| Great now I'm wet. Thanks alot! (skulks)
Lunar Nightmare- Fri 18 Apr 2008
| Don't worry about people not enjoying this, I thought this was kinda funny. I liked it, so don't worry, like I said, it was good.
dani- Fri 28 Dec 2007
cool story!!! u should right more.
lazy- Wed 04 Jul 2007
| lemons... juicy =D
courtney- Mon 02 Jul 2007
| i love you. this is soooooo funny. please be my friend. sorry, that sounded creepy. i just agree that there are too many inu hurts kag... stories out there. most of them suck, too. good job at mocking them!!!!!
VENNY- Sun 17 Jun 2007
| I like it. The lemon overall is alright and the last two lines made me chuckle. I just hope my BF doesn't read this. He'll be telling me that he's not a pervert. He's just a guy. = P
"I am not entirely convinced that you wish to live."
"What?"
"I believe that I require a second evaluation. Possibly a third."
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::gigglesnort:: LMAO!
| HILARIOUS!! Too bad it ended.
AxA- Thu 19 Apr 2007
that was so funny i am totaly annoyed with "inuyasha hurt kagome..." type stories too so more power to you
~AXA ^_^
Favi- Wed 11 Apr 2007
| preety good
Dawn Hayashi- Tue 10 Apr 2007
I liked it...tasteful and funny
| That was awesome! I needed a reprieve from this type of fanfics as well, and you definatly pulled it. -thumbs up- Awesome one-shot. x3
Tabrikah- Tue 10 Apr 2007
| Really funny! But one thing thats been nagging at my mind, Sesshoumaru with a male!!! Crazy! but all in all really good Humer/Parody
| this was great....to get me to forget the pain a good laugh was involved,this is also the first story i have printed out seeing as the others were not worthy of my friends.
AnimeFanime18- Mon 09 Apr 2007
| xD Little Tokijin. "No, Ka Go Me, I'm a male." Figures. xD I love this story! It's fricking hilarious!
| AH! I loved it, it was really funny, "little tokijin" that was great.... ^_^
inumaru_rapture- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Lets see... Inuyasha hurts Kagome (check) Sesshoumaru saves the day (check) Kagome's jealousy of his hair...(check) Sex (check) all there!
Good job! No worries about the hentai. Some people like smut...lol I like writing lemons, but I never can get too sure of doing too much into it--unless it's entirely necessary. Read my Utopia for examples--only one sex scene (so far) is laid out in detail.
Katherine- Mon 09 Apr 2007
| Haha that was good
Sesshoumaru's Fiend- Mon 09 Apr 2007
*claps* Bravo! Bravo! A true work of genius!
You had me in freaking stitches at the 'Little Tokijin' part! Seriously though!
Loved the funny-ness of it all!
Great job, keep up the great work, and good luck on your stories that were nominated for the Annual Awards!
Toodles! and keep those fingers - a - typin' -!
Luvs, Ashley
*snickers* Good one! I too was getting rather tired of seeing those...unless well written, in which case I will happily read them (unfortunately, there aren't many of those)
*applauds* Loved the lemon! And loved the pervert Sesshoumaru who needs more than one go at it. *giggles*
Good work!
Elisa- Mon 09 Apr 2007
Parody or not that was good. If you have anymore you just can't get out of your head you should totally write them and post them because that was great.
~*Elisa*~
I liked it. Very good if theres more to this I can't wait to see what happens next.
As for the lemon. I totally understand about writing them. I had the same problem and still do when I have to write one. I have found that with each one you write it gets a little better and easier to write. So be patient and just let it flow as it comes. Keva
Lady Ashira Taisho- Mon 09 Apr 2007
| I think that for a spoof it was really good you know really you should have made it a little funnier though like those movies date movie or not another teen movie but it was still good.
| Hahaha...awesome. That was a great little parody. Yay for you :)
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