I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I love this I think you should make a sequel oneshot to it.

What a beautiful and well thought out piece. Like a beautiful poem. So eloquent.. wistful even. It caused a pang in my heart. I think you have written Sesshoumaru's thoughts very well. I hope to read more of your stories.

Whether you write a sequel or not is entirely up to you. I think the ending given is very good. It leaves a simplistic opening of hope. Kudos to you !!

:)

This story is amazing. I can't recover from my state of total numbness. It's so wonderfull that it take my breath away.
Please let it stay in this way.
If you decide that it need a sequel do it so that it shall stand as a separated story.
Thank you for writing it.

Great oneshot. I'm glad you did it as an alternate universe, though. I wish there was more to this story. Everyone else agrees.

Thanks for answering the questions we had but you've got to know this is quite a teaser for we that have overly curious thoughts. I have to accept this as a one shot but you have proven that you still haven't lost your touch at writing.I have not read any of your work before but if this ficlet is any indication to your talent I do hope that you will write other fics for us to enjoy. Jen

this was great marcia! i loved it! i loved it! i loved it!

I hope you update another chapter for this story. I LOVED IT!!!

wow that was intense and I hope to see more chapters. Hope Kagome finds her happy ending

Ok...so this isn't really a one shot but to see if we liked the plot, right? It just seems too unfinished to let it be complete. We don't know if she lived or died or if Sesshoumaru killed his brother and sent him to hell with Kikyou as per Kikyou's plan in the series...if you want to hear us ask for more than you got it...Please, write some more. This begs to be continued. By the way, good job. Jen

I love this so much! If you think about it Inuyasha actually might do that if the beads were off and Kikyo came back to him forever, and Sesshomaru does have an abnormal interest with her in the series. He hardly even notices Miroku or Sango, yrt he always seems to say or insinuate something about kagome when in battle or just passing by Inuyasha and the group. I love it so much. I can't believe how wonderful this story is so far.

please,please...a sequel.to make up for his mistakes.
i want to know how it turns out.

Ooo....so good! Depressing, but really, really good! Wow, such feeling....haha, I like it, it was well writen and the plot was well thought out, good job! Thanks for the great read.

Wow. That is all I can say. Wow. Wow. Wowowowowowowowow!!!!!!! That was awesome!!!! I hope it wasn't just a oneshot!!!!! I really hope you do more!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!! Do!!!! More!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

aww! this was so sweet yet so sad. i really adored the detail and even tho i'm not the most prominant inu and kikyou hater i do enjoy inuyasha and kikyo bashings. lol but the story was rather unique and everything was so well written!! it'd be great if you wrote another chapter, but in a way it fits for you to keep it at this. whatever you choose, i adored this!

Whens the Sequel comeing???

I Really hope you make one this story is really good

i liked the story very much. it made me cry. i hope you write other stories

PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS A ONE SHOT I WANT TO SEE IF SESSHOMARU CAN GET KAGOME BACK TO NORMAL PLEASE UPDATE.

Man! That was almost depressing! It was very sad. Very very sad. I liked it though. ^_^

-River