PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THE STORY

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THE STORY

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

please contineu the chapters i beg of you

I am glad that you have chosen those two fanfictions to focus your time on, because Just Roomies has become a favorite of mine! I will catch up with Cavern Craze on AFF.net! Keep up the good work!

I really am enjoying your writing style..it's very smooth and clean. Please continue the story. ^_ ^

Of this I am glad, you have passed the baton, it merits finishing, but purely on a selfish level, I am so well pleased that you are going to focus on your other 'written children".

Welcome home, you have been so very missed by this fan and I have no doubt everyone else. Welcome home and Arigatou gozaimasu for going to the trouble to inform us all.

Bows Reverently

ElegantPaws

* Sitting in my chair, small tremors can be seen moving along muscles*
I'm okay.
* Facial expression is that of a little kid on a MAJOR sugar high. * I REALLY hope you will update soon!

hi i originally started reading this fic when u first started it and i was wondering if u planned to finish it cause it's really really good and i like it a lot. please let me know if u plan on finishing it or maybe when u might update next

I still love this story. I know that you are trying to keep adding chapters, but could you please not stop. This is one of my favorite fanfictions still and I really like it.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

just wanted to say that i really like ur story. can't wait for the next update

just wanted to say that i really like ur story. can't wait for the next update

Please update...a rather original, amusing, and yes sexy little story needs completion.

update update update please

Please,please add a new chapter this fic is so cool

Realy, realy good. Hope I see it finished soon.

Realy,realy good! Hope I see it finished soon!

Jeeze! Your Such a Good Story Teller!!!! Im Addicted 2 About 8 of Your Stories Now!! lol Please Keep Updating! ^^

How cruel Aikiko!!! I love this story I'm rooting for a Sess/Kag/Inu!! LETS GO! ^^ The story is beautifuly written, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Oh and in your profile you should go back and check for spelling you have a few mistakes. Love ya!!

Addendum....

You did ask...pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaase no threesome. I vote for Sesshoumaru and Kagome wicked evil grin>....ahhh can we not let InuYasha sorta go into a coma or something...I mean....give him something to do whilst Fluffy and Kagster get it on!

Chapter 5

Awwwwwwwwwww....Fluffy loves Kagome....Fluffy loves Kagome smirk>...

Nicely done. Hope you get to update this one soon. Very charming.

LOL! Truly , you have many writing voices and I do admire and love them all lol. My favourite line from chapter 4:

"This Sesshoumaru will only warn you once more half-breed; keep your voice down or I will make it my own priority to permantely shut that cesspool that you call your mouth."

DAMN! How often have I felt this way as Inu Pain In The Ass has gone on and on. Very nice. Enjoying this piece immensely.

As to some "fan's rudeness". Consider it an indirect compliment. How you say? They get entwined in your work and then miss it when it is gone, then take on the poopie mouth aspect of our InuYasha as revenge for not being fulfilled. Forgve them...ignornance for some is bliss.

Thank you for a great chapter, gonna make coffee take another break and get on with more amusement.

I am very glad that you are writng again! (Healing) I adore your writing, and I would love if you would update this story! I look forward to reading anything you wirite regardless. Thanks,
'Nes

update update update please pretty please

I would love to see more of this

I love this story!!! I want to know what happens next so bad! When are you going to update?

I liked the chappie! Please update soon!! [dunno why others haven't rev. but plz write...]

-Dani.

update update update please

please update update update please

please please update this fic soon? I love the plot and how Sesshomaru is finally realizing that humans (especially kags) are worth it....

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

ooooo...i hope you update this soon! i can't wait till you do!

I love this fanfic! Please update soon! Thanks.

or at least that wass my impression...o.O...was i informed wrong?

katana is a type of sword not the translation for the word...just so u know

wonderful!
I love it!!!!
you must write more! ^_^

I think you are doing a fantastic job with this fic... I am really into it. I find it mind-blowing... I love the plot!!! main reason why i am reading it... well also cause Sesshomaru is in it...

