*sobbing*
why won't you update? WHY!!?!?
*curls into a ball in the corner*

wow another good story line going on there! I hope to read more from you about this one soon! ^-^

Ja Ne!

keep going ^_^

It was soooo good!!!!! PLEASE write more!!!!

yeah.. that was an awsome battle but whatever happened to kags sword, and her training?

I look forward to the punishment of dishonorable hanyou. Both of them. Please may she not have any. Full youkai pups all the way.

COOOOOOOOOLlllllllieeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!!

Interesting! Great fight sequence.

Make a new Please!!!!! :)
ya I know I don't say much!
Peace :D,
Faviola V.

short, but good update soon.

Update!!!!! This is a very interestiong story.1!!!!!

thanks for the update, letting my friends know that another chapter is up.

that is too funny!!! i can't wait for more!!!!!!!=)

I love this story so far. I can't wait till you update.

Ok, I'm really liking how this story starts out and I can't wait to see what's next. One question though, If InuTaisho was agaist taking a human mate, how would that explain InuYasha's mother?

very cool i love mystery i can't wait for more!!! =)

I liked the new chapter, but what did happen to the jewel if it's the same sword?

next chapter please!

34 reviews, 1 more to go before the next chapter!

This is a very interesting story!! I really don't think you need to threaten us to get reviews!! Especially if you already have chapters written, it's kinda mean!! I just hope you know how appreciated you are, and how much your writing is enjoyed!! I hope you decide to update again, even if you don't get all of the reviews you want!! There are too many quality stories like this one abandoned on this website!! Please come back soon!! I've just found your fanfic and really like it!!

Why do you ask people for reviews to get the next chapter? Shouldn't you be writing for love of the story and not for the amount of people reading it? I know that knowing people read and anticipate your story is a wonderful feeling but you're a writer. You should care less about that and more about seeing it through to the end for the sole sake of the story not the people reading it.

The first two chapters were okay but the third is riddled with grammar errors. Try reading it out loud to yourself before posting it that will help. And be careful with your PoV's. What you did in the first two chapters was mostly controlled and felt more natural. The third chapter has weird first person points. Switching between PoV's, while done often in fanfiction and most amature writing, is not advisable. Usually you should chose a point of veiw and stick with it. However, if you're going to keep doing what you're doing make it in seperate paragraphs at least like the first chapter.

Anyway, be careful and good luck.

oww poor seshh.... poor kags....

yeah,because i have found much enjoyment from reading it.good luck.

please continue :)

can't wait for the next chapter :)

OH PLEASE PUT UP THE NEXT CHAPTER! PLEASE!!! PLEASE!!!!

I do really like how this story is shaping up.. and can't wait for chapter 3, =) hope you get 15 soon.. =)

there now you have more than 15 review plz update or i will cry

excellent.you've already piqued my interest.
so good luck and take care.

if i write more than one, those it count? Love it

Interesting twist of a story.

Hmmm... I'm intrigued. Keep it coming.

Sounds like its going to be a good story...
I enjoyed the first 2 chapters...
Hope you update soon... can't wait to see what happens when they meet... Is the sword a gift that was give to his love ????
Take Care
Mari

19 reviews :D

Please continue, very interesting so far.

Interesting read. Although I dont' like that The Dog General is a bad guy -- but I know that its necessary for the story. Thank you for sharing and please continue :)

Awesome update. The sword that Kagome's grandfather gave her is Sesshomaru's late Mates, is it not. I wonder how he will react to seeing Kagome with it. Will it anger him or will it get him thinking. Could Kagome be the reincarnation of his dead Mate. Only you can tell us this.

Keep the great writing up and I will be patiently waiting for the next update.

REVIEW! REVIEW! REVIEW! See I review now PLEASE put up the next chappie! PLEASE! (Is groveling on ground) PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!!!!!!

I hate when authors do this to me, I like the story then I have to what for other reviewers to post their reviews. I sucks. Well I hope you get more soon so I can read more....I mean...we...yes we can read more.

LOVE IT!
OMG this is great. It's very original, and I love how the sword came into play. Sesshomaru is going to have a coronary when he sees it! ^_^ Please update soon!

ohh...this sounds very interesting, i'd like to keep up with it.
with that said, is isn't a bother or anything, could you please email me when you update?
it'd be greatly appreciated! ^_^

Well, great chapter and can't wait to see what happens!

Ohhhh, Like ths! I can't wait! The look on his face when he sees her with the sword!

This is a great story, i would love to see if countinued. Your is good, i love the background story you gave first.
((my friends call me kagome, cause of hownice and selfless i am))

if i review again,... can i count as two people?? .. =) i really do like this fac fic.. and i did read it again =)
can wait to read more!!!!

WRITE! WRITE! WRITE! WRITE! WRITE! WRITE!
I so love this story, pls write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I LIKE THIS CHAPTER LOOKING FOWARD TO OTHERS

W00T! I like it so far. Update soon plz!

~zen

That was so sad....plz update soon....great writing

that was mean and i know it

I read the first chapter of this story and it looks like it should be a very entertaining story. So far I like what I have read I look forward to reading more of this story. So I hope some people hurry up and review so we can get to 5. It seems like the readers are being blackmailed! "P

Hey, great story - please up date soon!

very well done. I look forward to the next chapter

wow.. very well tought out.. and writen. i truly love this story, well done!!! it is refreshing to see trough the eyes of sesshoumaru!!! i look forward to reading more !!! =)