I, for one, think your new OC is intriguing... a snake allied with an eagle and a dog?  VERY interesting.  And I think this chapter does QUITE nicely, both for the prompt AND the title!!

:D

~~me~~

I absolutely LOVE this chapter - it's the best so far and it's insanely hysterical.  It is so wonderfully descriptively true and so out of his character at the same time.  What a GREAT opening chapter - and yes, I'm yelling!  lol

There he is! And what a introduction! More!!!

BABYSITTING!

Jaken?

I admit I'm clueless. I really want to know who it is, and if Minoru gets stuck with babysitting duty. Especially in light of what he *ahem* assumed. And I will admit that I like how Minoru doesn't defend Rin immediatly, because his character type would normally be assumed to coo and fawn over her. It gives him more dimension. 

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh, for cryin' out loud... you're having such FUN with this, aren't you? *mild glare* I know your type... giggle maliciously while typing, just envisioning the faces of your readers as they grasp that you've left them with yet ANOTHER cliffhanger!!  Actually, srsly, I'm enjoying the heck out of it too, just envisioning the evil giggles emanating from your lips while you're typing, lol!  I'm not even going to speculate - it never fails, every time I try, I am always woefully off-base.  Have your fun, dear naq, and I will enjoy right along with you!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

Awesome chapter!

Now that my brain isn't stuttering in a broken loop: I love the interaction between Sesshoumaru and Minoru. I really do. In fact, it's rare to see such an awesomely written story involving one of our main pairing with interacting so much with others that is so engaging. And funny. And just...Okay, so my brain might still be twtiching a bit. I love Minoru. So please don't kill him. I really want to see what he's like when Kagome shows up.

0-0 wait..... WHAT?!? XD ALOL Oh my gosh that's, that's the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard! Silly eagle, Kagome is his future mate not Rin.

Did Minoru think that Sessh was going to take Rin as his child bride or something? And it was a lovely cliffie indeed!

LMAO!!!  The eagle srsly thinks that Sess wants Rin in THAT way???  LOLZ, can't wait to hear Sesshoumaru's response to THAT!  Excellent series... am delighting in each new chapter!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

GACK!

wtf?!?!?!?!?

Words fail me.

(a stunning achievement)

MOAR!

(seriously, I demand an explanation)

.... ew.... Minoru's having ICKY thoughts. :nose crinkles: I might be a Sesshomaru & Rin fan (when not reading Sess/Kag) but never, EVER with Rin still a child. Ew. Sick, Sick eagle youkai to even Think Sesshomaru-sama would consider a child that way.

... hm. Although that thought makes a better reason why he was so Disgusted. I'M disgusted. :shudders:

Hopefully Sesshomaru-sama will make it clear to his best advisor that she is to him as a child, not a lover. Once he gets over being offended that Minoru could think such a thing of him. :makes face:

Thanks for writing!

And I thought it was a "cliffie" the last chapter when Minoru was approaching with an unpleasant look on his face!!  Whoa... can't wait for the next exciting installment!!  Then again, I love ALL your stuff, so I'm enjoying everything equally!

:D

~~Wiccan~~

Please update soon, this story is simply amazing, and I love your writing style. Even though the chapters are short, they're so vivid.

Great :)

Loving this story! Update soon :)

~Aleksandra

lol :3

Ignore it Sesshomaru :)

Happy Day Naq!

Hahahahaha, Sessh as a normal, kinda teenage (he looks 19ish after all), boy. I haven't read one like this in a while, Loved it =)

~lily

:Cries: That is SO true! Poor Rin! She would have died a nameless child!!! Thanks Sesshomaru, thank you very much!

xD

You can do it!!! Do it!!! Sesshomaru!!! You're in need of a hppy, chirpy pack :3

NOOOO! RIN!!!! Why did it have to end here?! NAQ! Allt these days of reading! :cries cries: YOU CANT DO THIS TO ME!!! :cries some more: