Alright...it would have been a good ficlette, but you really need to fix the grammar and spelling.... Perhaps make it a little longer...add content, develope the realationships...ya know. However, the plot is interesting. I can't wait to see more from you as your technique developes.

Love your stories

lol! i love yu r author comment, really puts your personaliy in there! lol and i really liked this story, put a good twist in sessh's and kagome's realationship! i'm going toread the sequal now

wow i hope you update soon i wolud like to fined out what happens

plz write more. -_-

Yes! plz write more ^-^

MORE!!!!! FINISH THE DAMN STORY!!!!

merrychristmas I got asmartphoneforchristmas and amcurrently writing fromitrightnow smiles. anywaykeepthe story going he deserves happiness. I just read the story manga with his mom in and she us kind of mean and a little aloof just like him in some ways but he should be happy and with the way kagome is am sure she will foregive him if we was a little confused about his feelings

I love the story and it is something that happens often to anyone. My ex-boyfriend regrets leaving me and wishes that we get back together but no. I have a life now and I'm not going to give it cause he realize what he had done.

lol i loved the story!!it was awsome i love these kind of storiesi hope you make the sequel and somemore stories like this one lol later and mery x-mas!!

sequel please :) this is too good to end. Have a wonder C'mas&Happy New Year :D

It will be my honor of reviewing! xP I love it. What happen next? Do they get to be together? O:

Why did you make it so sad? Well it still was realy Good.

aww thats sad poor sesshoumaru

omg i loved it!! almost made me want to cry! poor sessho...shoulda been smarter =P it was great. hope to read more works from you.