At some points i find it humourous others serious... You've got what it takes to be one of the best writers i have the pleasure to review too...

good luck
i hope you update soon.. (meaning take your time... lol)

Thank you for the updates! I do like how the story is flowing, it is very nice and easy with just the right amount of fights and lust. Good job!

awwww...how sweet! i'm such a sucker for threesome fluff, especially between kag, sessh and inu. i'm ESPECIALLY inclined toward threesome leomns, so i say w00t w00t! bring on the threesome!! cmon, you can't honestly say after all this that you want one of them to get rejected? (i guess it'd have to be inu, coz this is a kag/sess site. i don't want inu to get rejected!! waaahh!!) i'm loving all this fluff and stuff now, don't spoil it all with angst!! d^-^
update soon, please!!
emily

I love this story!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Please hurry and update. This is good.

this is a very intersting story i cant wait to see more

Wonderful! I love this story! Update soon please?

This story is greatly enjoyed by me (in fact, all of your stories are). The plot is interesting and is somewhat changed from the regular plots seen on this website, not to mention the fact that the unique personalities of the characters are well pronounced (I especially like how you portrayed Inuyasha! Lol, it's so much fun seeing him getting jealous). Anyways, I just wanted to say that your writing is greatly appreciated and I hope to see more of it (PLEASE try to break the habbit of continously starting new stories, I really want to read the endings of your stories *sob*). Also, I hope that you don't make it a threesome lemon.

Cabin fever is going to set in soon. What a situation! heh

I love your story keep it up! Man are you gonna get flamed for the Kikyo comment, those jerks can gey vicious can't they. Cudos to you though for stating what you like and i respect your descion(can't spell) even though i'm not a fan. I have read some good Fanfics with her as the love interest. Umm I lost where i was going with my praising and support...anyway keep it up. You have a least one person who understands that your human and have a life!

Weeeeee,great update,love the story.*sighs dreamily*..WAFF for this chappie,lol.Update soon,cant wait to read more.^_^

I like your story, but this chapter isn't as strong as your others. I can't quite put my finger on it. Sesshoumaru does seem unable to make up his mind. Also, your descriptions have disappeared. I think it would be better for you not to rush. You write well and you want to keep your standards high.

Amazing Story! I love the portral of Sesshomaru and Kagome in this story, you've managed to keep both of them in character fairly well! I think this should be a Sesshomaru/Kagome story because it would be kinda hard to make a lemon of all three of the charactgers seeing as Sesshomaru and inuysha have SOME differences between them. Find some way to get rid of Inuyasha for a couple minutes, or the entire rest of the story! i love him as a charactger, but for some reason your story strikes me as more of a Sess.Kag. Just my opinion! Continue, i's love to read more no matter what pairing you make it!

i love that ' InuYasha's life is his own; only he can take it' that is true and i believe that whole heartedly....update soon

I went and checked out the manga at ear tweak. That was a very sad ending for Kikyou. Still she was honoured in the end.
I love your story and I hope you continue to write it. I like how Kagome managed to make some peace towards the end.
Keep up the good work.

Hi! So....i am reviewing, which is rare for me, but only because you said you wanted reviews and i want you to continue with the story. I love this story and am very pleased that you have updated! You keep saying that you are trying to rush the lemon, but your writing is good enought that you dont have to. I love your characterization, and I adore a kag/sess/inu pairing, threesome or no threesome. My only critique is that you keep changing Sess's mind about what kagome is to him, and how he feels about her. Sess is a predator, single minded and sexy. Not that he won't think things through, but I think that it is OOC for him to be so wishy washy,
Okay well that's all, I LOV E this story, and this is me officially begging for an update.
'NES

Sugoi! - hope i typed it write ^^ Yayyyy~~~ -does happy dance- our MuteShadow has worked her magic again and made, somewhat, a pac between Kagome and Sesshomaru. Will Sesshomaru recitfy his earlier statement towards Kagome? How is the lemon going to be presented? Although they both show attraction and desire towards eachother, including the fact on the kiss scene, Kagome is and will be a willing participant, but I'd like to add that hopefully there will be more direct actions and dialogue between Kagome and Sesshomaru to be able to make the lemon come in smoothly. Ooh boy ^^;; I hope it made sense the way I explained it...
Keep on rocking MS =D

yay new chap... me want more... update soon... thanks

I hope you update soon I'dreally like to see where this story is going.

awsome chapter!!! can't wait 2 c what happens next!!!=)

UPDATE ASAP!

Are they ever gonna get out of that cave? Update soon!

Very good! I love this story!!! I can't wait till you get the next chapter up. And it is ok if you take a little while on the lemon, my favorite part of stories is the development of the characters.

i hate inu hes so dumb....i love sess/kag tho update

This is a great fic I hope you update soon. I know how hard that can be, I haven't updated my stuff in a while. I'm playing hooky and reading yours! Keep up the good work!

