!


Ceferadel (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

Yes!! Finally Kagome gets some help from an unknown source. Can't wait for the next chapter


knifethrower (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

I'm really in suspense here, I MUST know what Sato will find out from Kagome, and what he will tell Sessh!  Please, update soon!


knifethrower (Chapter 53) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

For some reason, I always like reading stories where Kagome is left alone, bearing Sesshomaru's pups.  It just seems so touching and sad.  I'm really enjoying this story, now that it feels like there is some hope for our troubled heroes...


Yuyu (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

hahahaha sesshomaru has cravings! great!


LM Bluejay (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

WOW!!! In summary to the last four chapters I just read: Who replaced the letter!!?? OMG, What a TWIST!!! That part was just so wrong and yet engaging at the same time! Also, I guess Sess and Kag are connected since he's pretty much the one eating for his growing family. Lol. Please UPDATE SOON!!!!!


Kristina Kimball (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

good job with this chapter...I think Kagome and Sesshomaru have a real connection...it shows how sesshomaru is eating so much...lol...i hope he can hold out till sato comes back...good job and update soon...


Eve (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

I Love this story of yours!!!!  And you updated really fast !!!!!  YAH!!!  Please keep these chapters coming you have an awesome tale !

Thank You for giving me so much reading enjoyment!

 

Kiri Kyohaku

>^.^<

 


Tana_san (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

Ah, there are several things that are of great interest here...Kagome maybe not eating but Sesshoumaru is. Kagome has been calling Sessh's name in her sleep and crying and she still loves him no matter how hard she tries to hate him and Sessh is feeling those thoughts to a degree because he still feels there may be hope things will change.

I also like how you're developing Kikyou's interest in InuYasha. She acts like a young girl who has her first crush but because she acted hateful in the beginning, she doesn't know how to go about trying to get him to like her. I found it kind of sweet. Throwing the ball at him when he wouldn't expect it was great. Hopefully he'll find it as her way trying to break the ice and he'll "play" too. A healthy banter betwween them would be great. Maybe she can help curb his potty mouth in a fun way. I think they could be a cute couple.

I'm also glad that Sato isn't against Sesshoumaru in way. I really like their friendship.  Everyone should have at least one loyal and trusting friend and Sesshoumaru really needs someone who is more his equal and his own kind. I like that Sato has that playful sense of humor. He seems to know just how to balance humor and seriousness. 

I also now have a better understanding of what is going on within the Organization's want of Sesshoumaru. I usually have a better grasp on what might be happening but you got me on this one. I do know who helped write the letter the director exchanged. The only person that would know how Sesshoumaru speaks and would know about Kagome would be Mikaru. It would make sense that he would want Sessh helping the Organization because he knows how Sessh works to keep their community under control... I don't know for sure if he's the mole, but, I do know he had a hand in it. You haven't mentioned anyone else that could know how Sesshoumaru speaks or that he only wanted the 24 hour fling. Mikaru spent alot of time with InuYasha and I can bet InuYasha told him thinking he could trust him.

Anyway, I've got to go. I've got a very yancy kitty that wants me to open the bedroom door so she can eat, so until the next update...  JEN 


sweetest angel (Chapter 54) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

funny the see sesshomaru eat in place of kagome as a pregnant female! lol

I can't wait for the confrontation between Sato and Kagome. Oh I can't wait to see his face when he will realize that she is pregnant!^^

I hope that at least things between sess&kag will clear up now! there is still a lot of things to discover but this agonising situation is killing me!

please, update soon!


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