Alandrias

I Though it might be an idea to get a proof reader and someone to help me fix my errors in this story... i've noticed that people seem to be more interested in grammar and spelling than the actual story line itself >.> because of all the reivews i've gotten saying "its good but your grammar needs work" >.> so it would be muchly apreciated if one of you could help me with this little problem of mine ^^

If you can send me an email and we'll go from there....as always i will give credit where it is due :)