Reviews for The Diary by CiraArana

winni- Thu 12 Jun 2008
I loove every single one of ur stories!!!They are so riveting!!!My favourite is the oneshot 'early promise'.Please keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!
P.S.u know kagome's description of her dream man in THE DIARY fits Miroku more than anyone else:-p

Sassy- Wed 09 Apr 2008
Hello again. Can't wait for the next chapter. If i have to go through all the chapters again and comment on all of them again to edge you into the next chapter, i will. Laters.

animelover21- Sat 22 Mar 2008
hurry up and update!
If you dont, I'll steal all of your pocky!

Just Unique- Thu 31 Jan 2008
I can't believe this fic is on hold...the story line is so amazing! You've got to update soon!! I'm desperate to know what's going to happen next... was sesshoumaru listening to the conversation after he "left"? i mean..the part were sango tells kagome not to fall for him? Hey...i really want to know what they were talking about -sesshy and kagome that is-

Changing the topic..Have you found betas yet? because i'd gladly do the work if it means that you'll finish this fic...i have no experience at all but i do wish to help in any way possible

^___^ Be back soon! we're waiting for you! gOod luck!

Tsunami Kitsune- Fri 25 Jan 2008
*glare's* your never going to updfate are you?

Alexandra- Wed 23 Jan 2008
Please keep going i so love it i really want to know what happens next im really excited.

Ivol- Mon 14 Jan 2008
I just finished reading Passion, Divine Concubine, and The Diary and i've got to say that you are now one of my favorite ses/kag fanfiction authors. All of your stories are well written and interesting and I'm kind of sad now that i've caught up on all your stories. I hope you get back from hiatus soon and update some of your stories especially The Diary seeing how you left it on a cliff hanger >_

Janelle Gormley- Sat 12 Jan 2008
hey thar
I'm totally in love with this story.
I was supposed to clean my room today but I kept wanting to know what was going to happen in the next chapter.

While I was reading this a song popped up into my brain and it was Boom Boom Boom Boom by the Venga Boys.
it reminded me of kagome and how she was writing in her diary.
Like in the song where it goes

" Boom Boom Boom Boom, I want you in my room. let's spend the night together from now until forever."

Hehee

jeeze.
Anyways, Keep it up guh. Im loving it like a fat kid loves cake.

Therisa- Fri 04 Jan 2008
Noooo... On hold at a cliffie. Tsk, tsk sham on you. Your torturing all your fans you know. I hope you start writing this again soon else I might kill someone!

Megan Consoer- Tue 13 Nov 2007
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

rowdysgirl- Fri 21 Sep 2007
i love this story, but are you EVER going to finish it?

trihn- Mon 27 Aug 2007
ah, diary cliffy! how evil of you. i like your fic. i hope you update again soon.

Serena- Mon 13 Aug 2007
This is a pretty good fic. Will you be updating it soon? Please update, I really want to know what happens.

Tsunami Kitsune- Fri 10 Aug 2007
hmmmmmmmm. will.....you......update?
huh. please? you diod say to pester you until you did. so peser i shall untill you do. but then.... i have anyway. i'm annoying that way. just kiddig. i wont do that.

elvira- Thu 26 Jul 2007
wow..this is a really good story!!!..it took my three days to finsh reading the chapters..lol..but i enjoyed it very much!!..please update soon ok...please and thank-you!!

Caitlyn- Mon 23 Jul 2007
YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE! I can't wait until the next chapter!

Tsunami Kitsune- Sat 14 Jul 2007
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPADATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
...please?....please? oh yes i love it and now i would like to say
UPDATE....!!!!

Tsunami Kitsune- Sun 17 Jun 2007
please update! CiraArana1 i looove this story! adore it and can't wait for the next instalmant. oh yes and i didn't spot any spelling error's in your story, but then maybe i was to caught up in it! i stayed up last night reading till 4;35 in the morning!!! totaly impressed :wright on!!!!

Tsunami Kitsune- Sun 17 Jun 2007
okay i'm only on kelidescope emotion's but please do not EVER stop wrightinh this story!!! i love it more than strictly reasonable! it right up there with idoit's gide to dog demons, through the mirror, incomplete, and tears of the fallen. please continue your wrighting and don't you ever get discouraged. ifanyone flame's you keep in mind---
their all IDOIT'S TO INSULT THIS WORK!!!!
much adoration (and not in a creepy way.)
Tsunami Kitsune

sesshyluver17- Wed 13 Jun 2007
OH WOW! it's been forever since i've been able to locate this again. I know that sounds odd... heheh. But this was actually the VERY first story I ever read on A-single-spark and I fell in love with it from th ebeginning. unfortunately I was "innocent" the favortie story and author lists... But I always looked for the summary that stuck in my mind, and when I found your story "Divine Concubine" I checked your stories and i was amazed to find this! i instantly picked up from whereI left off and was immediately drawn into the plot again. I really adore this story, it's perhaps my very favotire I've ever read, right up next to "House of the Moon".

I can never get enough of reading this, and I admit being dissapointed in seeing it end and not knowing what Kagome did in order to earn those amused stares! PLEASE update this soon! I really adore this story and would really enjoy continuing to read this!

Allison- Thu 31 May 2007
Once again, youve made a wonderful fic! I love this. You changed Sesshoumaru but have kept his..Sesshy-ness lol And I think youve made Kagome hilarious with her actions and her little diary. ^_^ Im really looking forward to an update on this, and everything else you update. :D

Tessa-hime- Wed 02 May 2007
As the two adorable morons Bill & Ted would say "Excellent!". OMG, I can't believe I quoted them... Anyway, don't forget about us Diary fans!!! Throw us a bone every once in a while... and if you still need a beta for this story, I'd be happy to help!

