This sounds like a really nice story! i love how you have all the lyrics from that pirates song!
the only thing i can tell you to do about it would be to either get a beta, or to probably read over your chapters before you post them, because you said she looked 'write' when thats like what im doing now, im writing....you ment to write down 'right' cause write is doing something while right is the side opposite of your left body....
sorry about the long critisism....i just really like this story, and...yeah...
and it was nice of you to give us the link that shows us the actual pirates' code thingy...
although it isn't as nearly as long as in the third movie of Pirates of the Careabean.....which is a huge book...
UP-DATE SOON!!!
joanne

hahaha...the rum contest..classic...more chapters please!!!

Its great I mean wow!!

Love the pirate song too!!

please update sooonn!!!!!!!!!!


K_I_B

hey sounds good so far please update soon