Yuk, yuk, yuk! Naraku, get your hands off Kagome! Gross! I'm disappointed with her, too. I know the body sometimes thinks independently from the mind but still, to that extent? Also, in no way should she fear Sesshoumaru more than Naraku. Put them both on balancing scales and Naraku's past evilness and cruilty would far outweigh Sesshoumaru's any day. Come on Kagome! Think sensibly for cying out loud. Also, where's the old Kagome spunk to at least do some verbal protesting. I know she's heartbroken and depressed over the loss of her friends, but still, to passively let the hands of their murderer do that to her without some form of protest? I just hope she improves.

you are the greatest! please don't give up this story!!!!

You write the best stories!
Can't wait to read more.

YOU wicked evil tease...carry on. This promises to be intriguing. Sesshoumaru is literally fit to be tied. Equally, Naraku is hilarious in a decidedly diabolical way...as is appropriate...born of torture indeed.

Nice chapter, so Kagome has some feelings for Naraku? How could someone feel tenderness at the hands of a hanyou who killed all her friends captured her and Sesshomaru and is torturing them both. Messed up, but still an interesting read. lol. Can't wait till next update.

I almost forgot this one. I am quite curious to see where you go with it. It's almost as angsty as Rinseternalsoul begins hers. Can't wait for more. Jen

Wake up and smell the angst, I love it. By all means continue.

P.S I could beta for you if you'd let me, I'm not sure if you'd like another with more experience but I do know my grammer. I just don't know the whole inner workings of the ASS system. (sorry had to throw that in ;])

sweet fic. I can tell that things are definitely going to get interesting here on out. I saw your note about writing shorter chapters... does that mean that you will be able to update more often? I hope so. Can't wait to see where this fic goes.

writing is one of the purest things the human race has so no matter what never give up

never give up no matter what

very wicked chapter

very wicked chapter

I love your story!

Wooooow. I'm loving the progression and plot! Please update soon. ^^

Of this I am sure, somewhere down the line there will be the appropriate karma and retribution.

No fluff? Not even a little bit? lol... I am nervous....my poor favorite couple...So how dark is dark? I am almost afraid to click on the story when you update, but like the addiction that your stories are, I cannot seem to help myself! :)

Hey love the chapter except it still sends chills down my spine when Naraku touches kagome even in my own stories. It makes me wanna be sick. But hey There is always Sesshou LOL. Can't wait for more chapters.

For some odd reason, I believe that you'll do great with this fic too. I really think I'm becoming a fan. Why do most of the really good looking guys have to be so bad? And Naraku just seems to me to be the type where he'll do any nasty, disgusting, twisted sck torture on anyone who crosses him. Jen

Oh no...this tale is certainly not for the faint of heart! I am almost afraid to read your next chapter...lol..but I shall do so nonetheless. It is amazing how you can switch tones between your current stories, I am very impressed. Glad that you are feeling better!!! I hope you are 100% soon!!!

A very nice start.

I love the story so far and I can't wait for more chapters. This story makes Naraku seem like an even worse cold hearted bastard. Oh well at least Kagome and Sesshomaru are together for now. Can't wait to read more. Loves the story.

wow this is very interesting can't wait for more chapters

hmmm...this one is definitely dark and angsty...It shows promise. I tend to shy away from dark, seemingly heartwrenching fics, but with your excellent writing skills, that I have seen so far, I have a feeling that this story will make any angst worthwhile...

This is good! I am very excited to see what happens next! By the way... This is rated NC-17...right? I do hope there are going to be some... juicy lemons?! :D

I look forward to your next chapter... My only correction I am going to give you... And it's not even a correction. I really wish the chapters were a bit longer... Yes, It takes longer to write the chapters, but it gives the reader a lot more to bite into, get the reader hooked into the story more.

Either way, the story is awesome. It really doesn't matter how long the chapters are... I guess I am just complaining because I want more to read!!!

Keep up the awesome work!

-Evellin

whoo hoo a dungeon story i just love it when they wind up in a dungeon together

That evil malformed bitch Naraku! Might have known he was present! Bring it on woman!

Ok... so dark doesn't quite turn me away from reading. If one can read Rinseternalsoul's fics then I think you can handle any of them. I'm in. I'd like to see if you can make me cringe, cry and want to take the bad guy to his death by using 21st century weaponry. Jen

good stuff keep writing please :) longer chapters! :)

Another chapter? *gives you pleading eyes that are shiny and watery* oh yes please! Haha, no, it's good, I mean ya, it's dark but who doesn't like a little (okay, a lot of) darkness and angst?! I like it, it's ...I want to say compelling but I'm not sure if that would make sense...anyway, I can't wait to read more!

Sounds interesting so far...can't wait to see more!

Hn.

And what are those plans the Fates have in store for our Miko exactly?

Sounds a tad interesting.

PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE I WANT TO KNOW MORE I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!

Boy you are one busy writer. Hope your brain doesn't go on overload. I'm enjoying your writing though. Jen