omg update soon!! I love this story alot, infact its in my favorites section.
MidnightTimberWolf- Sun 07 Oct 2007
I love this, its totally different and has me jumping in my seat.... Update soon.....
kathy- Sun 30 Sep 2007
plz continue its a very good story i hope to read the next chapter soon
kathy- Sun 30 Sep 2007
plz continue its a very good story i hope to read the next xhapter soon
I Love Sessomaru AKA FLUFFY - SAMA- Tue 25 Sep 2007
Please continue when you have time:)
Tanya131- Tue 25 Sep 2007
you are making me cry here.....just reading this is making me cry and what do you do ......YOU STOP WRITING....so please write more
can't wait for you to update!
Seryu- Mon 24 Sep 2007
I must commend you. Only a few people have made me dislike Sesshomauru they way you have. What an asshole. Poor Kagome, let me guess she is pregnant. Please give her a happy life and make him suffer and regret being the prick he was with her. I mean eventhough he figured out that the bitch planned everything he still has sex with her. Oh! and what Kagome is suppose to take the plase of second mate to the bitch. Cannot wait for the next chapter!!
A-kay- Mon 24 Sep 2007
update very very soon
Asian Tomboy- Sun 23 Sep 2007
It was really insensitive of Sesshomaru to have sex with that bitch while Kagome is hurt.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Sun 23 Sep 2007
Oooh. I cant wait to see what happens. Will Kaogme knock the shit out of Sesshoumaru (as she should)? Or will he catch her and prison her in his home? I hope that Inuyasha will protect Kagome and let her stay with Kikyo and himself. Awesome chapter and cant wait for the next one to come out!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
cReaT1Ve- Sun 23 Sep 2007
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Sesshoumaru, you stupid asshole...Please update this soon!!!
And, if possible, make Sesshoumaru suffer.
*Evil Grin*
*Ahem*
Well, nice story add a new chapter soon
Asian Tomboy- Sun 23 Sep 2007
This chapter was great! But it was really insensitive of Sess to have sex with the bitchn even though Kagome was still sick.
Suicide- Wed 29 Aug 2007
Wow, that's pretty angsty. I like. lol.
Sakura- Mon 27 Aug 2007
Awesome keep up the good work!
Excellent fic, and presented well. Look forward to seeing it updated soon. Just a note, "Metal chains wrapped around her limps.", the word 'limps' should actually be 'limbs'. There are a few grammar error, and one or two misspellings, but this is really a great beginning to your fic.
ladydeath4ever- Sat 25 Aug 2007
please update ASPA!!!!!!
aki'a- Sat 25 Aug 2007
i loved it are you going to write another chapter
Silent Thunderstorm- Sat 25 Aug 2007
it is good really good please update soon
I like the start so far. Please update soon.
Anonymous Obsession- Fri 24 Aug 2007
awww, poor Kagome!
auughh, i hate how sesshomaru treated her and how he thinks his other mate is WAY MORE beautiful than kagome. :(
update soon ! :D
Asian Gurl- Fri 24 Aug 2007
What was the update in this?
K,T,M- Fri 24 Aug 2007
THAT WAS SOOOOOOO GOOD oh but tokijin is not his healin sword its his evil sword tensaga is his healin sword
Katherine- Fri 24 Aug 2007
Oh my, oh my, oh my! What a depressing but well written chapter!! I simply cannot wait to hear... read more! Please oh please E-mail me when you update! I would be most happy ^.^
-Katherine
kotainuchan- Fri 24 Aug 2007
like it so far please update soon...p.s Tokijin is not the sword that revives it's Tenseiga.
odango- Fri 24 Aug 2007
it is very intursting start how ever the healing sword is not tokijin ...tokijin is his evil sword the healing sword is tensegai
Amadoni- Fri 24 Aug 2007
Interesting start, though you need to get your swords straight.Toukijin is not the healing sword, in fact it's far from it.
Asian Gurl- Thu 23 Aug 2007
When you wrote "First and only mate", does that mean he got rid of the tiger bitch? And is it ending here?
*Crazy Asian*- Thu 23 Aug 2007
OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!
Good start. Hope you update soon.
Ooh.la.la~! Very nice plot. I really like your story. And from me, it means something, because I'm a very picky person!
Hope you update soon. And keep up the good work! =]
- n e e k k a y y
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