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Pure Heart by Juhdora

the sin

I DON"T OWN this fic ^^

This is one of my friend's fics and she doesn't have the confidence to translate this fic into English so...

I and Luckyprincess help her.

Her nick is Lishrayder and this is her mail : kokoronouta2003@yahoo.com

NOTE: WE DON"T OWN and NEVER OWN INUYASHA!!!!! Awww... it's a pity ><

This is Sess/Kago fic so there is no vote!Nee?

Thanks!

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Pure Heart

-Author: Lishrayder

-Summary: Kagome made a terrible sin. In the state of despair, she got lost and got trapped in a magic forest by a vengeful demon along with a certain demon lord.

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Chap1

Knife

Tokyo's night. The city was flared by those cars' light, coloured poster facias radiant with bright rays and the luxurious light could be seen from buildings' windows. Tokyo's tower- the famous iron titan stood there quietly, wearing a silver clothe of the mysterious moon, viewing the roaring and crowded city in an orphic silence.

The shrine lied in the heart of Tokyo, its hoar and still appearance seemed to seclude itself from the hasty tempo of the modern world out side. No one had ever known how old this shrine was. The only thing witnessed was it had been here for long, a so very long time ago. The wood pillars of the shrine's gate were a reliable proof. They were decaying day by day under an unseen pressure of the time tide. Coldness and dryness. Yes! Time had the power to change everything. It destroyed life and only itself could bring life back from the pits of helluva. It can absolved every pain and surrogate it with other agonies at the same time...a duller pain ...and a deeper hole in your heart. In that dogged fighting, this shrine was an outsider. It stayed in screne spatial like it always did. A peaceful place could wash all the grieves away, blew hatred and miserableness to far ,and healed the dolours and pains in anyone's soul whose wandered this holy shrine. All of human's banal feelings had no place here. Once you were here, there would only be one thing stayed still in your heart : an equanimity. This shrine was too pure compared to the out-side world.... Too pure it was deemed unusual.

That was why Kagome loved this place. She felt protected when she was here, a place where she called home. A soft wind carried the heat of one night in the end of summer agitating those sleepy leafages. Under the mysterious moon, cherry petals floating in the air, following the wind like butterflies' illusion wings vacillating in dark night. Walking slowly on dry leaves carpet of the silent garden, Kagome looked like a goddess blending within the rhythmic dance of sakura petals. Her feature blurred away the gleams of the moon, appearing an unlaboured and holy beauty. Ignoring the night's wind playing with her raven long hair, Kagome slackened herself into deep thoughts. She usually came back home whenever she felt tired, bored about the life or just simply wanted to find a place for relaxation because her life was so abnormal. It didn't like other 15 years old girls'.

But this time was diffirent. Kagome didn't come home to relax. How could she relax when the battle for Shikon no Tama was going to the end, when the circle of fate stepped near her..? Would the fate twist her life and others' as the wind swirling those tattery cherry petals? Would everyone's life be trampled under the weight of fate as she trampled these dry leaves? Might be! Could be! Another wind was blowing, its coldness signified that the night had become darker. Leaves was blown by the wind, making those shadows on the ground shivered gently. Gripping her coat, Kagome sighed heavily. Time passed slower and slower while the air frozen by the night and silence.

"I am fleeing!!Fleeing away from everyone! I'm a bad girl... I have betrayed their trust.....betrayed Inuyasha's trust.....!Inu..ya..sha.."

Hearing that name, her heart was wringed painfully. Since she met and loved him, her heart had to put up with these unseen sorrow. She had to face this pain when seeing Inuyasha gripped Kikyo tightly in his heated lap, when seeing his sorry, imploring eyes, when she came back to him and accepted both of them. But it was different now....She had a pain which brought hurt for the other. The pain tortured her when Sango and Miroku's confused eyes had directed at her, thrust her heart by Shippo's tears....and all of them was dry sound when Tesssaiga was dropped down with silver hair flied in the wind, hugging a face which was tortured by many feelings : miserableness, surprise, dejection, elegy..., looking at her in dead air, seeming to tore her heart which had been stabbed so many times. Her hands were soaked with blood, a stream of nauseous scarlet fluid spread as if wanted to devour her body. Those red liquor appeared everywhere on the ground with a chalky face frosted blood, the raven long hair was swamped in blood and the white kimono turned into crimson color , her eyes closed, a broken bow ...

Streams of tear began making their ways down her face. Kagome shivered, slumping down with two hands gripped left breast tightly, breath heavily...

'I'am a killer"

Thump!

Then darkness took over....

Well!DONE!^^ Now PLZ Review!All of us want to know what you think about this fic!So PLZ!!!!><

Here is a small scene:

Luckyprincess: Hell!This fis is so DIFFICULT!

Reijuh: And your words is the WORST I have ever seen><

Lishrayder: Hey!I don't care about you two's grammars!Just DOn"T let thoses fan misunderstand mY FIC

Lucky: Ok! *Sigh*

Reijuh : Man!So tired *Shook her head*

~Luckyprincess~

Reijuh: well, really, princess, I won't do that to you thought it was quite hard to check your grammar. You have a problem with words here.

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