I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

What is taking so long??!! please hurry and write the next chapter, im so mwaiting for the lemon. CANT WAIT NUCH LONGER!!!

Oh poor Kagome....ok so i admit it I would love to switch places with her so would you. I'm moving forward in my plan the word is BEG. You should see it you'll crack up he looks like a purfect little pupppy and then he starts growling.No bad puppy no biting my tail. neptune-saturn PLEASE teach him to not bite....at least not peoples tails!
lol
hugs and puppies

Interesting Twist ... Damn Sesshomaru!!!

PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE FINISH AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN. I LOVE THE WAY KAGOME FOUND THAT LOOPHOLE. personally if i were kagome i woulnt mind being with sesshomaru. i mean... just look at him. he's HIM. i would love to be punished by that studmuffin. i'm a bad girl. but i love the story though. finish soon

PLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEEE FINISH AS QUICKLY AS YOU CAN. I LOVE THE WAY KAGOME FOUND THAT LOOPHOLE. personally if i were kagome i woulnt mind being with sesshomaru. i mean... just look at him. he's HIM. i would love to be punished by that studmuffin. i'm a bad girl. but i love the story though. finish soon

well that was a nice loop hole there! i like it!!! oh, and i cant wait for the lemon!! its SOOOOO GOOD!!

LOVE IT!!!!!!!


PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! -^_^-

P.S. cant wait for lemon! =)

Keep going ^_^

Hahahahaha, He will not likey that, but he did deserve it with him being so mean. He should have been more specefic.

I didn't like it when Sess slapped her but I guess frustration at being interrupted the night before played a role in it. Kagome is SMART...realizing her room was also in the future. Good job.

Stick it to him kagome he deserves it. So i take it you loved petting his fluffy thing? He was kind of mad at me for making him let you do that, keeps saying that its cruel and unusuall punishment. I told him alls fair in love and war now ever time he comes into my room he pulls my tail. ~wispers~ now that he's out of my room I can tell you I have this subjugation? necklace and all i need is the perfect word. OH no he's coming back can't let him read this so post soon and pray for my tail.

hugs and puppies

Awe, poor Kagome doesn't want Sesshie. Poor Sesshie's plan was foiled. HAHAHAHA he deserved it though.

As always love the story and keep writing!

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:)

Awe, poor Kagome doesn't want Sesshie. Poor Sesshie's plan was foiled. HAHAHAHA he deserved it though.

As always love the story and keep writing!

:)
:)

Update soon please and thank you

Hey Thanks for the new chapter it was really good. And I'm sorry I wasn't here to reveiw to the first What really happened part:)

I had just started reading this fanfic and I love it already! ^__^

-KB

AWESOME CHAAPTER!!!!! LOVED IT!
I was hoping for a lemon, but that lime was stil REALLLLY good!!! I wonder wat will happen between Kagome and Sesshomaru in his study? Ooo!

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU FOR UPDATING! -^_^-

p.s. lemons pwez =)

Like The New Chapter ... Poor Kagome ...

keep going ^_^

Well I still stick with the evil thing, glad you agree with me. Oh bye the way sesshoumaru was VERY pleased that you had wrote he didn't even threaten me when I started to play with his fluffy thing. he still won't tell me what it really is. WOMAN THIS SESSHOUMARU WOULD NEVER STOOP SO LOW AS TO FORCE MYSELF ON SOMEONE. Down fluffy! ~hears bangs in the back round~ OH and by the way he's changed his threat you can pet his fluffy thing if you keep posting ~I SAID NO SUCH THING~ shut up you'll let her. Sorry its 3:45 am and I haven't slept yet so I'm a loopy. well post soon.

hugs and puppies

Keep going ^_^

DAMNIT!!!

I WAS SO HAPPY!! and then...she WAKES UP!! ARGH!

lemons pwez =)

PLEEEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^

Oh that was evil I almost thouhgt of not reviewing just to get back at you but then thought that that was to mean so stick with saying that your evil. oh and I have someone here that would like to say something he keeps bugging me to write it so heres what he wants me to say. This sesshoumaruwill melt you with his posion if you do not post another chapter soon and tell us what reall happened.
Well hope you post soon. ~hears mummbling in the back round ( human better post soon because my black moon inu has me addicted to it) ignore him.~

hugs and puppies

Gosh ... Cliff Hangers Suck! Update Soon!

wow..more chapters please!!

PLease continue this is very good:)

can't wait till the update

O.o damn.....this is getting good ^.^ Keep on writing when ever ya get the chance, its a really good story ^.^

Well, Naraku is not going to like how his litle potion did not quite work for him. In the many stories that I read Naraku never wins, and it is usually from some fault of his own. I can not help myself but feel bad for him, and at the same time laugh at him.

You have really fixed the story up, it is looking great, and it is still as interesting as ever, I shall wait patiently for the next update.

OMG-thats all i have to say

O.o HOLY CRAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Neptune you GOTTA keep going with this, this is just to damn well written for you to stop....and the ending to this....Holy crap..... You know how to right a good fanfic man AWESOMENESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow...this is getting good!!...wow..he is evil...pure evil...but still hot!!..(^_^)....more chapters please!!

ooh...i wonder how far he will go with his new power? lol

PLEEEEEEEEASE CONTINUE AND THANK YOU!! ^_^

P.S. lemons pweez =)

that is one of the funniest shits ever, imagine you just walk into a room and a wako just starts telling you that they love you especially when you are suposed to be enemies. i dont know if anyone else might find that hilarious but man that is funny on so many levels expecially if its kags and sess in the mix. i wonder will kags be like the stay at home type of lover like she makes him stuff like shirts or hankershiefs with little engravings like sess x kags

really good

now this is getting interesting. the best thing is, i hate kikiyos guts so for her to be an evil coniving b***h is perfectly acceptable.

This is a very good story. I do have some things that I would like to point out. Your line tecnique needs some work, because without it looking decent, some people will not even read a story, not matter how interesting the plot.

Another thing about your grammar, I think that it could use someone going over it, so that you don't wind up having to many grammar errors that the reader just gets mad and stops reading the story.

That is not to say that I noticed many, for I did not. I would just hate for this highly interesting plot to go to wate for mistakes that can easily be fixed.

I would also hate it if you took this the wrong way. I am just trying to help you out, so just to put myslef at ease, I am not being mean, and if it appears that way, I am sorry.

Hahahaha Yup she loves you sesshy-kun...heheh update soon please

Hahahaha Yup she loves you sesshy-kun...heheh update soon please

This has the makings of an interesting story. You might want to consider slowing the pace down a little. You want to draw the reader into the world you are painting with words. Also you need to watch your tenses and a beta reader could be very helpful here.
Please don't be discouraged by this review! You have a story to share. With a little work you might be surprised at just how good a story-teller you can be.

this is freaken awsome!!!!....more chapters please!!!

keep going ^_^

keep going ^_^