Uh oh. The proverbial Dog House. *scratches head sheepishly* I don't know whether I intend that as a pun or not. For all of his 9 centuries, he's certainly behind on his emotional and social development. *sigh*

this story is awesome! Poor kag. Inu threw her. I can't wait till you update! ^^

YAY an update!...and a kiss O.O lol.Great chappie,i cant believe Inu threw Kagome like that! grrrr..bad Inu,BAD! love the story,update soon plz? ^_^

I have read some of you other stories and they are really fantastic, and I know this one will be to. So I hope you keep up the job well done, I can't wait untill you update. So I hope you UPDATE ASAP PLEASE.

I'm so happy that you updated

WOW!! that was sad... But it was a great chapter though!! Please update A.S.A.P!!!

I love this story...please update soon!!

c'mon, i've been waiting 4EVA for you to update this fic! i know that you have several fics on the go, i love reading your work, but seriously, it's been like over a month! i am a great fan of your work, and do sincerely look forward to your next update in not just this fic, but your others as well.
i hope to hear from you soon
emily

I really like all your stories, please update

plz update soon!!! i luv all ur stories but i think i like this one the best!!!=)

hey MuteShadow
those flamers most likly have not writen anything on the net before (i havent posted here but on Quizella i have a really good Sesshy?u story and i know how hard it is to think of something new) so to all those flamers out there "U TRY PUTING UP A STORY AND UPDATING IT EVERY WEEK!" Have a Nice Day Catofhope

plz update soon!!!=)

i lov this story!!^.^please write more chapters!

awww this is really great so far please update soon
!

awesome story so far!! Sorry to hear some of your reviewers are being assholes. I sincerly hope that you will continue the story despite the fact that some of your readers are not very appreciative of the wonderful work that you do. update soon.

I really like all your stories please update soon

I'm sorry you had to get those reviews. I for one think your right...You do have a life outside the computer and the people who say to update more don't have a life. I wish you would keep updating because your really good....Those other 'fans' (My ass) are stupid for saying anything like that. You are a great writer...This is a great story with a great story line ^.^ It's one of my favorites. I wish you will keep writting But it's your choice and I will accept it either way ^.^

From:
A TRUE fan ^_^

plz updaye soon!!! =)

I like this fic. I like the idea and how it's written. There's just one thing bugging me...sorry to mention this, but Inu's and Sesshie's clothing that Kagome covers herself with is spelled 'haori' and not 'hoari'. Sorry if I'm being nitpicky, but I just noticed it, is all. Anyways, great job.

Don't listen to those people! Especially if they all had grammer like that girl. You do update rather frequently! More frequently then many other authors! And I am glad that you put up that authors note. I like to be informed about whats going on and I am glad that you didnt leave us in the dark. Please dont stop writing fanfiction!

You poor dear. Hey, I appreciate you warning us. I didn't warn a soul last year because I couldn't and I STILL got chewed out. Nevermind that though. Don't let a few silly people ruin the experience for you. I for one can't wait until you update again. I'm looking forward to Sesshoumaru's plan (and watching it blow sky high in his face -.~) but I would rather wait for you to get something great together than you throw up on the story. So take your time. Everything's great anyway so why not? Oh and um..if you have time...do you think you could send me an email when you update? Please?

I really like this story. I will be looking for the next chapter. So please update soon, if you have time after fixing that web site. Well good luck with that. Ta Ta.

hey man this is an awsome fic even if you don't update often that's okay DON'T LET THE HATERS GET YOU DOWN!!! you are an amazing writer i only wish i could write half as good as you! please don't stop writing fics your too good to give it up!!
your number one fan :puff

I was very sorry to hear that some of you're reviews and ratings have not been kind. I very much enjoy your stories. I've read plenty of Inuyasha fanfiction, and very few authors are on par with you, in my opinion. You have creative plots and well-written stories that flow nicely, neither too quick or too slow. Of course I cannot wait for the next installment, but perhaps because I also have several unfinished stories, I understand that getting the next chapter up requires time that can be hard to come by. Anyway, I just wanted to make sure that you got some more appreciative fan mail. Good luck with your website, too. It's looking really nice so far, so I anticipate the final result. I anticipate your next update, when you get the opportunity. Ja ne.
~Decente Renko

Very very good!! Dont listen to any bad reviews. They have no idea what they're talking about. Your writing is smooth and enjoyable to read, and all the people are not ooc. I can't wait till you update. Oh yes, your website is really cool ^_^.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Hi
I Love this Story very much ^^ and I `m very sorry that you got so cruel Reviews. I ´m very angry at this people and hope that you will contine this Story. I read so many Fics on this Site and not many are this good as this one ^^ So please I beg you contine.

