I love all 4 of your pov's. Very beautifully done. They touched my heart, especially Kag's. These pov's would lead to a beautiful story if you ever considered writing one. Your poems say you have the talent.

I read all four of your story/poems. With the exception of a few minor spelling/grammatical errors, they were all good. I can see a compilation of all four poems into a short story starting with Sess, then Yasha, Kagome and finally Shippou. The ending title chapter of each poem can be the beginning chapter of each chapter of your story. For example, beginning with Sess can be chapter one...'Revelation'; Yasha's can be 'Release' and etc. I think you get my drift. Just expand on each poem and make it into an interactive story with the four main characters. This would lead up to the last chapter of Shippou's view 'How is was'...this is just my suggestions.

I really enjoyed reading your writings and would like to read more. Great job :-)

I absolutely adore this. The story told from Shippou's point of view is a stroke of genius. To write in the first person can sometimes be a difficult task but you're pulling it off beautifully. I do hope to see an update of this very soon.

Ja ne!

Nefra

OMG! That was totally awesome! I loved it! You HAVE to write more!

It's a cute story/poem you have there.I really like it.

Oh, that was so sweet! Lovely and touching! A really great pice. And you've managed to strike me almost speechless, usually I'm more eloquent in my reviews. Ah, well it just goes to show you how much this little fic impacted me. And it's just the perfect bit of sweetness to end my day with, too!