that was great though I have to admit that being tricked into thinking there was going to be a lemon when there wasn't was cruel, and if you would have done it again i would have said you were sadistic sp? and evil. The only problem is that this place won't let me read the epouloge sp?.

Hello. I just wanted to say for this being your first story it was good. Though the chapters were short it was still good.

I have stories as well if you would like to read them. They are under the name Silver_Dog_Demon here in single spark.

This story would be so much better if you went through and spell checked some things. I also know that its hard to keep characters IN CHARACTER sometimes but Sesshomaru would not giggle, chuckle=yes, giggle=NO. You should go back through and change your authors notes. its no ALIGATO, its ARIGATO. You finally got it right towards the end, but seeing all the times you have it wrong it just irritating and overly-fangirlsih. I have no problem with the use of japanese word in stories or authors notes, but use them right! If you need an online japanese dictionary, here is the link for one.

http://www.freedict.com/onldict/jap.html