Hey, I so far love ur story. I'm also Korean who lives in America. I hope to see more chapters until finished AnimeFanime18

i really like this story. it kicks ass. well i hope you update soon. and happy new years. brea

I love your fanfic I can't wait for you to update the next chapter!!!!!!

i liked ur story a;ot i hope u can finsh it soon would love to know what happens plzs let me know ty

I like it! This is very well done, so don't let those flamers bother you! And good luck with school! I share your pain! T.T

squeee dat was awshome! and not just because im really hyper its because this story is just so well planned out ^.^ i give this story 5/5 cookies so far :D keep it up and if you dont i will smack sephiroth with a banana (and get killed which ever occurs first :D )

Um, I liked the first bit, but then, after then "Don't read this chapter" I got all confused, since the next one posted was identical to the last one posted. Perhaps it was just goofiness that happens when you have to adjust posts (it's happened to me), but I'm all confused now :(

Other than that I enjoyed it, and will keep an eye open for updates.

I really it! It was a bit hard to follow at first but I really like where it's going (at least where I think it's going lol)!!
Keep up the good work!! ^__^

I really it! It was a bit hard to follow at first but I really like where it's going (at least where I think it's going lol)!!
Keep up the good work!! ^__^

Just found this story & it's not bad, I only just finished chapter 3 though. About Rin, from what I've seen of her in the Anime I don't think she ALWAYS speaks in 3rd person, but she does now & then, of course I don't have any of the DVDs with her in them as yet so it could be different in the subbed version.

Awesome!!! I can't wait to read what happens! PLZ update soon!!!

I love this stuff! Man is it good! hehe! I can't wait for you to post somemore! Please don't tease don't force me to beg! xD I already am! lol Keep up this fantastic work you got going and I'll keep appraising you. hehe Bye!

I love your story! It's soooo good and I can't wait for you to write the next chapter. Are you gonna have Ishimaru and Sesshomaru have a mental fight over Kagome? And when are Kagome and Sesshpmaru going to "get together"? well please update soon!XD

dun dun dun xD couldnt help my self anyway great short chapter.... update whenever you can ja ne

please update this story.

this is totally funny i love it!!!!!

ddddddduuuuuuuuudddddddddd!!DDDDDDDUUUUUUUDDDDDDDEEEE!!!!! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE 1 OF MY FAVORITE THINGS ON THIS SITE. U WILL UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!plz

I dont like it when people switch from japanese to english like that either. Update soon.....
~FFM~

This is a good fic ma ... i realli like it ... its nice nd not to long nd not to short wen it comes to tha chapters so update soon otay ... 1

Well, I must say that this in an interesting fanfic ^-^ I like how you portray the characters...and you got Kagome's childish side very well! I hope you update the fanfic soon...and I look forward to reading more.

Very good story!!! I hope your next chapters will be as good as the first few!! And the last chap. made me even more curious!!!!

Very good story!!! I hope your next chapters will be as good as the first few!! And the last chap. made me even more curious!!!!

this is such a cool fanfic please keep up that good work and dont listen to the flammer's their just trying to get your spritis down it happened to me before and i stopped writing storie's completely so now i only write poetry well keep up the good work and please update soon thank you

So far the story has a promising plot. Sure Sesshomaru is OC a bit. but hey. Its your story. Who are we to judge on that. So far I think it has a great buid up. Now where you go with it is a different story. But I will stick around and see. Write more

*waves* Reviewing. Nice slap to InuYasha. Can't wait for Kick You to bite it. I hope one of the three of them slashes her apart. Happy Days are here again! Ah, Sess, growing up emotionally is hard to do.

AWSOME STORY. i really love it. it's sooooo kawaiii!!!!!! UPDATE ASAP. PLZ JA NE!!!!!

This story is great, I wonder is Sesshoumaru and Ishimaru going to fight over Kagome? anyways update soon

I love this story! I can't wait for you to update soon! Thanks.

well i don't see what they don't like about the story,i think it's really good!^-^keep writing!!seeya^.-

Dude!freaking awsome!!!!! I LOVE YOUR STORY! i also love how you put those fuckin flamers in their place! If you ever need, i'll have your back. i'm interested in reading some of your other stories too, so i really hope they don't disappoint when compared to this one cause it is really really good!

i loved it....i love the new character 2...update soon

i really like this story...unlike others about the aftermath of the final battle, all of kagome's friends are still alive. it sucks when they all die and i for one would like to thank you for keeping them in the story.

i would like longer chapters though... i need more of this story.

Yay, an update. Ohhh Boy, Rin is almost a teenager, poor Sesshomaru hehehe. With Rin getting older, I must agree that she would no longer be speeking in the third person, especially with an intellegent guardian like Sesshomaru. I can see where she would have spoken in the third person for a little while after joining Sesshomaru's group, she would have still been dealing with everything she had gone through before he found her, or should I say she found him, but after traveling with said Demon Lord for a while and becoming comfortable with him, I would think that she would start to pick up on his speech pattern, especially since she was still quite young when she joined his group.

Any way I enjoyed the update and look forward to the next chapter.

You're story is coming along very nicely. I would like to see where it's going. I think your idea is interesting... Domo there's only one trouble - well for me you might not find it that bad - But it seems that your chapters are missing in lenght. If possible it would be nice to see longer chapters.

