| I can't really say that its a great story. But I do like it so far. Its different from all the stories out there. I just hope this story doesn't go as this korean drama I saw a couple of years ago. Just the whole situation with a brother and a sister in love reminded me of that drama. I kind of don't understand Sesshoumaru because he seems to like Kagome but why did he have to say all those things to hurt her like that? Is he trying to deny the feelings he has for her? Also Kagome is kind of acting out of character by cutting herself. From the way I see it she is a person who loves who she is and proud of it. She would never harm herself or anyone else. But then again it is your story. I just wanted to point that out. Don't get me wrong. I don't dislike your story. I'm still waiting to see how it goes before I decide that I like your story or not. Well I like it so far and keep up that good work! I can't wait for the next chapter!
sesshysbabygurl- Mon 05 Nov 2007
| Good job, More please.
Arielle langley- Mon 05 Nov 2007
| I dont get it whats up with the pic. Taking of the girls nude? Anywho great story keep it comin!
BeautifulDeception09- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| Goshness Love The Story ... Are You Going To Continue It??? You Realli Should! Great Story!
Gly- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| i love this, its different from other fics ive read, and its a great chapter, i wanna know what happens now, i hope you can update soon
sesshysbabygurl- Sun 04 Nov 2007
It's diffrent but I think thats why I like it. I have never read a story about siblings being in love and thoough it at first sounded kinda weird, I read it anyway and it was actually good, I can't wait for the update.
Maybe they aren't really brother and sister, like one or both were adobted or something. Just thinking out loud! Sorry. Anyway continue.
kagogirl- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| upload soon!!!
Arielle langley- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| N oh yeah i wanted to say that i like it bc it has a different twist to things. How sess n kags r siblings n how kags loves him. Thats so cool how u put it together. Keep it comin n please finish it.
| I love your story and can't wait to read more, so I hope you update asap please.
amp- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| plz dont stop moor plz
Arielle langley- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| K i love it! N u just had to stop it at such a good part ha. But please do continue it i love it thanx
frooker-scene- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| damn awsome fanfic. update soon :]
mikodark- Sun 04 Nov 2007
| I love this story! Can't wait to find out whats comes next. Keep writing!
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