45cats- Sun 22 Apr 2007
It's so nice to see another chapter of this after such a long time. I haven't had much time to read fanfics lately so having this to read was a special treat. Thanks for the chapter!

FireFalcon1414- Wed 18 Apr 2007
Another great chapter, even if it did take me a month to realise it updated... It's always fun to hear Kagome's side of the story, but I hate when she's interrupted! Now we'll have to wait to see what she "suddenly realised"...

Oh, and if you ever need beta-ing, I am a grammar freak and I love this story. If you want a sample of my writing, my pen-name on Single Spark is FireFalcon1414, and if you're interested in letting me beta for you you can reach me at falconswing14 @ hotmail.com.

Thanks for the chapter!

DreamingPisces- Tue 10 Apr 2007
WoW!!! This story is soooo great!! You won't believe how many sleepless nights I've spent finishing it! Update soon or I'll explode! And then you'll be in BIG trouble!

Ps: Just kiddin' with ya but do kaeep the chappys coming!! =D

Rinseternalsoul- Thu 29 Mar 2007
It was great to catch up again. The story is really getting juicy now. Sesshomaru showing up and actually hanging out with Kagome was a major advance in their relationship. I think that the others noticed it as well, otherwise Sango wouldn't have made the coment that she did. Sounds like Inuyasha isn't taking it too well though. hehe. It will be interesting to hear your take on the upcoming abduction by the poison master, Mukotsu. I loved when Sess saved Kagome and it has always intrigued me that he denied it as anything but self-interest. I think that you will come up with some interesting thoughts on that episode by both Kagome and Sesshomaru. Great job, as always!

elizabeth lowman- Sun 25 Mar 2007
I love this story! please write more about sesshoumaru and kagome and what happens next.

smantha- Sun 25 Mar 2007
it is kinda a cliffy, but u need 2 make a seqal

angela kelly- Thu 22 Mar 2007
I love your story it was, funny, hot, and i just loved it. I was just hoping that yu could add more to your story and maybye finish it.

angela kelly- Thu 22 Mar 2007
I love your story it was, funny, hot, and i just loved it. I was just hoping that yu could add more to your story and maybye finish it.

shavostorm- Mon 19 Mar 2007
OMG! I have read tons of these fanfics bt honestly this one is the best! I am completely in love with this story! Please update as much as possible! I am addicted! I need more please! Great job never stop!

chibilee- Mon 19 Mar 2007
yay! you updated! i was worried that you might have forgotten about this fic! lol but i'm glad for the update and i hope that the next one won't be too long. and what were the strange looks that the gang were giving kagome?

AnitaThePapermaster- Mon 19 Mar 2007
hey!!!! awesome story, can't wait for you too update!!!!

Sei- Sun 18 Mar 2007
Wow. I was so happy when I saw the email in my inbox! While I had to go back and re-read the last chapter, this was completely worth the wait. (I was so worried you had gone on a permanant hiatus! Some of my favorite stories have done that lately....sad T_T ) I cant wait to see what happens next!

Sei

Rose-Chan- Sun 18 Mar 2007
I...Love you. I thought you were dead! BUT YOU UPDATED!!! YAY!!!!! -glompage^2-

kagsbigfan- Sun 18 Mar 2007
WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?!!!!! what about the other story, huh? Are you slacking off young lady? You better get to work right now, hehe. I'm so excited you updated after so long. I missed you lots. Update soon...er.

Risa- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Interrupted in the end, too. :)
Well done!

lilmoe- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Thank You soooo much for that update. I was so happy when I saw that you had updated. Now that your back I guess you will be updating more often. I hope.

Kat- Sat 17 Mar 2007
wait are you having sango and inu pair up!!! you sneaky little... i can't think of a word right now but when i do i will be sure to let you know...

if you need beta help you know to reach me, i'd be more then willing to go over chapters for you

lexis- Sat 17 Mar 2007
just to let u no noone uses the word silly anymore, it is kinda old person- ish

Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Wow! I love this story! That was such a great chapter!

You are such a great writer and it was very good, even though it wasn't beta-ed.

I will help beta, if you want. I know how much it sucks when you have your betas, well, stop beta-ing.

If you want to contact me or whatever, just look in my profile and contact me that way. I'm just too lazy to sign in now.

Keep on writing!

Giggiling Like A Madman: Ashley x3

HumbleGoddess- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Oooh!! Pick me! I love your story, and I'm almost always free. I would love to beta your story. Just let me know!! -Goddess

Jarakuheart- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Ahhhhhhh! I already can't wait for the next chapter! You really don't need betas. There was only one or two errors, and they were not really big ones...But i loved this chapter and I can't wait to see Sesshoumaru's side of the story! Good work!

Jupe- Sat 17 Mar 2007
You don't know how loudly I squealed when I saw this was updated. D:

If you ever, EVER need a beta for anything that's not a lemon, feel free to drop me a line.

....That is all. -feeling rather bubbly herself-

Ness- Sat 17 Mar 2007
Im glad you updated... When will you be hable to do so again... Im glad kags and sess are starting to get somewhere but is it possible to speed it up just a little... i dont mean have them go strait to the sack... i would like to see just a little more interaction between them.... and i think inu should also get whats coming to him the jealousy is stupid of him. he should be made to see how he is pushing kags away with his antics... (kags should most definately tell him off more instead of sitting him all the time)... well cant wait for the update... later

Bina- Sat 17 Mar 2007
I love the new chappie and it doesn't look like it has more than one or two mistakes, nothing major really, but in the future if you need a beta I'd be honored if you chose me.

