I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I know its probably to late to say this but the beginning is perfect the way it is. Him knowing what Kagome looks like is a good start. It cause plot and drama cause she won't know what he's there for. then rin's there she'll blow the beans and cause even more conflict it'll be a good storyline. But if you change it that'll be cool but as writer the first idea is always the best sometimes cause you already have the storyline in your head.

PlEaSe ConTinUe ThiS Fic. AnD

Don't ForGet ThAt I dId nOt WaIt

LoNg My LikIngs DieS FaSt So I

SugEst Make Your Fic More LonGer

. GooD Job, AnyWayS

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I want you to continue. Seriously. There's so few fanfics that are original, interesting and with correct spelling and grammar. Too many idiots get good reviews, but not enough authors like you get the kind of attention that you deserve. Good work.

i think this is a great start. I definitely encourage you to run with it. Its based on Grand Passion by Jayne Ann Krentz right? Loved the book. keep up the good work:)

I love it! Can't wait for the next update!

i want to read more. this fic seems to have tons of potential. i'll read if u update

so far the fic is going well,i want to see kags point of view since her "lover" died a few days ago according to see pov