i'm absloutely in love with this story. i must read more. please, update soon!
arielle langley- Sat 01 Mar 2008
i know that u have ur school n that ur busy with it but pleeeeeeease i beg of u update the story! Pleeeeeeease its soooo gooooood! Dont leave us hangin like that! N its been awhile to thanks
tina- Wed 23 Jan 2008
please continue with this fic i really like it and i really want to know how it ends.
Ashlyn- Mon 07 Jan 2008
ahhh! i hope sesshomaru gets there in time. i can't wait for the next chapter. this is a really awesome story!
NOOOOOOOO!!! I can't believe you left off at that point! I just started reading your fic today and the tension was built up... and then there were no more capters for me to read. I was very sad and upset. Anyway, it's an awesome story so far and I can't wait for the next installment. I hope that bastard Naraku gets what's comming to him. And then some! Now I'm going to have to go and read all of your other stories. Your style of writing is great. I like it a lot. I hope that school is going well for you and that you are not overly swamped with work. I know that is never a fun situation to be in. **shudders**. If you ever need some help or want to talk I'll be here. Ta ta for now! --Eddward
arielle langley- Thu 03 Jan 2008
U somehow managed to do it again! U left us hanging n wanting a hell of a lot more! Excellent job keep up the goood wrk n pleeeeeeease update asap please i beg of u! Please n thanks for not forgetting about us
Inusbabe- Thu 03 Jan 2008
I just found this story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
what the hell. U can't leave w/ just that! After waiting so long for an update we're left hanging!!! NO!!!! *sniff sniff* u're so evil. Please update soon. Naraku has to pay and Kagome doesn't deserve to be hurt anymore!
I'm loving your story! And it's not only the plot, but also the tiny details like the fragrances. And also the interaction between the characters. Very in character, very much appreciated. For some reasons, I kept thinking of l'eau par Kenzo for men when I think of Sesshoumaru! He is just SO sexy. Gawd.
Glad you liked my other new story too...honestly, I was not so sure as to how it will be received, given how diverse it is from my other baby "Love after Loss". Thank you very much and keep up the good work!
I totally agree about BONES. I never miss an episode. I really liked it when booths boss made bones kiss booth to get the christmas she wanted. lol.....anyway........I was wondering when naraku was gonna show up. I can't wait to see how he found her. I also like the fact that kags and sessh are so disfunctional right now. kagome thinks shes in love with him for showing her simple kindness. sesshoumaru likes her dispite the fact she drives him up the wall. its good for him to be challanged and brought down a few pegs! excitedly waiting for the new chapter. tilayha
Kaitlyn- Sun 23 Dec 2007
this is so awsome lets get an update
Alyana- Thu 29 Nov 2007
You kill me.
Seriously.
COME BACK! I NEED MORE DRU--I MEAN, CHAPTERS!
T___T
-is going through withdrawal again-
Alyana- Thu 29 Nov 2007
HOLFECKINGCRAP YOU LIVE!
0________0
I CRY RIVERS OF JOY, SERIOUSLY! I MISSED YOU SO MUCH! -sniffles-
I can totally relate to that school problem.
ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!
arielle langley- Thu 29 Nov 2007
Oh my god i cannot believe u just ended it right there this story is so good! Please please i beg of update asap n thanks for writing the story itself
TONI- Thu 29 Nov 2007
I LOVE THIS~
Ross- Fri 16 Nov 2007
Hi-ho-hum. This is an interesting story you've got here and, while not exactly flawless, reads well.
My only cautions would pertain to inserting ANs into the story--not only do they completely distrupt the flow, they're unprofessional. Your descriptions, while well-formed, sound awkward. Try reading these passages aloud, listening for how the words sound together.
All in all, however, it's a good story with an engaging plot--worth continuing, that is to say.
Yours,
Ross
just stumbled onto this one. i like the fact that Sesshoumaru is on his own and not all filthy rich in this one. he and inuyasha seem to tolorate one another well enough and the chemistry between him and kagome is evolving well.
looking forward to when you next update
tilayha
miki-chan- Tue 13 Nov 2007
Good Job. ^^ Just the other day in fact, I was wondering about this particular fic and when I went online you had posted! I was so excited! Thank you for the nice lengthy chapter and please update when you can.
-miki
I suppose I go home and sleep. That's really funny! xD
Sarah- Mon 12 Nov 2007
It's a good story. I like that Sasshoumaru isn't head over heals in lust with her the first chapter. And definately avoid Japanese... if people want to learn it, they can... but it ALWAYS interupts the flow of a story.
And... pink? saffron? ...is she colorblind???
Arielle- Mon 12 Nov 2007
Yeah ur back! Thanks for updating n not forgetting about us keep up the good work! N please dont give up on this story love it! Thanks
Tana-san- Mon 12 Nov 2007
I remember the first chapter of this fic. It was quite a long time ago and then I fell terribly ill and lost the title. I was really intrigued with the storyline as at that point in time I hadn't read anything like it. I'm happy to see that you are continuing with this fic. For one so young you have an amazing gift in writing. Keep up the good work. I am also impressed that you are putting school as a priority. Trust me when I say don't try to grow up too fast. Enjoy what you have left of your childhood because as soon as you leave it behind there's no turning back. If you think school is difficult and time consuming, wait until you have to go to work. My daughter's friends are all saying they should have listened to me because now their life is work, college and more work to keep the bills paid while the first job pays for college. A few others couldn't afford college and a home so they're working whatever job they can get to stay out on their own. Keep your writing skills. If it won't earn you any money then it's a fun and relaxing hobby. You show a great potential and I'll put you in my favorites. Take care and just hang in there. All will work itself out. You are in the age of technology and information is right at your fingertips. Trust your instincts. TTFN Jen
Arielle langley- Fri 05 Oct 2007
Oh my god what can i say? That was excellent! Please do continue the story! Loved it please keep up the good work!
Kaitlyn- Fri 21 Sep 2007
update soon
rowdysgirl- Fri 21 Sep 2007
i like it. i want more. soon. sorry about your parents.
Kaitlyn- Mon 17 Sep 2007
more plz
Alyana- Thu 06 Sep 2007
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARG! MORE! I NEED MORE! XD
Wow, there are actually Halo pants? Weird...
Well, you don't want sympathy, so, you have my support through your family situation or whatever you wish to refer to it as!
Lady Nya- Thu 06 Sep 2007
I enjoy your story. Looking forward to your next chapter. Frank Sinatra is a musical genius!
BrokenSouledPoetess- Thu 06 Sep 2007
Just a little tidbit of information if you didn't know. The term 'pwned' actually came from WoW. One of the programmers misspelled 'owned' when he was writing the software. I love G4TV!
kaitlyn- Wed 05 Sep 2007
i luv it
little.red- Wed 05 Sep 2007
Amazing, yet again. You have a real talent, can't wait to see where you go!
eternallove_495- Sat 01 Sep 2007
pleasae update soon.........
little.red- Sat 01 Sep 2007
amazing, breathtaking, detailed, brilliant, wonderful...(I could go on but eventually I'll run out of adjectyives and plus they'll start to sound wierd so I'll stop here)
Anyway, just thought you might want to know that I love your first chapter (and am looking forward to the second and all chapters after that) and plan to be an avid reader of this fic.
Happy typing!
mikiwashere- Fri 31 Aug 2007
Great job so far. I'm looking forward to more chapters. ^ . ^
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