| umm, was a bit fast and hard to follow. An alright idea but...had no real moments between kags and sess...infact the ending was the only part with them and it just said love at first sight....add some details and get rid of the author notes in the story (they are distracting) Good job on the idea though. And if you fix it up email me.
sesshou_gal169- Sun 22 Oct 2006
| well, you deserve the blueberry cheesecake. if you need a beta-like person e-mail muah! despite my english grade i actually can do grammer (even though that was incredibly grammatically incorrect...and kind of didn't make sense......... but OH WELL!) anyways.... yay fo good story!^^ ::end of rant::
Jessica Blue- Sun 01 Oct 2006
| LMAO I LOVED IT!!
| that was one of the funniest stories ive ever read!! lol
| BAD! BAD! NOOOO CLIFFIES!! NO MORE!! GODD DOG, I mean.... GOOD ENGEL!
| lol! Ditzu sounds like a child!! ha ha
| lol!! this thing is friggen funny!!! lol!
lady lilly- Thu 13 Jul 2006
| This has to be one of the most unquie things I ever read. I enjoyed. Keep up the funny work.
Wonderingspirit- Wed 12 Jul 2006
| Love it especially the end
SleepingChickenNugget- Wed 12 Jul 2006
*sniff*sniff* I'm so happy... and so sad!!! It's overrrr... the story's overrrrr.... *clutches a box of tissues to her chest*
Ok. I'm over it. I think I'll take a page out of your book and go grab myself a Dr. P, and some CHERRY cheesecake, because that is the best flavor of cheesecake in the world.
I hope to read another story of yours soon, so chop chop!!
Best Wishes!
| This was very funny I really liked can't wait for another one of your stories.
dotdotdot- Wed 12 Jul 2006
Kagura...that was good.
loved this!!! and the elfs. And Johnny Depp.
| Superiority is a word and u mispelled it with an e in it. The ending was really funny though and have you seen Pirates of the Carribian 2 yet? It rocks! I'm waiting for your next story! See ya!
Roses_Petal- Wed 12 Jul 2006
| Okay. The chapter was really good.... But I didn't understand if you wanted the italics to go on until the bottom of the page? To end italics use / i >. (Once again take out the spaces. And put it right after the word that you want the italics to stop at.)
SleepingChickenNugget- Wed 12 Jul 2006
AARRGGHH!!!!! I MISSED LIKE THE WHOLE EFFING STORY!
Stupid hotel not having a computer...
*sniff* So sorry!! Great Story!!!
Um... Dr. Pepper? Nononononono! Pibb Extra!! All the way.
Heehee.. you said pixies. Made me think of Pixie stix... that made me cry. They're all gone!! NUUUUU!!!! *sob*
Have you seen the new Pirates of th eCaribbean movie? Huh? Have you?? You need to see it then. Fudrucking awesome.
That's what we need!! A PIRATE fanfic!! Oh... My... god. Kagome and Sess could be like, on two separate parate ships, and then they meet, and sparks fly! (both literally and metaphorically. They'd be blowing eachother's ship apart.) Arrgh! The ideas rush through my brain! Write them down! Write them DOWN !!! I am! I AM!!
Ummm... yeah. So, I hope this makes up for the chapters that I didn't review. Sorry. Stupid family vacation. (The horror. THE HORROR!!)
So, again, great chapter, and I'm expecting one HELL of an Epilogue!
Much love! 3
rhonda34- Wed 12 Jul 2006
| more more more
| I loved it. Please update soon. I have one name that you can use it is Ju Ju. i used it as the name of my alien.Then there is Nefi it is what we call my older brother. That's it the only other names i know aren't as nifty.
| Yep! All correct! Your getting better.^_^ Update soon!
dotdotdot- Wed 12 Jul 2006
YAY~!!! Kagome's mom was choosen! ^^ I liked that. And I liked Sesshoumaru mentioning the lesbian thing with Ai. Kagura should still see the show afterwards and comment about it. So, I want them to end up happy, kinda arguing to add fuel to their fire--something that is there in their relationship cause they get on eachother's nerves sometimes but still get through it, ya know?