P.S : I´m from Germany so please don´t get angry when my English is not perfect ^^

Another amazing chapter! I can't believe that some "fans" would be rude and pressure you into trying to make the chapters come out faster! Hello, you do have a life outside of writing fanfiction. I completely understand. I'm a beta reader, and at times, things just get crazy. It's the people that give nasty comments that put you down and make you want to quit writing. Just ignore them. Your true fans understand and will always be there to support you. So, please don't stop writing! *gives MuteShadow a cookie* ^_^ I love your stories so much! Please update!

Don't let one or two preadolescent bungholes with a dozen alts and one brain cell between them stop you from writing if you enjoy it..I mean, consider the source!...They're too stupid to use proper english instead off AOLspeak!

^___^ i really like this fic & i'm sorry for all those impatient people who can't wait for an update. They don't need to take it out on you! Many authors just quit with their fanfictions but you said you weren't, there was no need for them to get snippy about it!! grr but once again good story! I like how it is gradually forming and not a bunch of OOCness -__-'''

whawho this chappy rox inu winning Kag's sick (though thats not good) and Sesshy's beast being anouing (I really like those blood beast things) please update soon

I love your story and I'm sorry you must deal with the rude reviewers. Too bad this site doesn't have a banning policey, because those rude people deserve it. Anyway, just letting you know that there are readers who enjoy your work and wish for you to continue your stories in your own time frame.

Damn, this story just keep getting better and better. Can't wait for the next update.

Hey MuteShadow! I know this may not be much, but thank you. For making a little time for us and write=) I know your life is hectic and once again, congrats on getting into TU =D and the brand new spanking apartment, I wish you luck.
"Wish for what you need. Work for what you want" a quote I found in "The Sisterhood of the Travelling Pants" You're doing great and once again, tank you=)

Onto the review, I'm a little confused. Is he mainly doing this for revenge or does he actually, even a little, like Kagome?? Although I think I know the answer, I just want to be sure. Hope to see you soon=)

By the way, the site you and SilentAngel have worked on, is beyootiful!! ^^ I love it and I can't wait to see more!

Send my regards to Selena=)
Love,
Momo

WOW!! this chapter is SO GREAT!!! I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!! =)

I am sorry to hear about the problems at your site. I had checked it out a couple of weeks ago but didn't get a chance to get into it. I hope you do manage to bring it up.
I am also sorry to learn of all the problems you received from being kind enought to let people KNOW it would be a while before you posted. You have a really good story here and I would hate to see you abandon it.
However, I can understand why you might since the whole thing has probably soured for you.
Good Luck and I hope you don't abandon writing all together.

Well. People are jerks. I'm not the biggest fan of chapters that are purely AN's, but sometimes they are necessary. Anyways, thank you for posting this chapter despite certian people's rude comments. Other readers are not so coarse, and do appreciate the effort that goes into writing a fanfiction. I am enjoying this story, and hate it that someone was such an idiot that they would say something like that to an author's note that was immformative. If I thought that was a legitimate email I'd asked you to pass along my disregards and that such juvenile displays were unseemly, along with being a showcase of bad grammer. Anyways, I hope other readers have replied in a similar manner, and that you are recieving more pleasant reviews than those previously! Good luck with your endeavors!

Hey, just wanted to give you some encouraging and uplifting comments since it sounds like you're having a rough time with the flamers!

You've got a great talent for writing. I've read many stories that just sceam "i've been written by a 12 yr old that has never picked up a book". I'm rather picky with what I read. Your stories have been well plotted, well written, and intriguing to keep me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I really like the angle you take and the way you represent Sesh. You keep him in character while adding depth. Great job!

As a reader, some of my fave stories have only been updated every 6 months so I know what it's like to wait. However, the wait makes the reading so much sweeter. As for the impatient flamers, I can only say that your stories have made them obsessed. Don't let them ruin your writing morale!

Only one request, please continue writing Just Roomies. I really enjoy it.
Wait..one more request! Please keep updating, whether it be in a week or month. Your real loyal fans are those that will keep waiting and they won't flame you for it.