Just Unique- Wed 21 Feb 2007
Congrats! Your fic is reaaaaally nice! I'm 15, just as Kagome here, and no "interesting events" have happed to me.. yet. Oh well, still i'm happy this way :D I hope you update soon! You know fans don't like to wait for long hehe
Good Luck! ^___^

onyx_1917- Tue 30 Jan 2007
This fanfic is so amazing!!!!!!
So I'm pleased to inform you I rated you a ten in everything. Please, I hope you update soon. And I'll be reading it again because you captured the emotions so many people wanted to see in both Kagome& Sesshomaru. :)

dark anbu- Fri 26 Jan 2007
ooo! i love this story!!^^ this is also on fanfiction.com is it not? plez contunue

lu- Thu 25 Jan 2007
I have been reading one of your writings (The Diary) have notice you have update yet. You write very well and I like that story very much please update soon.

Sassy- Wed 24 Jan 2007
Oh man, three day of reading this story and all i get is an incomplete. Is it done yet?!!! Sorry, dumb question. PLease finish soon.

Tana-san- Wed 24 Jan 2007
I am very happy you've returned. I looked on other sites too and was just so pleased to get over the ice storm in the midwest, get electric back,my own bed AND computer back online to see how all my favorite stories updated. Now I can be content to just bask in my Sesshoumaru and Kagome world. I really like this story alot. I thought when I first started reading it [way back when] that it would lose momentum and intrigue, but you still got it! I really like your work and I'm hoping that you'll have more time to continue, though, I understand you DO have a life other than this. I am disabled and rarely leave my house, so you writers mean ALOT to me and I am so happy to watch you grow in talent. I'll be looking forward to the updates. Thank you for continuing and not leaving it like a Alfred Hitchcock story. He never gave real endings or even reasonable endings.

ashley- Wed 24 Jan 2007
omgiloveyourstory!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz hurry up and make more plzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzplzpzlpzlpzlpzlpzlplz and thank! its 12 am now and i statrtrd this at 10pm last night soon as i goy home i came right here and read it so make the next one fast plzz and 1 question do u make actaul books cuz if u dont im gunna flabergasted! ^______^ thank u 4 making this story i love it so much i could cry...mostly cuz i want to print it but i moslt likely wont have e-nuf papper T-T

hannah- Wed 24 Jan 2007
I've read a ton of fanfiction and I have to say that 'The Diary' is one of the best. It's well written and enjoyable. You've done a great job and I hope to read more of it soon. Good luck.

Sicilia- Mon 22 Jan 2007
i love it please update soon, this was such a great story that I read it all in one day. from chapter chapter 1 to 19

Sicilia- Mon 22 Jan 2007
i love it please update soon

Chicke- Mon 22 Jan 2007
Great story. i hope you update soon, i loved it so far


swtdrm01- Mon 22 Jan 2007
I love your story and I hope you get to update soon.

lady fairy goth- Mon 22 Jan 2007
please update soon

wackywisher- Wed 17 Jan 2007
Great story!! Can't wait to see what's next!!

Jenny- Wed 27 Dec 2006
I really wish you'd continue this fic. This one and the others you are working on. I really like your style in writing. Sometimes Kagome's diaries can be a little weird, but I suppose that's intentional. Anyway, I hope you'll continue soon!

Jenn- Tue 12 Dec 2006
GREAT STORY UPDATE SOON!!!!!

magnificentchaos- Mon 04 Dec 2006
hey I love this story you should get an update really soon yea lol

blackrose55- Thu 30 Nov 2006
Please tell me your still wrinting this story. I love it, and realy hope you continure it.

mikogirl19- Fri 24 Nov 2006
please please please please keep writting! i really enjoy this story and i am sad that its on hold. this is an amazing story and im in love with it. please keep writing

DkAngelAnime- Sun 19 Nov 2006
i luv you fic just to let you know. but in that one chapter where kags and sesshomaru are in the medow, and she's in his lap, i got that exact picture of that and i wanna send it to you, unless u already got it, mastly cause its exactly how u dicribed it.

Laryssa S.- Tue 14 Nov 2006
plz plz plz tell me u will finish this it is so good (i know u hear this alot, but i couldnt help myself) I am hooked on this story plz finish it it is great and i (and im sure many others) LOVE THIS STORY

anime pixie- Mon 23 Oct 2006
wonderful story! i love your stories. the way that you write is simply amazing. i can't wait for the next chapter to be posted. hopefully that will be soon. happy writing!

amaia- Sat 21 Oct 2006
I really enjoy all your fanfics, even if you´re a non-english speaker you still write incredibly well.Nevertheless, this is . to me your best fanfic, go on with this one, it´s really good

Ava 365- Wed 18 Oct 2006
Well, how do I start. I've been reading some of your fanfics in adultfanfiction and I couldn't stop reading. Then I found out about this web and I began to read "Diary" just yesterday. I just wanted to tell you I loved it, all the descriptions are so realistic I can actually see them. And writing the story from different points of view is amazing, just as if I was there, watching. I just can't wait to read the next chapter. And...why not say it, I CAN'T WAIT TO READ ABOUT THEIR FIRST SEXULA ENCOUNTER!!!!

Hope to read from you soon!

Siruka- Sun 15 Oct 2006
I love it,and the entire plot you have created and I really hope you update soon.

poya- Wed 04 Oct 2006
Hey love this story i can't wait for another chapter i just love it!

Inu_Tai_Youkai_Gurl- Tue 03 Oct 2006
i luv ur story! don't stop, please continue! Lots Of Luv 4 tha story!

Steph- Fri 29 Sep 2006
Awesome story. The way you played Sess and Kagome getting to gether is just cool. To have a relationship right under everyones noses. I cant wait to see how Inuyasha finds out.

AnitaThePapermaster- Thu 28 Sep 2006
hey awesome chapter, i hope you update soon

Jackia- Mon 25 Sep 2006
LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDD this chapter!! It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the last line 2!!!

