your story sucks Sesshomaru would never die at the hand of the worthless halfbreed for a mortal woman (Kagome) He is more honorable and noble to do such learn how to write before ever thinking about writing again because you seriously suck ass

Bye Loser

WTF IS WITH YOUR SPELLING??!!! DID YOU NOT LEARN PROPPER GRAMMER IN SCHOOL, OR SOMETHING? IF YOU'RE GOING TO POST SOMTHING ON THE INTERNET, YOU SHOULD AT LEAST KNOW HOW TO SPELL WHAT IT IS YOU'RE WRITING!!!