I would flame you for one reason... there isn't MORE. PLEASE write more soon. thank you.
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Koroleva- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| i like i like this chapie was awsome keep up the good work :)
Tanya131- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| please write more
cReaT1Ve- Sun 16 Sep 2007
I just thought that it would be cool if you didn't reveal Kagome's identity anytime soon to the Taishos...
Pwwweeeeeaaase?
Oh, and please find someway to include Shippo in this story somehow, I love that kid...
Anyways, ice story, keep it going and pdate soon.
Peaches- Sun 16 Sep 2007
| I like the story and all , but the thing is that u have 8 ch. and i'm thinking thats how far u got in the story but when i go to ch 6 it say mess up and the same for ch 7.So it really confuses me. Like i said i love the story so plz hit us up with some new chappies.
Megan Consoer- Mon 10 Sep 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Jennifer Duan- Thu 23 Aug 2007
| here's an idea. how about after the inuyoukias somehow or another healed her organ problems, she was asked to stay at their castle. Kag and Sess dont get along and argues a lot. inuyasha likes to stick with Kag as in brother/sister relationship and stuff. Kag still is a sweeper and runs off a lot. Sess gets pissed at her... and well...stuff. And the ending could be that Sess and Kag mated. :)
kittycat- Thu 23 Aug 2007
| a title name " memories assassion" or "the futures past"
black moon inu- Wed 22 Aug 2007
NO DON"T STOP. ideas ideas oh I know how about if some how her haritage like her family has a specail ability to heal them selves but lets say she needs a little help because of the nature of the injury. Hope it helps. Post soon.
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black moon inu- Tue 07 Aug 2007
Hey I'm back I loved the chap that she saved inu and o my god what is with that guy how could he steal something so cute ~inu as a kid sigh~ oh well I wonder if she is going to sirvive on her own or is sesshoumaru and his father going to have to do something. well i'll find out when you post again.
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Tanya131- Wed 01 Aug 2007
| please write more
Koroleva- Wed 01 Aug 2007
i like kagomes a complete badass in this and that is awsome!! update soon plz
| Oh, boy, I hope she makes it through this alright! Please update again soon!
nice chapter!
Please update soon!
Ja Ne!
isobel- Wed 11 Jul 2007
| i thoght this was very good and i carnt wait for you to update
Megan Consoer- Tue 10 Jul 2007
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
Tanya131- Wed 04 Jul 2007
| please write more
Nice story line!
You should reread your work and fix the small errors you have but other than that I rate you a full 10!
I hope you update soon!
Ja Ne!
Chaos_Queen77- Wed 04 Jul 2007
I love the story line and the factt that its younger inuyasha, its so kawaii, any ways hurry up and post some more chapters i want to see the sparks fly when she returns inuyasha.
Chaos
black moon inu- Wed 04 Jul 2007
I finally checked in again and I was so happy that you had posted not only that you had 2 chapters I so wanted to do a little dance. the chapters were good and I really like the story so far so keep it up. Post soon.
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Androgynous- Wed 04 Jul 2007
liking it so farrr.... =)
keep goin kayy!!!
Androgynous- Wed 04 Jul 2007
| so far so good =)
black moon inu- Tue 03 Jul 2007
Like the Idea and the plot can't wait till you post your first chap. willign to bet that it'll be good and I'll be looking for it. well till then.
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