Your story is really good so far! I hope that you write more soon!!!!!

hey there i really like your story i really hope you continue with it also you are right about a beta they can also correct any errors that you may not have seen. i would like to be your beta if you still need one you can email me at kagetenchiofdeath@yahoo.com

well, beta's are the once who should 'fix' ur fanfic, well, like you, im confused, too, about em, well, if u are thinking if i wanna be yer beta, my answere, is sorry, cant, ow, usually, i did not wanna get a beta, or to be one, ^^, well, hope ye continue this, its wonderful !

wright more I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can understand how you might be a little apprehensive over some grammar (there were a few run-on sentences and some mistakes), but those can be easily rectified. Your concept, however, is very engaging. It's new, fresh, and you've got a strong narrative voice just waiting to bust out. With a good bit of beta-ing, this fic would be amazing. The plot and characterizations are already there. Keep it up!

Looks interesting, although I din't quite get the whole, 'then he died' thing. What does that mean? Does it mean that he was sort of in Limbo for the years since Naraku has been defeated? Just curious, but you should definitely continue!!

Sorry!! I spelled definitely wrong in my last review!!

Looks interesting, although I din't quite get the whole, 'then he died' thing. What does that mean? Does it mean that he was sort of in Limbo for the years since Naraku has been defeated? Just curious, but you should feinitely continue!!

FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

An interesting concept...so, I'm going to assume that Sesshomaru is somehow in Kagome's mind right? That or I'm completely out of it...which wouldn't surprise me all that much but still. Well, I personally vote for the whole, you NOT deleting it thing...and I hope you update soon!