I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Your fan fanfiction as well done, I really really liked it. BY the way, the way Kagome acted is fine, because this is KAGOME after all !
You should keep writing if you like to or love to, ANd who cares about the flamer, sorry people who like to flame. So basiclly you are a great writer, so keep at it, Oh and plus I wanna know and read what happens, and also you should give a flashback, so we know and it can be clear-er in the next chapter,
K!
Bye, great writer!
Your reader,
Faby

Please continue soon I'll be waiting

DON'T let the flamers get you down even if they don't like your work someone does everyone has their own type of stuff they like to read. Keep up the writing and hope to see more from you soon.

BYE BYE

it was awsome!! please write more

WTF???

Then why did she say yes to Inuyasha?????? U made kags sounds like a 2timing-bitch. DID Sesshoumaru forced her to mating him?

Anyway... lots of mistakes on spelling grammer and the plot line kinda...SUCK AS HELL. If you watch the TVseries it's Kilala but it is really Kirara.

major.flamer

I sound cruel but many found that my review actually help them to improve as a writer.

It is always better to first post a chapter before demanding reviews. Of course, it is quite lame to be demanding reviews to begin with. Try again when you actually get around to writing a fic, and finally posting something worth reading.

...okay...it's definitely a start smile>.