Inu in the woods by Nannanina
The Suprise
It was a hot and sunny day, and our favourite group of shard hunters travelled down a road in a forest somewhere in the west. The sky was blue, birds sang in the trees and flowers swayed in the wind. All in all it was a beautiful day, 'if it wasn't so damn hot!' Kagome thought where she walked behind Inuyasha and in front of Miroku and Sango. Shippou sat on her shoulder and fanned himself whit his small hands, it didn't work so well. 'If that baka doesn't let us take a break soon I will melt!' And that was when she remembered that she could take a break, because if Inuyasha tried to stop her, she would say 'sit' and then that problem would be out of the world. So she did just that, stopped in the middle of the road. Sango almost crashed into her but sidestepped in time. Mirokus hands also found Sangos butt in time.
"HENTAI!" She screamed and punched him in the face.
"It was worth it." Miroku mumbled from the ground where the punch had landed him. Kagome stared at the chaos she had made and sighed. In front of her Inuyasha stopped and turned towards them.
"Why did you stop, wench, keep going!" he yelled angrily. Kagome sighed again and glared at him.
"I'm not moving! We take a break right here, right now!" Inuyasha looked somewhat stunned before he got his guts together and yelled back.
"Why should we, bitch!" Kagome glared and opened her mouth so say the most terrible, fearsome word Inuyasha had ever heard.
"Sit." It was so quiet Inuyasha could barely make it out, but it wasn't necessary that he heard it. Down he went and a muffled string of curses found its way up from the ground.
"Watch your mouth, idiot brother." Kagome spun around to see the tall, powerful and beautiful form of no other than the taiyoukai from the west, Sesshoumaru. 'Wait, rewind a bit there! Beautiful? Since when did Sesshoumaru get beautiful?' She was pulled out from her thoughts when Shippou gasped and found his way behind her head. Kirara mewed before she turned into her large form and stood protective in front of Sango. Miroku raised one eyebrow at Sesshoumaru before looking at Inuyasha who had risen.
"What are you doing here you bastard? If you want tessaiga, fuck of!" Sesshoumaru turned his icy stare on Inuyasha and said in a calm, sexy voice:
"Didn't I tell you to watch your mouth?" Kagome nearly fainted when she realised that she had thought that Shesshoumarus voice was sexy. 'He is a cold, heartless youkai who is a murderer that is beautiful whit a sexy voice and really sexy butt... wait... bad Kagome, bad!' She mentally slapped herself for thinking of Sesshoumarus butt as sexy, but damn it was! 'This isn't going to well.'
Whit a roar Inuyasha lunged himself at Sesshoumaru who had turned into a defensive position. Kagome thought fast and yelled 'SIT'. It had nothing to do whit that Sesshoumaru was sexy! Ok, maybe a little...
Miroku raised an eyebrow again and turned towards Kagome whit a look that said 'what the hell?' Kagome blushed and averted her gaze. Sango blinked and Kirara turned back into her small kitten form from surprise. Inuyasha yelled a muffled 'the fuck?' and tried to rise again.
"Why did you do that, lady Kagome? Are you not feeling well? Maybe I should look for injuries on your body." Kagome blanched and started look wildly around her for a reason to have sat Inuyasha. And she found one. Behind Sesshoumaru stood a little girl, she was maybe around seven years old and adorable!
"Violence isn't good for children!" She yelled and pointed towards the little girl. All eyes turned towards the little girl who hid behind Sesshoumaru from all attention.
"Sesshoumaru-sama! Sesshoumaru-sama! Wait!" A small toad youkai ran out from the forest and wheezed.
"What the hell is that?" Sango screamed in disgust and made a face towards the green youkai. Sesshoumaru looked unpleased how the situation had turned, he glared at the toad youkai and scowled. Kagome watched fascinated how the toad got kicked in the head and flew back a few meters. 'Sesshoumaru sure can use his legs!' she thought but mentally kicked herself as soon as the thought had made its way into her brain. 'I'm going insane!'
Suddenly a woman ran out from the forest and threw a scroll at Sesshoumaru. Kagome watched in horror how Sesshoumaru tried to block the scroll but it stuck to his tail. A bright blue light blinded everyone and when it died out, a dog sat where Sesshoumaru had once stood. Kagome felt like screaming and kick the guts out from the miko. When a laughing sound reached her ears she turned angrily at Inuyasha who laughed like mad and pointing a finger at the dog.
"SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT! SIT!" She screamed and pulled everyone from their shocked states.
I decided to redo the story, but for the better I hope! Tell me if you think it is better then the first version.