Jackia- Mon 25 Sep 2006
LOVEDDDDDDDDDDDD this chapter!! It was so good!!!!!!!!!!!!
Loved the last line 2!!!

Risa- Mon 25 Sep 2006
Excellent!! I laughed so hard at all the sit commands. I loved how you involved the whole group in an intelligent conversation.

Yuki Asao- Mon 25 Sep 2006
WOW! this is a phenomenal story!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon!!!

karla- Mon 25 Sep 2006
yay! please update soon!!!!! i must know what happens to kagome and sesshoumaru haha!!!

Badgrl74- Mon 25 Sep 2006
Great chapter! Loads of info on the Naraku plan. I look forward to seeing everything unfold. 'till next time, cheers!

Rinseternalsoul- Sun 24 Sep 2006
Looks like Sesshomaru is moving in and to hell with what Inuyasha thinks about it! I'm thrilled that he's staying the night in their camp. I can't wait to see how things go from here. Great chapter!

wynter89- Sat 23 Sep 2006
Das ist groß!! i love it... like wow... it totally blew me away... I will continue to read your writings until the day i die... (hope that doesnt sound korny.) It is verying fasinating... utterly fasinating...

good luck
i hope you update soon

Cochrann- Fri 22 Sep 2006
nice chapter!

kagsbigfan- Fri 22 Sep 2006
Thsi chapter was hilarious! I remember "If a beak could pout, Jaken did." and "Jaken looked thunderstruck. he couldn't turn green..." I love this story. Update soon!
PS: Are you going to continue Passion soon?

swtdrm01- Fri 22 Sep 2006
I love the story! Thank you for updating. I hope to see another chapter soon.

kat- Fri 22 Sep 2006
hehe that was fun... poor inu having to deal with his brother being in camp... okay so i don't really pity him but still...

update soon can't wait for more

Beckie- Fri 22 Sep 2006
You made my day with this update. I love this story. I read it for the second time last week and caught some editing changes or things I missed the first time. Those first chapters reminded me me why I thought it was a comedy to begin with. Sesshoumarus wide range of thoughts and emotions as he read her diary were so funny. I hope you tell us what is going through the Northern Lords mind too. He is an interesting OC. Ireally enjoyed the chapter. Now...for Sesshoumaru's appearance in Divine Concubine....soon please.

Twilight Garden- Fri 22 Sep 2006
that was a nice long chapter. i lke how you stick to the timeline of the story but add in all of the other details. it makes it more believeable. loved it update soon.

Demon Slayer Kai (I wanna change that! It's now Yu- Fri 22 Sep 2006
HA!! I finally go back on a single spark, and there you are with another story! And the first chapter is amazing! Great job! i'm gonna read more now! Oh and I changed my name, Demon Slayer Kai, to Yuki Asao. Bye!

Diana- Fri 22 Sep 2006
WAH! I LOVE YOU! love the story can't wait to see more! ta ta for now!

Flightoffancy- Fri 22 Sep 2006
Well this was certainly a long and lovely chapter. I love the way Sesshomaru manages to keep weaving his immediate and pressing matters together with a chance to see Kagome. So romantic.

Poor Inuyasha, he tries to protect but it seems like Kagome has to protect everybody from him more than she is protected. Jaken will never be the same, he is forever tortured and abused. Thats why we love him.

I most especially love the way you have wound your story around the anime. It's like watching it all over again but with a whole different perspective. A more dimensional feel. We understand the characters more and feel more of what motivates them. It is just interwoven so cleverly, I am impressed and look forward to every chapter.

THis is why I understand your uncontrollable passion to write for other stories sometimes, It probably gives you a chance to freshen your ideas for this story. But if you ever let this happen again I promise you will be hunted down and punished.

Til next time, Deb.

InutaiyoukaiNichne- Fri 22 Sep 2006
just wanted to tell you that i loved the chapter and am waiting with baited breath for the next one. later Nichne

Kori- Fri 22 Sep 2006
Of course you know.. I loved this part and I've been waiting for an update..

Squee! A whole chapter with our favorite demon lord. I would love to give you a long gushing review but.. I'm a bit on the tired side.. I do apologize for that and just know, I loved this chapter.

whitedragon235- Sun 10 Sep 2006
NO! NO! AND NO!!!!! I will not be satisfied with a cliffy ending!!! It took me forever to get this far, what whith school and what-not!!! Only to discover its not completed!!! >_ And I just KNOW its Sesshomaru showing up!!!! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME SO!?!?!?

D.Demon- Wed 06 Sep 2006
Awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome!!!
Please update soon! I havent read a fic this good sence 'Destened for Me' wich is sayen someting! again PLEASE UPDATE!!! XD

D.Demon- Wed 06 Sep 2006
Awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome awsome!!!! PLEASE UPDATE this is the best Sess/Kag fic I've read sence 'Destened for me' and thats sayen somen!!! Love your fic XD

Meemoo--ox- Sat 02 Sep 2006
Omg.. Cliffhangers suck...haha but yeah PLEASE. update sooooon!.

DreamBeamz- Sat 26 Aug 2006
Aw, you shouldn’t neglect your term paper and I survived your writing the other fandom, lol, so it’s totally fine, no worries. Especially since you always give superb chapters!! I do hope that Kagome sees Sesshomaru soon though!

swtdrm01- Sun 20 Aug 2006
I love the story. Please update soon. I can't wait for the actual lemon between our two favorite couple.

Ja ne.

karla- Mon 07 Aug 2006
please update soon!!!!!!!!!! i am dying to know who showed up! was it sesshoumaru??????

Rouge Summers- Mon 07 Aug 2006
Wow...Sesshoumaru? -hopeful voice-

kagsbigfan- Mon 07 Aug 2006
She's acting like love-sick puppy and i can't blame her. Update soon!

