Realizations are starting to hit Sesshoumaru about Kagome. XD I love your authors note at the end too. It made me laugh. ^_^
Oh grin all innocently you want but i know when i smell a plot, hehe. Hm, I don't think his mother or Jaken can get in the way if he decides to mate her but his mother will most certainly push him toward her if she thinks it best. This chapter was so cute i just wanted to cuddle with my computer, haha, can't wait to see the next one.
*giggleS* i rather like this, it's sweet, and i wonder what dear ole momma will have to say now :p
Lovely Amber, simply lovely. I adore the pace that this story is taking. I look forward, as always, to your next installment.
YAY! more momma Sesshy! I can't wait. She always brings a few words to think on, and I do love when she does what all others do best and embarrass her son. I love the gradual evolution you've given their relationship (K/S) It feels real, and more meaningful this way. KUDOS! Can't wait for more.
hm... somehow Innocent is not the word that comes to mind when thinkng about what will likely be Sesshomaru's thoughts as he permits himself (or is further forced -I see thanks to his haha-ue forthcoming) to view Kagome a a beautiful, MATE-ABLE female. ;)
I look forward to seeing what mischief his mother's unexpected visit will bring. *giggles*
Thanks for writing!
hihip (Chapter 32) - Tue 29 Mar 2011
:) lovely
I like this 'ending' of that relationship as well. ^_^ I don't Dislike Inuyasha particularly... I just don't like how he basically verbally abuses Kagome in cannon.
It's cute to see INUYASHA having figured out the pair's impending relationship before they do even. *laughs* Very humorous.
Thanks for writing!
Tammy (Chapter 31) - Sat 19 Mar 2011
Simply wonderful!
I love this ending to Inuyasha and Kagome's relationship! Much better than the usual leaving her for Kikyo, blah blah blah. Very sweet chapter. Definitely love the little insights into Sesshoumaru's thinking. :)
Yeah, i like a clean split and not a lot of cursing and sitting going around. Haha, Sesshomaru's going to try and keep her hidden from the world like a princess in a tower, so does that make him the prince or the dragon? Hehe, can't wait for the next chapter.
OH! I FORGOT TO ADD! I thought that the pace you've been taking is great. Its not smoothly linear, but that works for this story. You're moving at a pace that isn't too fast but you arn't dragging things out with unecessary fluff. Like those 3 years went through quickly, but you got the gist of it. I mean you dont need a doesn't chapters of anticdotes about Kagome in school. Not necessary. This was perfect. And I like that you've come back a few times to a few scenes that although very brief, were meaningful. It makes the story more fulfilling.
I love the "realistic" interpretation of inuyasha and Kagome's ending relationship. In fandom it feels like certain aspects are sensationalized to the point of dibelief. I love that they had a heart to heart, but that it didn't get overly emotional - I mean after 3 years separation it just seems they would part ways with some difficulty, but it would be something they were ready for because they had done 3 years of separation already. Also, I love that Inuyasha isn't some idiot - he gets there is something going on between the two, and is more insightful to that then even they are (in spite of all kagome's wisdome, and Sesshomaru's experience!) Oh and Sesshomaru was SO possessive (but believably so) I loved that bit at the end where he wants her emotional ties to be all his. He's almost like a little kid when it comes to Kagome. Its adorable, mainly because he retrains from acting out on it, but inside you know how he's feeling and thinking. Thanks for so many updates!
lauren (Chapter 31) - Fri 18 Mar 2011
Aw, I love a possessive Sessy :)
I really liked that you gave them (Inuyasha & Kagome) a happy sort of closure, rather than a sad/angry one. While I prefer a SessKag pairing, I still love Inuyasha as a character and I don't like how often he is villainzed in SessKag fics :( I do think that he seemed to give up on her rather easily though.
Anyway.. still love this story and awaiting its updates!
I was hoping he'd slap a huge kiss on her when he saw her again, guess that won't be happening right now. Can't wait, must have fluff soon or i'll go into Sess/kag withdrawal, the symptoms aren't nice, weeping and reading hundreds of previously read fanfiction till new ones appear, lol.
Aw, so cute he finally realized he missed her for her. In the next year he'll probably go stir crazy waiting for her to come back because his hentai self will reveal itself soon, hehe.
Yay!
I like it too.. because as much as we all love the inuyasha that would fight.. if everyone else did some growing up while she was gone, you know he probably did too.
Can't wait for more!
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