Aw, how sad... But nonetheless I really liked it, I hope u continue writing!

Its a really sad story but it touches the heart. Really. I love it.

I cried over this!!!!! So sad!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i'm okay now.........but it was sooooo sad!!!!!!!! I loved how it ended, that she died with him.........but.........................idk......i hope you write other stories!!!!!!!!!!!

This was very nice and I liked it a lot. One thing that distracted e though was the grammar and spelling. So just look it over once more before you post something. Aww, that was mean. I didn't want it to sound that way, I just mean that I think it would erm.. flow better if you maybe looked it over again? Anyways, I gave it, erm 10/10, it was very nice and yes, it was quite sad. Thank you for putting it onto this site and I look forward to reading more from you soon, you have great potential and you seem to be a great writer ^_^ Bai

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