Kiashi- Sun 06 Aug 2006
HOW COULD YOU STOP IT RIGHT THERE!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Sun 06 Aug 2006
I really liked it update soon

Mischevious21- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Yay!! Thanks for finally updating!! lol. But yea, I love it- so please continue asap!!.. But do the more important things first, or course ;) lol.

**jessika**

Destiny- Sun 06 Aug 2006
OH MY GOD THAT WAS SO GOOD!!!!!!! KEEP GOING PLEASE!!!!!

sesshsmate101- Sun 06 Aug 2006
OO! I'm so glad you updated! I can't wait till you do so again!

Rinseternalsoul- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Boo hoo. No Sesshomaru in this chapter. Well, I can't complain too much. I did enjoy it, even without an apearance from Fluffy. Thanks for the update!

tsnc327- Sun 06 Aug 2006
I love this story. I was so excited to see that you had updated. I like the way you make it seem like Kagome brought his emotions out, not the way people usually do. Most authors make it seem like she changed him but really, she's just bringing out the best in him and making him complete. You should be proud of this story. It's rare that authors are able to combine both the original plot with their own vision. You did that, and rather successfully I might add. Congratulations. Let me know when you update again! Great job!!

Tiffany

Menna- Sun 06 Aug 2006
*gasp* Lol. Baaaad Mrs....Sessys mom! Hahaha!

clavira- Sun 06 Aug 2006
... you can't be serious. Stopping now would just be plain cruel...
but you did (NOOOOO) and I hope you update soon. because I'm really, really curious what happened /is going to happen - as far as I know you the next chapter is really important for the plot.

Update please?

sendosha- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Gods, I can´t wait until the next chapter and the appeareance of the Shichinintai, especially the poisen mixer (forgot his name) and his attack against Kagome. I´m dieing to see how you will write the scene with Sesshoumaru. The day in the madow from Sesshoumarus POV was just so incredible; I´ve never wished to be Kagome so much before. You are really an amazing writer. Please, keep going.

sleepingChickenNugget- Sun 06 Aug 2006
I have one word for you: GAH.

...


evilevilevilevilevilevilevil(update soon)

Silver Fang- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Did I ever tell you how much I love this fic. It's Awesome. And very entertaining how Kagome goes from gushing to being angry at Sesshomaru, but since the Meadow incident her anger is become less. Which is very good. Anyway please update soon I can't wait to read more.

Cochrann- Sun 06 Aug 2006
Yay to neglecting term papers!! That was a nice little chapter and the whole time I'm reading it I want to shake Kagome and tell her "Stop freaking, it's only been three days!" Besides he's probably trying to find the perfect gift and perfection doesn't happen over night. =)

thehotty- Thu 03 Aug 2006
It was really good. You should update again soon! Keep up the good work!

Sakura- Thu 03 Aug 2006
omg... i love it more wvery chapter, update soon!!!

squeakysneakers- Thu 27 Jul 2006
i love this fic! i really liked the part in chp 11 where inuyasha is staring at trees. poor trees! lol. you must update soon! i love you forever!!!

chicks- Mon 24 Jul 2006
your story is so awesome!!!!!!!! its so flip-en great!!!!!!!! you HAVE TO WRITE TONS AND TONS OF MORE CHAPTERS!!!!!!!! you rock! i think...no i KNO your my favorite author! and not just at this site but at all of the others!!!

Mischevious21- Tue 18 Jul 2006
OMFG!!! This is the best Sess/Kagome fic I have ever read! Yea, Sess gets a little ooc, but not much.. And its like something that could really happen in Inuyasha.. Almost anyway. lol. But yea, I love it- and PLEASE update soon!!
**Jessika**

Chaoswingdragon- Mon 17 Jul 2006
I absolutely love your story!! I can’t wait to get started on the other things you’ve written, the anticipation is killing me. Keep up your excellent work!!~Chaos

Amanda- Sun 16 Jul 2006
YAY for new the new chapter!!! =D omgosh! once again great work! you're the best =D

sesshsmate101- Sat 15 Jul 2006
Oooo...so kawaii and mysterious!

_Charlotte_Sometimes_- Wed 12 Jul 2006
I just love your story. It was is wonderfully written. It made me laugh at times. It is wonderful update soon

Crazar- Wed 12 Jul 2006
Ok...let's be honest...This has got to be the best fanfic I have ever had the pleasure of reading...and I have read a lot! Keep up the outstanding work...And in my opinion...It should have came in first!

Eriiica- Wed 12 Jul 2006
yeah..your story is good, very good, haha.... mang...to be honest..I COULDNT STOP READING IT..lmao ...awwwwwww no more chapters.......make more?! please...lmfao...damn...okay then...remember make more :P

denny- Tue 11 Jul 2006
this is a great story wonderfuly done. im so glad i came upon. ever since i started it i cant stop readin it. again great and and so well done. i hope you update soon.^^

sesshsmate101- Tue 11 Jul 2006
MAN! I really loved that chapter! It was really funny!!

SIlverstar871- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Wonderfully done chapter! *applauds* l enjoyed reading the recent update, CiraArana-sama. ^__^
Aww....they had a sweet, tender exchange there!! How kay-ute!!!
I simply cannot wait until the next fantastic addition to this story of yours. Keep it upppp!!!

kagsbigfan- Mon 10 Jul 2006
That was so romantic. Can't wat for the next chapter so update soon!

Monkeygurl184- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Yay new chapter!! Sesshomaru is so adorable! Loved the chapter, keep up the good work, and update soon please!!!

media- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Jesus...if you dont write a lemon after this soon then you're a tease. A big bad tease. ^_^
Wonderful chapter. More!