I think I had a point somewhere in there...anyway, I can't wait tell Kagome and Sesshoumaru meet so update soon please!!!
Kuma- Tue 11 Jul 2006
| i so thought he'd choose the lesbian lol i want more the story needs more
| MORE MORE MORE ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
dotdotdot- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| This chapter! Kikyou's mom deserved what she got and I like Sakura already. And yeah. Update soon please~!
yayoi taisho- Mon 10 Jul 2006
| totally awsome opening cant wait for it to continue it is so hilarious ok i could never thought that someone would put elves ELVES that is pure genius ok engel your doing a fantastic job ok i am currently starting my first fanfic so i know how it feels
| It was very good. I like the fact that Kagome's mom has elves as well. Update soon
| Hah, your not an idiot for not knowing how to use the italics sign. Okay, so when you want italics... do this. i > / i > (Take out the spaces though.) Put the words you want italicized in between. I hope I helped. And thanks for using my idea.
Blu Pie- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| Awww! Update soooooon please please pleae please please update soon
Blu Pie- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| Awww! Update soooooon please please pleae please please update soon
ger- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| I like this chapter a lot more then the last and I have to ask who is charlie? so plz up date soon but are you alwas going to update in the same day dose that mean that when I finsh there well be more?
Kuma- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| ok i likey update soon
| Yes! You spelled Listerine right cause I am THE ALMIGHTY SPELLCHECKER!!!!! Update son!
bluemoon_175- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| Can't wait to read more so I just going to say this UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE ASAP, or I will continue to bug you with reviews that say UPDATE... ; ^ )
rhonda34- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| please update soon. i realy like this story
FlyingDamnSquirel- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| awesome! i enjoy reading your story
ger- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| do they make enthing biger then DD? so I like it but what hapende at the zoo and why is sess not asking qushtions about kikoy kikoy how ever you spell it I wach the show and that is not what the gay dose you need to wach the show and I need to learen to spell ok love the story plz update soon!^_~
Lady Angel Of Sleep- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| I like it so far I was hoping that Kagome would come ^_^...lol please update it more
KillingPerfection- Sun 09 Jul 2006
that was good! ^_^
keep writing!
| I love it. Update soon.
rhonda34- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| please update soon. i like this story
i cant remember what i had my last name before as.- Sun 09 Jul 2006
| hey, nother good cha, NOW e-mail me! please, I REALLY wanna help! really i do, and im bored, so ya gives me something to do, unles im out with my naghbors...a girl and a guy...lol well, ya, mail meand loved the chap
| I loved it. Aww poor Sesshoumaru having to hang out with that slob I hope that the date is horrible and that Kikyou's mom ends up in a pile of shit or something gross like that. Update soon. I just love this story.
dotdotdot- Sat 08 Jul 2006
Ditiz sounds funny and disgusting. perfect mother for Kikyou. Next is Mrs. Higurashi, right??????? She has to be a good mother! Nice and perfect and one Sesshoumaru likes, right??????
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
KillingPerfection- Sat 08 Jul 2006
that was good ^_^
i have a kid you can use, Kohaku. i think thats how you spell his name.
well anyway, keep writing ^_^
ger- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| no big you got what I wrote I can not speel oh by the way mice, snaks, or fish + pants = :) and make kikyo's mom have a snak I love snaks oh and eat some thing!^_~
CottonCandyIceCream- Sat 08 Jul 2006
| i like it, it was amusing, especially the "are you high" part lol...
| spelling corrections:conversationalist ....you spelled the other word right...um for the nanny 911 thing there are alot of kids you could use but if i was u i would use kiroro its the black version of Kirara or kilala in one of the inuyasha episodes....she was the one that had a whole bunch of kittens....u could also use some of the siblings...like souta or kohaku....a yonger version of kaede its all up to you....anyways update soon i like it
Entity of Sorrows- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Just because you told me not to...yes you did spell appreciated right. Sorry about your sugar high. I sucks when you crash huh? Well talk to you later! Ja-ne!
dotdotdot- Fri 07 Jul 2006
If you need sugar, eat some chocolate or sugary thing?
