I really like this story. You have done something most do not do, you allow Kagome physical as well as mental strength, you allow her dominance and true sexual feeling not as a secondary aspect but as a fully sentient woman. She is not done to, but equally the doer. She is allowed full being as a character and yes, you are damn funny and sexy with it. In short, you allow her to be very much her own priestess and dog demon and VERY HUMAN alike. I really like this fanfic. I have read many but few allow her this full gammet of possibilities. As for Fuffy...well he is just divine, oh and thank you for something else RARELY done by authors....you allow her to externally express her joy at his beauty. Most times, most simply express it in point of view and never truly tell their mate just how deliciously sexy they are. Thank you for doing so. Guys need to be told OUTRIGHT they are hot too. Thank you. Looking forward to the next chapter. Nice to see her defending her Sexy Puppy against InuTrasha!
I give you a nine point nine on this for full character development and my total enjoyment of the piece.
Thank you and Happy Valentine's Day...my birthday co-incidentally.Thank you!
Stacey Jan Wilson - ElegantPaws
sesshou's gurl- Mon 08 Jan 2007
| I love this story. Update really soon. Ja ne
Megan Consoer- Thu 21 Dec 2006
| I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
orchid- Mon 18 Dec 2006
| that was confusing... from chap 2 to chap 3... end of chap 2, kag was have a bad dream of naraku... and then in chap 3, kag is fight off a demoness that want to have the right to mate sessh... whoa, where's the transition.... where did the demoness come from... how did it get started.... very confusing... please clarify....
| Awww man!!! I wanted to read the rest!! Well please update soon!! Love the story so far!!!
FluffyFox- Wed 08 Nov 2006
| Very well done, I loved it!
jem89- Tue 07 Nov 2006
| I love this story. It's very good. Please update soon : )
neko-sama- Tue 07 Nov 2006
Short, seet and to the point. Curiios were you are taking this.
Keep Writing, I'll keep reading!
Neko-sama
Skye- Sun 29 Oct 2006
| hey i cant wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon
Unseen Watcher- Sat 28 Oct 2006
| Wow, quick but I like the idea of him asking her. My Bio teacher tells us that it is really the female that chooses in the end. I'm glad you go with that school of thought.
kilala_shippo(not logged on)- Sat 28 Oct 2006
It kind of sounded like you rushed the end. Other than that it was okay.
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