45cats- Mon 10 Jul 2006
I really do love this story. For some reason I thought you were trying to think of a way to end it the last time I reviewed. (It was a bad week; I was confused about a lot of things). But...did I say I love this story? Really.

Kanela- Mon 10 Jul 2006
OHMYGOD!
you're back! I thought you dead, honestly, and almost cried because I would never get to read how this amazing story ends! But you're fine and back! yay! *runs around*

Oh I totally laughed my butt off when I read the part where Sesshoumaru finds the new diary and thinks it ruined his style. HAHAHA! Honestly, where do you find such incredibly amusing words?
Ok, I'll better go now. It's 3 on the morning....hehe! just couldn't stop reading.

Keep it up!! I love you!!

Striking Falcon- Mon 10 Jul 2006
Ack! This is so cute!! I just love your chapters! Sesshou's so bleeding cute it's almost unfair. Poor Kagome. You know, I hat a grandpa like that. lol. Oh, but great chapter!

sesshsmate101- Mon 10 Jul 2006
GRRRRRR!!! I am so going to kill you! Then im going to bring you bak to continue he story! Stupid ciffy maker person! grrr.....lmao..jk...i really like this story! im hooked!

Leslie- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I am sorry to hear that our darling Sess was giving you such a hard time. If he was wanting to throw Kag down on the ground and have his way with her, you are a meany for stopping him. Let the demon have his way. Seriously, great chapter. I am glad that they were able to talk and get some things resolved. I have a feeling that our darling Koga is going to get his ass kicked. Why was Kirara the one to come and get Kag and not one of the others (Inuyasha)? Can't wait till you update.
Leslie

Rinseternalsoul- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I know that I've read this before, but I'm reviewing again anyway, because I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!!! YAY! So sweet! It makes me giggle like a schoolgirl! LOL!

KT- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I know there's a lot of OOCness here but it's just so hilarious that no one would have it any other way.

Those diseases were quite funny BTW. If anyone's curious, there is a disease called Beri beri (Vit. C deficiency), and otite, which in english is Otitis. It's an ear infection basically affecting the outer, middle or inner ear. I dunno about antitypum though. maybe Kagome's grampa meant typhus?

Anyway, good job on this fic. I was actually embarrassed for Kagome while reading her diary entries. LOL. And Sesshoumaru is just too cute!!!

sesshsmate101- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I really like this story! But I wonder wat will put him in the situation that he wats her...hmmm...guess ill have to continue to chapter 3...lmao

Renee- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Oh please update soon...the fic is getting too good to stop! ^_^

psycobookcollector- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Love it, that's all I can say. :-) Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Maggie

Deadly Teardrops- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Hi, good to see you back and writing! I was so happy to see that you updated few of your fics. It's been so long since I read anything interesting on anywhere on the net! ^_^ Anyway, I hope that you're going to keep up with the good work on your fics as you usually do.

anyway... Happy summer!

ja ne!

DT

Beckie- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I love this fiction. It is such a contrast to your other that was driven by lust. This one reeks of cuteness and innocence and I love them Both!

Risa- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I loved it!!!

Risa- Sun 09 Jul 2006
I loved it!!!

Kat- Sun 09 Jul 2006
okay so the diseases had me in stitchesm, especially the hammock one, for once i'd like to be diagnosed with something as nice as that. but no i get neurocardiogenic syncope and internstial cystitis and other fun diseases like that, you know diseases you can't even say...
okay enough complaining
i'm so happy you updated and it was such a good chapter, can't wait for more fluff.

amy- Sun 09 Jul 2006
this is the most romantic chappie i've read..i know sess is oc but who knows what's going in his mind , right?
update again soon!

Tsuki Angel- Sun 09 Jul 2006
bravo as always; loved it

Sei- Sun 09 Jul 2006
just.... incredible. absolutely incredible. this chapter made my day so much better! (considering i just got stung by two bees and had a really bad day.) i love this story so much @_@

Rouge Summers- Sun 09 Jul 2006
YAY! You updated. I love this story so keep it up!

Brandi- Sun 09 Jul 2006
this story is very very very fustrating...i love it soo much!! but the way its written it seems that for every 2 updates only one thing happens..i still cannot stop reading it tho!!! i like how now your making the way kagome remembers conversations differ from what sesshoumaru remembers.
i must say i dont like how childish kagome acts when she writes in her diary, she seems almost dumb blonde..yet when sesshoumaru talks about her she can carry out an intelligent conversation without getting all giggly and dumb. it seems to me like you have almost created two different people (diary-kagome, and sesshou-version-kagome)
i still enjoy this story and i cannot wait till sesshoumaru begins his courting (i love that word)
-brandi

Sesshy-Sama- Sun 09 Jul 2006
YEY!!!!! MY FAVORITE AUTHOR IN THE WHOLE WORLD! W00T! Well, you already have my e-mail address, Nakita_the_catassian@yahoo.com

I put a storey on here. I hope you like it! It's called, A Demon and A Priestess! Read and Review it please! I love this story almost as much as I love Passion!!!!!!! ^_^

Well, Gotta go!

Love ya!

Sesshy-Sama

Cochrann- Sun 09 Jul 2006
Awesome chapter...update soon!!

Monkeygurl184- Wed 05 Jul 2006
Oh my gosh, your story is one of the best ones around. I'm enjoying it so much and can't stop reading it. The plot is so original and i really feel that Sesshomaru and Kagome aren't acting out of character at all. In fact, i would believe that this could actually happen in the anime. Keep up the fantastic job. I'm looking forward to your next chapter so update soon!! ^.^

mizunosora- Wed 05 Jul 2006
PLz PLZ PLZ update soon!

