WHOA! Awesome story! Two chapters and I'm already hooked! You have to update! This is idea is totoally unique, and I can't wait till you update again

Dun dun dun! this is a very good idea! You must continue. Kags should re-fall in love with him and then she should get her memories back. or maybe... she should say that he looks familliar. like from a dream. and she should think that she was in a coma for however long she was traveling between the times.... hmm... that is a good idea...wel until the next chapter... ja ne

Did you know that there is a second verse to this song? I think it might be neat to do another chapter for the second verse....maybe in the future when sess comes to meet her then.

I know that one of the lines is 'what if i'd hung my head and said i couldn't wait? But now i'm strong enough to know it's not too late.'

Anyways, i think it would go nicely with what you've written so far being that you said sess would wait for her and all.

Well, good luck whatever you decide

Later

Shadow

I think making this story longer is a wonderful . you have a wonderful start, so give it a try

I think you should make it maybe a short story.

I fell in love with that song the first time I played Final Fantasy X-2. I like how you incorporated the song into this fic. Very nice, you should continue. ^_~

THAT"S IT!?!?!?!?
I mean this is GREAT AND YOU HAVE GOT TO CONTINUE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*nods head emphatically*

PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*puppy eyes*