| hi, the story is going along very well so far. I have a question though, is possible for you to change the format a bit when you have your characters talking? It's a bit hard to rid cuz it's a little squished together.
| awww! why haven't you updated yet. it looks like it will be a fun fic.
Sapphire- Mon 27 Aug 2007
| This is nice!!! I hope you can write an even longer chapter though ... PLEASE UPDATE!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Fri 24 Aug 2007
Great two chapters. Cant wait to see what happen next! The only bad thig I can say is that I wish it were longer! LOL! :)
UPDATE SOON!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! ASAP!- Thu 23 Aug 2007
| I really like the beginning of this story and I hope that you continue on with it. I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
ceira- Thu 23 Aug 2007
| how cute! i really enjoyed reading your fic.
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