Silvry- Sat 01 Jul 2006
I started reading The Diary like, 4 ish days ago; and love it~

Very cute how Sesshomaru becomes like an teenage boy with a secret crush but not to secret. And Kagome's dreams of him, teh hot. I love the scene in the meadow, and how he asked to court her! Perfect choicing of words.

I can;t wait for your next chapter! Oh, and if you ever need a beta, or help with a scene due to writers block, I wouldn't mind helping~

tsnc327- Thu 29 Jun 2006
I love your story. Truely! Its amazes me how well it fits in with the series. It's good to have a writer that didn't just take over the series and seemingly switch the events to fit their story. You obviously know the series and did very good in writing a story that could have actually happened within the show! All I have to say is GREAT JOB AND KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK! I'm dying to see what happens next!

Eskara- Thu 29 Jun 2006
EEPY! I found myself being a little fan-girl at Sesshoumaru's ways of "wooing" ^.^ You, m'dear, are a fantastic writer. And I voted for this story too! tehehe

45cats- Thu 29 Jun 2006
I read this (again), and this would really be a good place to stop. It begins with the lost diary, ends with the new lost diary ... it's kind of poetic. I mean, the story did what it was supposed to, ne?

Oh; plus it's titled 'The Diary'. All in one nice little package. I love it just the way it is.

Karu moonlight shadow- Thu 22 Jun 2006
please review I LOVE THIS AND SO FAR GIVE IT A TEN! HURRY UPDATE ASAP!

liz- Thu 22 Jun 2006
T_T please update soon i weely weely love your storyT_T

JeeringSmiles- Thu 22 Jun 2006
no way!!! THATS WHERE YOU STOPPED!!!! THATS NOT FAIR!! *pout*
just when sesso and kags get together you have to go and not update!!! FINE BE THAT WAY!!!
im kidding- im kidding- your the wonderful writer with all the wonderful ideas and the ability TO update. i just hope you do it soon because i love this story and i love ur writing...u also need to update passions...that ones REALLY GOOD!
-brandi

Danielle- Wed 21 Jun 2006
Great story. I really hope you update soon! I love reading about their relationship.

liz- Tue 20 Jun 2006
OMFG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^______________^ YOUR FIC IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!

45cats- Mon 19 Jun 2006
I was so pleased to see you had posted a revision, not because it needed revising, but because it indicated you were going to continue with this story. I like the way you write. You could end this one where it is, I suppose. Sort of like it was the end of one story and, (maybe), the beginning of another.

Anyhow ... when I checked to see if I had ever left you a review I found that I hadn't. *sorry* I read this a couple of months ago and thought it was awesome.

English may be your second language, but you have better grammar and spelling than most of the people that write fanfics. Don't let anyone tell you differently.

I'm afraid I'm not a very reliable reviewer, I read too quickly, and forget who I read. What makes it worse is that I read on so many different sites, I can't remember; well, I just get mixed up.

I like Passion quite a bit too. I hope you get this. I tried to e-mail myself a test letter and it didn't work. Thanks for the stories.

karasu ( It translates to crow....don'rt ask...)- Wed 14 Jun 2006
Awwww! I love your story!! Oh my god that's so sweet! I just..oh my god....i just am soo touched right now...a little wiered ne? oh well, but i mean your story is just so well-written, and nothing's accidentally OOC, just, please, whatever you do don't stop writing. Oh, by the way, are you a proffecinal writer? Stupid question never mind....just update...please....i don't care if it's soon, just update!

()()
(-.-)
(")(") ------------- Mr. Bunny!

tiny- Sun 28 May 2006
KYAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!! SO KAWAIII!!!!
i am in love with this story!!!
*swoons* if only sesh was real..
* sighs dreamily* im a hopless romantic and im seriously like a rabid fan now. iv read the last chapter THREE TIMES!!!!!!!!!* shrugs* i couldent help it. i was waitingfor him to ask her and now he did!!!! *squeals like crazy schoolgirl* shes so lucky!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*clears throat* any who im hear to say i love this story,i hope u update soon and that i am going to nominate you!!!!!!!!!!!
for romance and love!!!!!!!
*sighs dreamily again* well if u need any good reveiws or some ideas feel free to e-mail me!!!!!!
im always on the internet wehnim not doin anything else!!!
so catch ya l8er
ja ne
tiny

karla- Sun 21 May 2006
YAY!!!!! an update! i love this story! is it posted anywhere else?...one of thse days i am going to remember this site instead of googling you're story all the time.. lol please update soon!!

AyashiChan- Fri 19 May 2006
Your writing is superb!! I just feel shivers run down my spine evrytime I click next to know what happened next. Please post an update soon. . .

liz- Thu 18 May 2006
OMG!!!!!!!!!! LOL LOVE TOTALLY SUCKS ^O^ great job i totally LOVE LOVE LOVE your story ^____________^

SilentKunoichi- Wed 17 May 2006
PAMS(Please add more soon)

thehotty- Tue 16 May 2006
OH!!!! I really like your story! One of the best! Hurry up and update! I can't wait for the next chapter! It's just so good. It keeps me coming back for more... Which is saying something, seeming as a story only holds my intrest for 5 days... XD! Keep up the wonderful work!
~*thehotty*~

HallucinatingDreams- Sat 13 May 2006
A job well done! It's certainly no wonder why you won an award. In fact, I think this story deserves more than just one, and I'd give you another one, except I don't have one to give. Maybe I should make one...

How about: Best Sesshoumaru and Kagome Pairing Fanfiction, Most Creative Plot Fanfiction or Best Depiction of Characters' Emotions?

Just kidding. :)

If I did make those awards though, you'd absolutely positively have a great shot at winning all three. I look forward to your update.

