Bwahahahaha.
"an indiscriminate predator."
Needs to be capitolized, and there's a misspelled word. "An indescriminate predator." I can't believe I missed that.
Aahahaha. I now remember why I love you so much. XDDD
Oooh, I've read this (or some of it anyway)!
I just can't wait to see what you do next!
You could have named it 'Breaking the Day'.
ACK!!!! You POKED ME!!! And I was just about to tell you how hard you made me laugh. I don't think I can get this one out of my mind - the pictures are too funny!
That was funny. The image of Jaken as a pin cushion had me lol'ing. Keep up the good work. <3
Ok, so this one made me laugh!
*snort* *Howls with laughter* Naq, HE'S GOT A SWORD IN HIS GUT!!!! *dies laughing*
One of these days, you gonna kill me.. making me laugh <3
haha for some reason these two can act like such a married-for-ages couple at times lol
*le gasp* No!! Naughty...whoever it is but I am assuming Sesshomaru. ^^
Tsk tsk tsk Sesshomaru, such petty revenge surely is below you? :)
Yay! Update! I loved it! Poor Sesshomaru or sly Sesshomaru? I guess both. :) More please!
Hahahaha! Let it go Sess, just let it go. Loved it!
poor sess, can't even destroy without worries of what others would say...
Though I must admit, kitchen is essential
the last line of being pinned by holiness cleaning up his speech literally made me laugh out loud!
prissycayce (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Apr 2011
I like these short chapters and the story itself. Nice story going on throughout.
lily (Chapter 29) - Tue 12 Apr 2011
awesome... and inovative, I love it XD
minoru's a darling, I'm starting to adore him...
can't wait till the next update.... hurry ;D
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