I think you should add something on the side about Kagura seeing the part where her mom say's she (Kagura) is a lesbian--ya know, seeing the show on TV. And thats all I got. Thats all I got as an suggestion cause I don't know anything else. It's a really unique fic (is there really a reality TV show like it, too?) and I have no idea what the moms would be like (even Kagome's...but her mom should be cool and hip and nice). It might help if we find out more about who Sesshoumaru is, his likes and dislikes and his thoughts on the mom's he is meeting. OK, I did have something to add, but only because you asked.
*GLOMP* And please get sugar back into your system soon so you may write more and update more~! 3
| lmao its great fic ^_~ hehe
| I loved it please update ASAP.
| Hm... For the next date, how 'bout an amuesment park? Carnival? Or maybe a visit to the orphanage?
| You should have Kikyou's mom hyped up on sugar and make her as annoying as some little kid in the back wanting to know if we are there yet. It would be funny to see Sesshoumaru's reaction to someone on a complete sugar rush.
Kitti- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| LOL for your nanny 911 idea you should have Inu or Naraku as the fourth kid lol
The words are correct I think. I was one of the regional spelling bee top ten so I guess it's right. Conversationalist- check!
Grateful-Check!
Oh and for another kid, how about Kohaku or that little girl that Shippou had to fight umm....Souten.That little girl who was related to the Thunder brothers.
Those were just suggestions, you don't gotta use em.. See ya!
The words are correct I think. I was one of the regional spelling bee top ten so I guess it's right. Conversationalist- check!
Grateful-Check!
Oh and for another kid, how about Kohaku or that little girl that Shippou had to fight umm....Souten.That little girl who was related to the Thunder brothers.
Those were just suggestions, you don't gotta use em.. See ya!
InuAngel- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| awesome story i love it! update asap!!!
Daughter_of_Sesshoumaru- Fri 07 Jul 2006
Hallo there. I just wanted to say... er.... you're weird. But it's a good thing, 'cause I'm weird too. And I'm not good with praise and 'good work' crap, so just pretend I said all that. Kay? Kay. ^^
I really do like it... I'm just bad with words.
rhonda34- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| please update soon
rhonda34- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| please update soon
rhonda34- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| pleaseupdate soon. very cute story. i like this story
rhonda34- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| pleaseupdate soon. very cute story. i like this story
rhonda34- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| please update soon. this very cute story. i truly like this story. never read everything like it.
I LUVE IT!!!!!! THIS FIC IS AS CRAZY AS I AM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WaHoOoOooOOO!!!
update soon!!!!
Elisa- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Wow that was quick, I had no clue you'd update in the same day, lol. Anywho, the spellings you asked for are "Conversationalist" and "grateful". You just had an extra 'l' in the first one but the second word was right. As to you wanting to start another story. The fourth child could be Souten (I don't know if that's spelled right) she was in the anime and had a little grudge with Shippo because she's related to the Thunder Brothers (at least I think she was) anywho I don't remember which episode that was. Hope this helps!! ^_^
| I loved it. I liked it because it made me laugh. The thing about Yuki being high was just funny. I liked the elves you should put them in again. I love this please keep up the good work.
dotdotdot- Fri 07 Jul 2006
Sorry about the confusing name.
I LOVE Kagura's mother. She was funny, really funny, especially saying that Kagura was a lesbian. She was a really cool character and she makes a good mother for Kagura. She certainly loves her child too, thinking she can do better than Sesshoumaru (who is probably trying to make the date bad on purpose).
