hehe funny funny. i hope u update soon

interesting comparison to Romeo and Juliet. i like the beginning nicely and can't wait for more. Happy Thanksgiving if you life in the US!!

its good, great lead in chapter, hope it continues in the writting style it is at the momement. i love it k, keep up the good work, i know its annoying when people put up 'please update soon' cause you can only go as fast as you can. keep your imagination plotting the rest of the story. GOOD LUCK looking 4ward to the next chapter. cya

I'm not against your idea but you should just write your own summary instead of just switching some of Shakespeare's words. I'm sure it'll catch more attention that way and that way it'll actually be your own, more personalized story instead of a rewrite of something that's been done.

Well, I think that maybe Myoga would be a better priest, and Miroku could play Mercutio.....
As for Tybalt, I could see Naraku playing this role, and Kagura, Kanna, Kohaku could play the other members of the family. Inu no Taisho could play the father of Sesshoumaru while Ryukotsei (I'm not sure if that's spelt right) could play the father of Kagome.....
Anyways hope that helps...

OMG! I KNOW THIS!!!

Kay so.
-Mercutio ~> Shippo
-Rosaline ~> Kikyo

Make Naraku Kagome's Father, and Kagura her mother.

InuTaisho and Izayoi are kinda already Sesshou's.

And you can just make some random OC's for whatever other characters you might need. heh.

I can't wait to read this, update soon! :3

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