This was an awesome start. I actually can't wait for more. ^_^Ja ne!
Physical Graffiti- Thu 27 Sep 2007
I'm soooooo glad you updated, that makes me so happy, you can even see my expression through the computer. (>_)b The story keeps getting better! So far they're in character and it's a nice idea for a story. So keep up the good work!
(WORD OF THE DAY so)
sharilynn- Thu 27 Sep 2007
lol what a beginning,for real you are really good please keep writing
Sharilynn
lovesbooks16- Thu 27 Sep 2007
Great idea! love what I have read. I tried really hard not to do this but I couldn't. The drug penicillin is not used on a crashing patient. Penicillin is an antibiotic. Here are two drugs that might be used. One is Epinephrine (used as a cardiac stimulant, basically you are jump starting the heart) and the other is Isoproterenol (which is used in cardiac shock). If you email I can give you more information about either of those two drugs so that you can make an informed decision. Other than the drug, great story. Thanks for sharing.
It's good so far butone suggestion, PLEASE STOP BOLDING!!!
Please? It's so bright that it blinds me and i can barely read and enjoy your story, which good
so far.
Please update soon!
P.S. And Please, if at all possible, email me when you update at my email address.
Thanks
(BTW, the review before this one is useless so please delete it)
Physical Graffiti- Wed 26 Sep 2007
Woo! Pervs! This looks good. Yummy like a smoothies or something that degree. Smoooothie. :) Hope you update, because I just love people who update early, don't you?
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