Hey! I like the general plot and structure you have going. The only major problem I have is with the good amount of spelling errors. It's all small stuff, but it adds up quickly. If you want any help, give me a shout. I'll hook you up with my amazing gramatical skills of awesome awesomeness. xD
Best of luck!
-Leather Wings
Violetcarson- Mon 25 Jun 2007
Oh, I get it now!!!! Nice!!
Violetcarson- Fri 22 Jun 2007
So you've started another story, eh? Well, looks interesting so far. I didn't quite get a couple things, but all's well. I'm assuming that somehow, she was timetraveling back, and met Sesshomaru, and now she is back in modern times again? Ah well, I hope you update both your stories soon!!!
0.0 ....... LOVE IT!!!!!!! When does he figure it out? and WHERE'S the FLUFF?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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