Kitana

Love the story soo far, thanks for the new chapter, Can't wait to see what kagome will do when she wakes up lol shes a lucky one, sleeping between the two of them.
Hope to see the lemon part pretty soon.
Keep it up and Update Soon
InuSusu-Sama

O.O omg no plz dont stop updating!! i understand that life gets in the way and its hard to update ur stories so u know what u should tell those ignorant ppl to just go f**k themselves.Plz dont stop updating b/c i love ur stories, i dont care if i have to wait b/c its worth in the end..*puppy dog eyes*

I am very sorry you have vengeful fans. I love this story and appreciate knowing that you have not forgotten about it. A threesome lemon would be hot. (wink, wink. ) Anyway I just thought you'd want to know. Keep up the good work. Sleep occassionally.
'Nes

I ask that you forgive me for my crude language when I say that, on behalf of all who utterly and thoroughly enjoys every single one of your stories, "screw the 'fans' that sent you pointless and thoughtless semi-flames that are not even justified to the lowest degree." Not considering the fact that she would bother to sent a badly spelled message using the address ihateyou@yahoo.com, I really don't see where the e-mail holds merit. I just hope the girl finds better things to do than complain about the rate of update. At the very least, the author is writing for the sake of productivity while she writes for the sake of something that I have yet to figure out what.

I sincerely hope her malcontent would not sway your opinion of all readers in general, as I am sure that for every 'fanmail' you receive, there will always be more actual fanmails sent to your address. Talent takes time, and I hope that someday others would realize that fact as well. I am grateful for the fact that you would even update even after receiving those discouraging message, and I thank you from the bottom of my heart for all the wonderful stories you have brought to the Sesshoumaru and Kagome fandom. And no, I'm not trying to flatter you just so you would update more (though I would not mind that, it is not my intention). If you wish, all the time in the world is in your hand and you should be free to do what you like instead of bothering with thoughtless demands. As much as the frustration of waiting there will be, thoughtful readers should be willing to give the author time to produce their masterpieces.

I bid you the best fortunes in all aspects of your life outside of writing, and hope once again that you not take the words to heart. And finally, I leave you with a final quote that would hopefully lift your spirit if only a tiny bit:

"Some people are like slinkies...you can't help but smile when you see them tumble down the stairs."

Sincerely,
SilentNox

I like your stories and I thoroughly enjoied this chapter. As a fellow fanfic writer I think it's appalling that people would harass you about not updating quickly enough, especially when you're making another site for your fans. I don't have nearly as much on my plate as you and it takes me easily a week or more to get out a descent sized chapter, so I applaud you for sharring what you can when you can. Anyway if you ever need some help with ideas or reading through a chapter let me know and if your curious to read a sess/oc story look up Passion in the Storm on mediaminer.org - the few people who actually reviewed absolutely loved it...but no pressure =)

I'm glad that you added a new chapter....I was a little disappointed at first when I saw that the previous update was an A/N, but that's no problem....we all have to do it sometimes....besides, I for one appreciate the link.

Unfortunately, is pains me to say this, but seriously....SOME PEOPLE NEED TO LIGHTEN UP....SENDING NASTY EMAILS to authors who use their own precious time to try and entertain us IS NOT THE WAY TO GET THEM TO UPDATE.

Quite frankly, it is petty and disgusting, and shows how unappreciative you people actually are....I understand that there are quite a few readers on this site that are likely in their teens and have nothing better to do than flame people with their own bad grammar so that they can feel better about themselves....But seriously, I have never seen any writings from some of these same people....maybe they should give it a try before they criticize someone else. It is not as easy as one might think...especially when you have to juggle the resposibilities of being an adult in todays' world. And anyone who disagrees with me on that can PISS OFF.

Anyway, now that I have said that...I will say once again....Yay....I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope that you don't let insensitive jerks discourage you, because you are in fact quite talented.....UPDATE SOON, M'Kay?

Do not let a few whiners make you quit writing. You write for yourself and others enjoyment, and there are those out here who enjoy the story. I have waited two years for chapters on one story without resorting to yelling at the author, and others should be just as patient. If they aren't, they aren't worth getting upset over. Don't let them get to you, just hit delete! The story if very good so far, keep writing!

Kim

I'm sorry to hear that...What they did is quite ridiculous and immature. They obviously never wrote fanfiction before (and thank god, the spelling in that one note made me shudder) AND/or they have no life.

