I promise to only say this once update. I really wan't you to write more you have to keep up with this story. Now I never said that I wouldn't say it in different ways. Can't wait for you to post.
see-ya
Mord-Sith Cara- Mon 09 Oct 2006
| It is an interesting piece, but maybe you could have gone a bit more in-depth. Perhaps a pre-chapter explaining why she is on the modern side of time and her connection to Sesshomaru? Maybe strongly hint at their deep connection buy having her call out to him as she is being forced back into her own time? (That is, if she is being forced back?) See? you can go in-depth in the story without ruining it.
emo- Thu 01 Jun 2006
| wah!!!! update already!!!!!!!
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