Reviews for Alpha by Lyra

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Kayelyn (Chapter 54) - Mon 30 Jul 2012

Oh that unimaginable a-hole, just up and leaving her. I get it that they need to have their little confrontation, Inu needs to realize just how much he has lost, but I don't think Sesshomaru has really given much thought to the full scope of Inuyasha's anger. Anger at him, but most importantly at Kagome, who he obviously thinks betrayed him by not fighting the bond more than she has (which could kill her). Oh this is going to be so bad, because it appears that Inuyasha is, while not rational, thinking in his anger. Very bad indeed.

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Kayelyn (Chapter 53) - Mon 30 Jul 2012

Pfffft...I wouldn't be able to resist touching a smezy demon overlord either. Hmmmm...I wonder just who he is protecting her from?

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Kayelyn (Chapter 52) - Mon 30 Jul 2012

As of right now, there isn't enough reason for her to go. However, I have a feeling that Inu The Moronic is about to change that. I do like that he is sticking to his plan to get her to come with him willingly, that he understands that she will die if he orders her about like a slave. It's a small start, but it is something. W0ot!

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Kayelyn (Chapter 51) - Mon 30 Jul 2012

What is up with the denying of the orgasm? Rude! But otherwise a hot and sexy smut. I wonder just how long Inuyasha can hold out before confronting her with his nonsense?


Kayelyn (Chapter 50) - Mon 30 Jul 2012

OOO such evil sexual torment! I would have purified him. I like how he is leading her into her sexuality, helping her learn what she likes and how she likes so he too can please her, not to mention that it will get her to loosen her inhibitions that she has towards sex. Gotta get rid of that pesky modesty! XD

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Kayelyn (Chapter 49) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Ooooo and now he is thinking about her in terms of being worthy of being his companion. It's a start, but the level of possessiveness he displays in his thoughts and lust is enough. Demon overlords can't be rushed into anything, especially if it is something they are not prepared for. :snickers: He's so doomed.


mrslegume (Chapter 242) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Wonderful, I love Alpha, what diverse chapters. Kagome's and Sesshoumaru's relationship is developing sweetly and passionately. Thank you for the story and wonderful chapters.


Kayelyn (Chapter 48) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Oh Sesshomaru, you are well on your way to love. You may be emotionally stunted and a conniving bastard, but not even you can ignore the pull of instincts to protect the fragile, honor her easily given trust. Before you know it, she will own you, long before you ever oen her. Bahahahaha! Guess Kagome is not the only one who is doomed. XD


Kayelyn (Chapter 47) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

I don't...How did he...How the hell did he even make that leap? I know that he is Inu the Eternally Stupid, but even that takes a backseat to connecting the shattering of the jewel to the mess his life has become and even the loss of a woman who died 50 years before Kagome showed up to even break said jewel. There are no words for that, none. And though Kagome could have asked why he never approached her as a suitor, he could have had the decency to tell her up front. Oh you moronic hanyou, I cannot wait to see you dig your pit even deeper.

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Kayelyn (Chapter 46) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

I had just remembered that Inuyasha had run off, I wonder if he watched this little interlude or at least heard it. Hmmm...it matters not to me, except for all the drama he shall bring. hehehe! As for the interlude itself, Sesshomaru definitely made a move in teh right direction in caring about her wnats and needs in what gave her the most pleasure, bringing him much closer to her accepting him into her bed willingly and not because of bond!lust.

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Kayelyn (Chapter 45) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

oooo!Naked!

It's nice to know that he had no idea about the dream that he wrought on her, but like he said, it truly mattered notin the end. He still has her where he wants her. Though I am glad that her dub!con is slowly becoming full!con. One, because she truly does belong to him now and he would manipulate the bond to bring her to heel anyway. And two, because she wants to explore these carnal feelings that he has awakened in her and see how far they lead.

Plus, I don't think a nun could resist a lusty demon overlord bent on pleasuring you both. 


DemonQueen17 (Chapter 242) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

You put Inuyasha through mental, emotional and physical hell only to probably kill him off?! Unacceptable! He has much to learn. And perhaps find happinessof his own...eventually. Onward!


Kayelyn (Chapter 44) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

O.O Sweet mother of zombie jesus *fans herself off* I lied, I want the Alpha!Sesshomaru peendroid! XD And her placement on the tree? Well that was so ironic, that it got my nerdy fangirl all a twitter.

Now...naked Sesshomaru, yes? YES!

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Kayelyn (Chapter 43) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Bahahaha! "You aren't supposed to do that!" Haven't you realized yet, that he is relentless in the pursuit of your desire, freely given, and that he will do whatever it takes to get it. You are so doomed, dooooomed. You have already acknowledged that he awakens something carnal in you, you think he owns you now? Just wait til you willingly submit. bahahahaha!


Kayelyn (Chapter 42) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Oh Kagome, you truly are between a rock and a hard place, huh? No pun intended, of course. :snickers: But I think the worst thing is that Sesshomaru says that he wants everything, but I don't think he understands what everything means, especially in relation to Kagome. As of right now, he has her submission, but he does not have her complete trust, her loyalty, her true desire, her love, and being who he is, Sesshomaru would never settle for less than possessing everything that is her. But he does not yet realize that in order to have everything, he must give everything as well. Hmmm...will he learn? 

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Kayelyn (Chapter 41) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Hmmm...a part of me is sad that she is finally coming to grips with the reality of her situation, and frustrated that she knows just what Sesshomaru can do with the bond to not question these feelings of desire. Even though she belongs to him now, her mind has still not accepted what her body has, and therefore does not truly want those feelings. I see a long road ahead full of doom.


Kayelyn (Chapter 40) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Ahem Sesshomaru, that was a wee bit more than sensation. And Inu...you have truly proven your idiocy. You already know that she cannot deny the bond, so shouldn't you be the least bit suspicious of her touching herself, and now of all times? Or is that you truly lack the knowledge of what all the bond can do? Probably both, I think.


Kayelyn (Chapter 39) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Oh Kagome, you still don't realize do you? There would never have been just one time with Sesshomaru. He would have came back, not just to rub it in Inuyasha's face, but because he rightly and truly owns you. He overran Inuyasha's mark with his own. You are his mate now, no longer Inuyasha's. And because Inuyasha can't overcome his fear of his demon half, nor can he reconcile with his human half. If he had taken her as a wife and not a mate there would have been hope, a chance, because Sesshomaru could have ignored all but a mate bond. But since he has absolutely zero control...he lost everything.And Sesshomaru, whether he knows it or not, has gained all.


DescendingFrost (Chapter 242) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

Wooo who I love it!! :D Onwards has become my favorite closing word~


Kayelyn (Chapter 38) - Sun 29 Jul 2012

The longer this altercation goes on, the more amused I become at Sesshomaru's incredulous jealousy. Because really? Why would a woman chose love over titles and riches and his awesome alpha powers. He has just as much to learn as the others. Which leads us to sneaky Sesshomaru. He will send her sensation, but does he not realize that if she doesn't make the choice freely without any sensation or meddling that it is false, a true illusion of what you now want? Even if it is to make Inuyasha suffer, making someone want you...well in this case it can be done, but I have a feeling he will find it unsatisfying now that he wants her to want him.


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