I'm quite excited about your site, really, its always nice to have more than one SessKag fansite. I cant wait until the site is complete and filled with fanart + fanfiction goodness~

And though, I read your fanfiction everytime you update them...I'm not much of a threesome fan...but I'll probably read it for the SessKag interaction anyway. xDDD Ha ha...

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

plz update soon!!!!=)

oooooohhhhhhhh nice web site :) still update soon

OMG! OMG! Ha! Ha! Ha! I hope you find what I am about to share as funny as I find it. The whole part of this chapter with Sesshou's hoari on Kagome's legs remimded me of this time in my English class during my sophmore year of high school. I was wearing a skirt or something because my legs were cold, this cute guy that sat next to me noticed and offerd me an extra shirt that he had in his backpack, I of course, thanked him and placed the shirt over my legs. I should probobly mention that he was always doing kind things like such and that I had a crush on him at the time. I wounder...( But, then again, this happend like 3 years ago, and I haven't seen him since we graduated last year.) Anyway, I' think I'd like to see a threesome with mostly Sess/Kag action. Keep up the good work!!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I was just wondering when you were going to update Cavern Craze again. It's great, I hope you update soon. I hope you continue with it.

*unable to control herself* Uwaaah! This is getting good. Please update soon, ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!

This story rocks!! I 3 it! For whether or not you should do a threesome or two separate lemons, I think 2 separate lemons would be better. Preferably, it should just be Sesshoumaru with Kagome. Inuyasha should be kicked out of the cave or something! Other than that, I can't wait for you to update! Keep up the amazing work!

I like this fanfiction and eagerly wait to see what happens

I love this, please update soon.

NO!! NO!! NO!! NO!! Please don't do that to me!! DO NOT let that moron Inuyasha, get with Kagome. Come on please. I don't have the internet at home and i'm going to my grandparents house special for this.Don't ruin it for me.

Wow! The only other fic I've read so far where Kagome gets stuck between the inu brothers is A Breeder's World, but I doubt there's going to be a threesome there. To tell you the truth, I kinda like the idea of a Sessh/Kag/Inu sandwich; sounds delicious, don't you think ;)
Btw, youki is demon energy; I think you meant youkai (even though youkai aren't exactly demons, more like mischievous apparitions, but the english translation has been thus established so far).
Gambare!

OMG UPDATE!!!!!

I still like. Can you put me on a mailing list so I know when you've updated?

This is sooo good!! I would rather you have just a Sess/Kag lemon, but if you put a threesome it'll be fine with me. Update soon please!!!

This is a great story and I look forward to future updates. Please update soon.

BTW, hoari, is actually spelled haori, and youki is not a demon, but the term used to describe the energy or magical ki of a demon. Youkai is used for demon.

i LuV it update soon! fuNnie how inu yasha and sess get jealous. =) sess X kag pls.

YEAH!! Awesome!! Update soon!

Ja ne.

Hi! Great story I love it!

More?

Also lemon between Sesshoumaru and Kags NOT baka-inu. (Obviously the "right" choice! :)

Hmmm very interesting so far.I like it and i want to read more.About the whole lemon thing,it doesnt really matter if there are two separate ones or a threesome b/c either way i'd love it lol.Well good story so far.I think sesshys plan tho is gonna blow up in his face LOL.Update soon, cant wait to read more! :)

Yay! I really like this....it is startingout quite nicely...I hope you continue.....and ont he subject of the lemon... Sess/Kag/Inu... definitely.... threesomes are soo HOT.

YAY! This is awsome you have to have to continue =)

I like this story. Good idea.

great first chap... hope to see more.. i see great potential.. keep up the good work... update soon... thanks

that was great

This seems like it is going to be a good story, please continue with it.

WOW!!! That was so good! Please update soon! I thought it had alot of humor in it!! It was so kawaii!!

Ja ne!

Hey! This fanfict is the bomb. Keep it up I love Sess x Kag x Inu. There the best and if you can please make a lemon with all three of them if you can. your doing great .

well done. This looks like it will be a great story i can't wait till you update again.

Whoo whoo!!! Awesome new story man!!!! Can't wait for you to update this and "Just Roomies". I was practically dying of laughter with the Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru interaction and the argument with Kagome. Seriously can't wait for the new update so update as soon as humanely possible!!!!!

Ja ne.