Sabrina Usagi- Fri 12 May 2006
I love your story and I'm glad you won too. I think chapter 20 was excellent and breath-takingly awsome ((I like the word)) I hope to see chapter 21 and I am sure it will be another great addition to your story.

Piper- Fri 12 May 2006
I love this story! Though, I think Kagome's friends should find out soon, because she is going to have a hard time meeting Sesshoumaru now.

Silverstar871- Thu 11 May 2006
oh wow! Awesome story! You've captured every character's emotions PERFECTLY! Keep up the superb work!

LtSonya- Wed 10 May 2006
Woohoo! We got some lip action going on here. This story is really starting to move now (not counting dreams - those technically aren't real).

I like how you switch from Kagome's writing in the diary to Sesshomaru's point of view. It's different and works for your story.

The beginning was a nice break from the 'Kagome and Sesshomaru' moments. We had a chance to see everyone else, which also helps give your story a broader scope and feel real. You didn't ignore the others and it was a great lead into Kagome's anger at Inuyasha. And of course, her first real 'alone' moment with Sesshomaru. They are just too cute - really two opposite people but trying to understand the other. It was fun watching them communicate and breaking through the barriers. Though I loved how Kirara came to get Kagome and she didn't jump into attack mode. I thought that was interesting - demons seem to be more in tune than humans. It also added Kirara as a secondary character than just someone in the background.

- LtSonya

LtSonya- Wed 10 May 2006
No, I haven't forgotten about you! Life has left little time for fanfiction. Congrats on the award! You must feel so pleased.

What I liked about this chapter was how you handled the forgiveness. You didn't have Kagome start crying or trying to prove her love like so many other stories. Instead, you tied it in with the actual storyline. I was actually pleased with your explanation of why Sesshomaru was so easily caught off guard by Naraku. Personally, there has to be some reason why he was captured. Oh, and I thought it was hysterical that Sesshomaru was eavesdropping!

Kagome was great - so caught up in what's happening and her feelings are natural and so is her response. You can see how she cares, especially for Sesshomaru, but is unsure of how to proceed.

Nice job!
- LtSonya

zackire- Wed 10 May 2006
totally loved it!!

Cochrann- Tue 09 May 2006
This was an awesome chapter! I'm so glad you're finally moving things along in the story. It was so cute when Sesshoumaru asked Kagome if he could court her...I practically squealed! I'm really excited to read the next chapter which I'm expecting if it's like the rest of the story should be Sesshoumaru's recounting of what just happened. I'm just soooo excited...I practically can't wait!!

wynter89- Tue 09 May 2006
like always you do amazing work... i love every single chapter you have ever writen... i really loved the past two chapters. lol. i loved how you put Kagome into trouble, but then again she got out of it pretty fast and with Sesshomaru courting her. ; )
as Kagome has said, Sesshomaru can be sweet, even if he doesnt mean to. i bet you put a lot of time and effert into your writings and it has paid off. i can say this "you ARE an Amazing author!!!" and i love reading everything you have writen.
keep up the great work!
good luck
i hope you update soon.
(no pressure)

Rinseternalsoul- Tue 09 May 2006
Yay! Congratulations on your award. You really deserve it. The Diary and Passion are both excellent stories. I love them both.

This chapter was great. I sooooo loved when he came to her in the clearing. It was sweet that he pulled her into his lap and waaayyy sexy when he started to lose control! Nice job. I look forward to more!

Rinseternalsoul

Rouge Summers- Tue 09 May 2006
Ah, delightful as always.

kawaii_neko_youkai- Tue 09 May 2006
I wonder if your gonna put the band of seven it this one? Very Interesting story, thanks for the 'passion' update and hope you update that one soon, dying to know what is going on next

keep on writing
:)

Kawaii_neko_youkai- Tue 09 May 2006
ooh! Very interesting story, Are you going to put the Band of Seven part in it? (like the episodes etc.) thanks for the update of your other story 'Passions' hmm i wonder what happens with that story...hmm!

keep on writing :D awesome story

Risa- Mon 08 May 2006
First off, congratulations on your wins. I am truly happy for you.
I love the turn of events- thank kami. Their interactions is sooo exciting-truly. I love the way I smile and the joy I felt when I read this. I'm glad your back and I' m looking forward to the next chapter.

Yohko- Mon 08 May 2006
Great chapter!!! I really love it! Congrats for winning!!!

Jaraku- Mon 08 May 2006
Yeah! Another chapter. I liked this one. it was so sweet. Keep up the great work!

Leather_Wings- Mon 08 May 2006
Wow, I love your story! (and am totally happy that you got third, though I think you should have gotten first) NEwayz, update soon!

(I'm saying that as encouragement, not in a 'rush' kind of way. there's no reason hurry things through.) Aannndd... I'm babbling. Sorry.

Good Luck,
-Leather Wings

clavira- Mon 08 May 2006
I'm really glad that you've posted another update so fast - I would have died from not-knowing-what's-gonna-happen-next!
I think you have a great writing style: the diary-entries make me able to see how exited Kagome is and I think everybody can recognize the feelings you describe (even if it's not a demonlord who is the reason behind them...)
I also think that you described Sesshoumarus character very well. He didn't go from "kill Kagome" to "love Kagome" over night and he actually had a... (for lack of better word) reason to... to want to mate her.

I still think you need to cover the events from both POVs, because I didn't really understand some things: did Kagome give him 'permission' to court her, did he say that he loves her? And just what did Kags tell him while she apologized?
Well, it's probably going to take some more conversations until she falls in love with him (pleeease, don't make them fall in love with each other without them actually having some real conversations; some ff's make it seem as if they fall in love, marry/mate, get children/pups/hanyous and die happy without getting to know each other)

Hopefully you can understand the babbling of a happy reviewer (whose first language is NOT English) and update soon

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