Being a silent writer myself I know sometimes it can be hard to write longer chapters, so don't take it badly, I understand.

Keep up the good work and be proud of your fanfictions - cherish them like they were your babies. Another things, don't let those flammers get to you - most of the time it's because they wish they could have come up with that idea that they flame!

Have a good Day
xox
TF

I Love that little bit of revenge in the first chapters. heh. Women should not be angered. ^_^ Interesting turn in the story. Poor Sess', recaps just mean more delays. I can see him pouting as a pup if he didn't get a bedtime story. *chuckle*

i thought this would be a real chapter... most authprs wait a couple chapters before they make another complaint sighs oh well what you have written is great and you shouldn't be so sensitive to flames take it as a compliment their so jealous of your excellent potrayals of the character that they complained . its their fault they are so narrow-minded not to realize its your story therefore it cannot be any other way cause no one else can write exactly and i can't believe im giving some random person a pep talk if you can't tell im hoping im not wasting my time because i really want to read your story since such good work is hard to come by even in published novels and all the people who have sent reviews including me woud like to see another great chapter o update before i come and pelt you with pushie toys

I like your fanfic. And think it is a great story in the makings. Hope you keep writing despite what other people say or how many reviews you get.

hey this is a good character placement and i'm glad their acting themselves

please dont do that i like this one please anything but that

OH! NOOOOOOO!!!!! please don't stop writing!!!!!! i'm totally hooked! i even told my friend that they had to read this!!!!!! i beg you, don't leave me hanging!!!!!

AF18, you should ignore those flamers! They're totally jealous... Keep on writing, please! I loved this so far, and if you put it on Hiatus, I'd be devastated! I'll help you in any way I can, I swear, and I hope that you find inspiration to write a new chapter soon, because I so love this story!
Hope to see more soon..
-Rachel

Oh! Don't you dare put this on hold, or I will personally hunt you down and make you write. Just because you don't get reviews doesn't mean it isn't good! I just read it and I love it. SOOOOO you BETTER update ^_^

-Techno

I really like your story I have nothing bad to say about it. I just ask you to please write another chapter. ^_^

come on you have more reviews then most stories with nine chapters while you only have TWO . so please write more im begging you > i want more

your story is way too amazing too put on hiatus,you totally have to update soon!!

I really loved it please update.

if you don't update oooooooooooooohhhhh update god dammit

I'm sorry you feel that way. Don't get discouraged from continuing the story so update soon.

Hey, I happen to like this story, I don't know why people arn't reviewing it, it is a really good story.

Hope you update soon. Thanks

those ppl are just plain rude!! I love your story and I think its great!!! Please keep up the good work. can't wait to read the next chapter!!

ok i love the story and to the person the said the bad things, FUCK OFF other people like the story

Anyone sending you flames hasn't the slightest clue what real reviewing is. Requests for some proofreading is instructive (not that I recall seeing anything in your fic that would require it), but bad comments on stories are just rude. And not worth the net space they take up.

i like this story. it's easy to follow. i just tried to read one story and every chapter contradicted the last. you have my support, so plaese update again soon

WELL I THINK YOUR STORY IF FANTASTIC! please hurry and write more chapters! i need to know what happens.

WELL I THINK YOUR STORY IF FANTASTIC! please hurry and write more chapters! i need to know what happens.

AnimeFanime18 do not listen to those flames, just don't pay any attention to them. I like your story, I truly believe you have something here and can't wait to read more of this intriguing story. You are doing great. Keep it up and you'll see that your story will blossom to something so spectacular that you won't believe your eyes.

screw them because their stupidity probaly gets the beat up . so update in spite (and because i reeeeeeeeaaaaaaalllly want to know what happens next) this fic is really well written b/c of how you write which i love so pllleeeaaase update.

I normally don't send reviews. Due to some writers fail to complete a story. Then, as a avid reader I'm left hanging.

So I will say this, I love the story and the setting after Naraku is destroy. I hope you update soon. I'm a reader not a writer. Personally I don't like to critize any writer. I in awe of anyone, who bares there soul and takes a chancce. Please continue.

This is a lovely story so far! I don't see why people would flame you, at least Kagome isn't a DEMON and Sesshomaru isn't smiling and giggling. Good Sess/Kag fics are hard to come by without making drastic changes that seem to ruin the story anyway. The point I'm trying to make is...those flamers have no idea what they're talking about, I would like to see them write a fic that would be as good as this one.

hn...im so sad...i thought this was a real chapter --_--....(thinks of ways to kill flamers)

Aaaaawwww... He admits that he loves her. Update soon!

This story so far is great! Keep it up, and i can't wait for the update!

i loved it....u used the series wisely for ue story....cant wait 4 ch.3

I like the tone of it so far. Very meditative and a nice talk between to so seemingly dissimilar people. I admit to some confusion in the first paragraphsabout who exactly was speaking when, but I like the calming effect of this fic.

I am reviewing!! It was awsome! Great job.

Your story is really awesome so far. I can hardly wait for the next chapter.

awww!! are u sure u'll update if u haf 10 reviews? kuz if u dont im going to be VERY VERY mad! heehee juss kiddin! plz update soon!! plz and thanx!

i like the story keep writing please!!

omg i luv it update update!!

i like it so far! i'll be watching it for updates! (>.)

Make this count for like 7 becuse I really want you to update.

^-^ i like this story... its unique.... please update soon ja ne