Update soon please~!!!
Havea-___heart- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| HELLO! I LOVES the story, and, I am a excelent wrighter, as my friends say, i am too, lazy to check spelling, but, i could help with this and the Nanny 911, e-mail me up, and I'll see what I can do :P G'Luck
SleepingChickenNugget- Fri 07 Jul 2006
Kanna! Third child=Kanna!
*feels proud of herself*
Heh, so you know how about an hour after you drink caffeine you go into this tired lazy phase? Well, it happens with sugar too. Bummer...
lmao. You're good at parodies!(that is NOT spelled right>>>) Gah... every time I've tried writing one, it's quickly become unrecognizable from the show/book/whatever... I suck...
But you! You have artistic vision, my friend! Either that, or Santa gave you a few "plants" for Chrismahanakwanza-whatever...
NEwayz... woah. For some reason, I thought of blue elves, and then I saw Mel Gibson in his battle costume from Braveheart... and then the whole "mooning"...heehee
*goes through a nasty giggle fit*
Uh, yeah, so what I was going to say is "please update soon" and all that stuff...
Much love! 3
bluemoon_175- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Please you must write more. I have never been more excited to wait for an update. If you don't update the story soon I might start to cry. And, this story is keeping me on my toes. PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON. :^)
ger- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| not that was funny I like it oh and for the nany 911 I like the idea of kunna Is that how you spell it well she is the the white gril. or sanogs bro.
KillingPerfection- Fri 07 Jul 2006
hey, that was good!
i liked it.
i liked the part where he is all like "are you sure you're not high?"
that was funny! ^_^
keep up the good work!
oh and, write some more!!!! PLEZ?!?!?!?!!?!?!!?
SleepingChickenNugget- Fri 07 Jul 2006
Ok, I laughed-my-ASS-off while reading this. I don't know why, but my best guess is that I'm hyper.
You see, the sugar fairy stopped by and gave me FIVE MOTHER-F*CKING POUNDS of pixiestix!
I LUUURVV PIXIE-STIX!!
NEwayz, after about 100 of the brightly colored buggers, I thought 'Hey, I wonder what's up on ASS (HAHA!! Best...Acronym...EVER!) today? Then, when I read your summary, I laughed so hard at the possibilities that I accidentally snorted the pixie-dust up my nose. (IT BUUUURRRNNSS!!)
So, at this point in time, I'm laughing, seeing pink spots (those might be from the Vicodin), crying, and trying to type a slightly coherant letter...
Did I do a good job?
Oh! And I will be your awesome loyal reviewer, who sticks by you through thick and thin! (as long as you're still writing...*glare*)
This story MUST go on!! And the Chapters MUST be longer!! And...uh......... oooh! Blue elves!! Maybe they ate too much of my blue pixie-dust? *gasp* You give them back, you creepy magical midgets!!! Gah!!
heehee... and if you need any help or anything, I've got arse loads of ideas...
Well, hope to hear from you soon!
(damn that's a long review... maybe I should shorten it up?)
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NOPE! *byez!*
Elisa- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| The part about Sesshoumaru's mom being high was funny...but after reading more of it I was starting to wonder if YOU are high?? The elf's were a good touch too. LOL it's ok if you are high. Weed isn't as bad as people make it out to be (but don't tell anyone I said that). Anywho...um, what was I going to say...oh yeah! you did spell "dilemma" right. I'm kinda surprised that I knew that seeing that I get dumber the longer I'm out of school (this coming from a girl about to start college...sad huh?). Anywho, I'll end this cuz I'm babbling...UPDATE SOON!!
Something-or-other- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Well...it was interesting. Yes. Definitely interesting and a little amusing. Keep up the interesting and amusing work.
dotdotdot- Fri 07 Jul 2006
| Not ashamed to say that the elfs were funny and that Sesshoumaru's mom maybe being high was even funnier. Update soon please~!
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