Reviews for It Broke by naqaashi

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Rowdys girl (Chapter 26) - Sun 27 Mar 2011

Naq, this is really quite fresh and innovative. I'm enjoying the tale thoroughly!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 26) - Tue 22 Mar 2011

Hooray for updates!

Oh, Sesshomaru does seem a bit touchy, doesn't he? Hmm, well... perhaps a certain someone could help him get past that and learn to be a little more laid-back. Very interested to see where this is leading.

 


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 24) - Fri 18 Mar 2011

A woodpecker's equipment indeed. I'm interested to see what business Minoru has with Bokusenou.

Good update, m'dear! You never cease to please with your work!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 22) - Wed 16 Mar 2011

Uh-oh... I smell trouble a brewin'! Wonder what he's up to...

Great update, m'dear! Thoroughly enjoyed it; can't wait for more!


Nistera (Chapter 21) - Wed 16 Mar 2011
I love it so far! Your style of writing is very unique, managing to turn events we are all quite familiar with into something new and entertaining! I think, so far, the chapter on Kagome's mother is one of my favorites, depicting the irony of the situation as well as the humor that seems to be inherent in Kagome's family. Keep it up! I'm drooling at the thought of more :) - Q.oS

ChaoticReverie (Chapter 21) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

I love it! She is quite an entertaining character, isn't she? It's no wonder she attracts so much attention.

Can't wait for more!!


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 21) - Mon 14 Mar 2011

an interesting change in pace...  so far Sesshoumaru' been all grumpy gills about Kagome, and in pops his advisor who seems giggly about her  XP


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 19) - Sun 06 Mar 2011

Who, indeed? I wonder what the eagle will think of the odd, human girl in Inuyasha's company...

Do you plan on following the original plot and just adding a 'behind the scenes' bit from Sesshomaru's perspective, or are you going to go in another, original direction? Or... do I just have to wait and see...?

Either way, I look forward to your next update! Much love for being amazing!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 16) - Sat 05 Mar 2011

Yay, for updates! This CR hearts you!Wow, three updates back to back; impressive...

Love the story, and I can't wait to see more from you!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 13) - Tue 01 Mar 2011

I've read them all, Naq, and now I NEED MORE!!!!!! O.O MUCH MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 13) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

This sounds like it has the makings to be a very, very long story. I like that. I'm very interested to see where you take this.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 9) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Yes, I believe if melted chocolate made a sound, it would be the exact tenor of Sesshomaru's voice... good comparison.


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 1) - Tue 08 Feb 2011

Hehehe... Uh oh, someone's gunna be upseeeeet! :P

Great chapter!


Ace_of_Spades (Chapter 9) - Sun 28 Nov 2010

If Sesshy-kun was eadible he would probably be "melted dark chocolate". Lol. Love it.


Rowdys girl (Chapter 13) - Sun 28 Nov 2010

Naq, you are becoming a powerful writer. You are doing a great job of creating whole tales out of a very few well-chosen words and you manage very nicely to put pictures in your readers' minds. Excellent work!


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 13) - Sun 28 Nov 2010

0o0o0o0oh. write more dang you


summerbirdy (Chapter 13) - Sat 27 Nov 2010

I like your way of thinking. "sound of melted dark chocolate"

oh yay... what happes next? I wanna read more!!!!


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 9) - Sat 27 Nov 2010

I like!!! :D i always pictured him having a nice deep voice.

so.....when are you going to updated again? :D

 

in all seriousness, i really like these drabbles, my wonder though, are they interconnected somehow? or just random?


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 8) - Sat 27 Nov 2010

... you should update more. and stop making me twitch by having me read something forever ago and just now posting it....

UPDATE WOMAN


Arc-an Angel (Chapter 6) - Sun 21 Nov 2010

Beautiful!


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