| HEHE Sesshomaru has to go through the torture of trying on clothes. I Love this story please update soon!!!!!
LordSesshomaruLover16- Tue 20 May 2008
haha makes me laugh lol funny shit hojo a threat lmao this is so funny and the hogging the video game thats funny to hahahahahaha *burst gut laughing*
i love this story its so funny keep up the great work update soon
LordSesshomaruLover16
rowdysgirl- Sun 18 May 2008
| I think this chapter was cute. I'm still laughing. I mean, the vision of Sesshoumaru sitting on the floor in front of a TV playing video games is a hoot!
Jess- Sun 18 May 2008
Aw! It was getting so good! I love it very much, it has a wonderful plot.
;D
Please update soon, it would make my day =D
danny- Sat 17 May 2008
| lol nice story PLEASE PUT THE NEXT ONE PLEASE
K,T,M- Sat 17 May 2008
| please update soon
HollyS- Tue 13 May 2008
OK IM REVIEWING!!! LOL J/k. I usually don't touch a story until it's ten chapters or better, but I have to say you really have my interest piqued here. Keep it up please, and email me when you update k?
Holls
Ai-chi-chan- Mon 12 May 2008
Oh wow!
I really like this story!
It's got a nice plot and I like how you kept them within their charaters.
Very nice.
Please update soon!
3
Ai
Solaira- Mon 12 May 2008
| I like what I have read so far....this promises to be a very good read.....I can't wait for your next update.
Solaira- Mon 12 May 2008
| I like what I have read so far....this promises to be a very good read.....I can't wait for your next update.
liv- Mon 12 May 2008
| please write more so good.
danny- Mon 12 May 2008
| lol funny but i think sesshoumaru might have killed kagome in the next since she called him that
Caerdin of Red- Mon 12 May 2008
First of all, hello! ^_^
Anyways, I just wanted to let you know that I'm officially hooked and its only been one chapter! Awesome job~ I can't wait for the next chapter. Also: in-characterness equals super happiness. XD
this is going to be interesing...you have a very good concept going, you just need a beta reader to help you. congrats on a good twist!!
FL
ps, if you are going to do an update list, please add me to it. my email is unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com.
please and thank you!!
Rowdysgirl- Mon 12 May 2008
| I think you're doing a good job of keeping him in character so far. He is such a stiff! I like the journal entries, I think you should keep them, they're funny!
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