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The Mysteries of The Inu Taiyoukai Race. by Kumi

The Letter From The North.

Okay, even though I have a few stories on the go right now, I was asked by the original authoress of this story if I would take over, and I accepted her request. When I read through this story, she (the authoress) wasn't kidding when she said that her grammar and spelling was really bad. Well, I have come to turn this story around, and even though I don't have a plot line to follow, that's okay, this story is going to be morphed into my own creation!

The Mysteries of the Inu Taiyoukai race

:~:The Letter:~:

Sesshoumaru walked into his study, his pristine white hair bouncing with each step he took. He walked over to his desk and sat down on the pillow and looked around, trying to distract himself from the letter on his mahogany desk. Jaken had informed him earlier that day that he had an urgent letter on his desk from the lord of the Northern Lands. There it was with the gold seal of an eagle, he sighed, grabbed it with his clawed hand and opened it.

It read:

My dearest friend, Lord Sesshoumaru of the Western lands, my lands are in bad times and I was praying that you would do me the honour and assist me in the last war I plan to have with my enemies. In which, if you do help me, I will be most honoured if you would accept part of my lands as it seems that I am too old to continue patrolling so much without any heirs. And, as a gift to you, I have, in my possession a young woman-miko that I would be most honoured for you to have.

Yours truly,

Lord Nekio of the North.

Sesshoumaru reread the letter several times before succumbing to his thoughts. Having more land would increase his power by ten-fold or more! His eyes then came back to the sentence where the miko-woman was mentioned. He knew that he had to accept the girl at least; it would decrease his loyally with the other lords if he turned down Lord Nekio. He sighed and rubbed his temples in an attempt to stop the oncoming headache; this was going to be a long night.

Once it was early morning, Sesshoumaru had finished patrolling his border for any dangers or unwanted humans/demons. He made sure he would finish near the Northern border so he could go onto the Northern lands without having to cross his entire territory. He walked near the edge of his lands and, without caution; he walked into the other territory. Sesshoumaru remembered when had spent quite a bit of time here when he was a young demon. Lord Nekio used to have a daughter and they would play together. He touched a familiar tree and remembered her laugh.

Sesshoumaru-kun, don't worry, I will never leave you, I will be your best friend forever! Her beautiful voice rang in his head making him remember how she died.

:~:~:~:~:Flashback:~:~:~:~:

"Come on, Sesshoumaru-kun, it's not that much further." She giggled as he licked his lips, once they came to the cave she let go of his hand and walked in.......He looked at her like she was holding up a piece of raw steak in front of him and suddenly he pounced on her. "Sesshoumaru?"

Her breath hitched in her throat and he smiled at her, very sadistically. He swiftly covered her mouth with his and started ripping off her clothes, her arousing scent pushing him to the edge. He pulled away from her mouth and ripped off the fabric covering her nest from his view and touched her there. She moaned loudly as he crawled down her body to bury his silvery mane between her thighs. Ever so lightly he brushed a fang near her clit and she bucked her hips towards his face. He had found the problem, why his blood was boiling; she was in heat and as a male, his blood called out to claim her.

He could tell that she was still a virgin and he smiled, she was going to be his and he was going to be her first and her last. He took energized licks with his rough tongue and soon had her begging for him, just the way he wanted it. He removed his clothes and prepared her for his big shaft, he slowly inched inside, watched her face contort in pain. With one quick thrust he entered her and she cried out in pain, her virginity lost like a second thought. He continued his hard thrusts out of one power. Lust.

His lust in the end had killed her, his fangs and claws caused her so many wounds that she lost too much blood, even for a demoness. Sesshoumaru was never taken to fault; they had blamed the daughter, Kyoti, for being so foolish around a male Taiyoukai. He then taught himself control and mastered it, even better than his father, whom of which took on a human mate, once Sesshoumaru's mother had died. Sesshoumaru would never forgive him for that.

:~:~:~:~:End Flashback:~:~:~:~:

"Inuyasha, we are lost." Said Miroku to the silver-haired hanyou, and he took his chance when Sango was looking away to grope her rear.

thwack

Her deadly weapon rang out as it hit his head and he fell on the ground unconscious.

"Great," Inuyasha rolled his eyes, "now we have to stop and make camp, if you two keep that up, we will never find Kagome." Sango lowered her head, tears forming at the corners.

"I'm sorry, Inuyasha, I really am, I miss her too." she said and wiped away her tears and proceeded to make a camp fire. Without Kagome there, they had no ramen to eat, instead she fried some fish that they caught not too long ago.

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Kagome woke up on a beautifully decorated bed, as she had for the last week. The man that called himself Lord Nekio when they first met came into the room, walked up to the bed and stared at her. Oh how he lusted after this woman-miko, but he did offer her to Lord Sesshoumaru, and rumour was that he liked virgins.

"Woman-miko, get cleaned, your new lord will be here soon." he told her and she nodded, hopefully her new lord would let her go or even let her outside. How she longed for the walls to disappear, and Inuyasha's silver head to poke out with his cute doggy ears to come and save her. She sighed and walked over to the hot springs in the other room and sighed.

"Shippou, oh how I miss you so much, my son." She told the air and undressed, she sighed again, 'Wow,' she thought, 'I seem to be sighing a lot since I was kidnapped.' she sighed again and relaxed in the spring.

Sesshoumaru was greeted warmly into the castle and was lead to a room to rest and clean up if he wanted to, the meeting would be in a moment. He walked into the room and decided to go into the springs to relax. He undressed in his bedroom and opened the door joining to the spring. As he walked through, he saw a girl in the water, she looked so sad, not that he cared. When he closed the door she opened her chocolate eyes and saw him in all his glory. She gasped and covered herself up as best as she could and screamed.

Lord Nekio was in his chambers when he heard a scream, running to Sesshoumaru's visiting chambers, he realized that it came from the hot springs. He opened the door and saw Sesshoumaru in the water across from the woman-miko, who was doing her best to cover up.

"So, Sesshoumaru, it looks like you have met your gift." Lord Nekio told him and Sesshoumaru's cold façade slipped into a smirk.

"Yes, Lord Nekio, I believe I have, and I am very pleased." he said and with that Lord Nekio left them alone to 'get to know each other.'

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Okay everyone, this is chapter one rewritten. The original version of "The Mysteries of The Inu Taiyoukai Race" is still up, as the authoress is going to leave it up so I can edit each chapter as I go along.

A poem written by the authoress:

And as the wind blows, his hair is still perfect,

Never getting messy or tangled,

His dangerous but beautiful body,

Can destroy and mangle

When he smiles, you should know to run,

As he is faster then the untrained eye can see

He isn't very talkative or fun,

But he is the one for me

He is the killing perfection,

He is Sesshoumaru.

INUYASHA © Rumiko Takahashi/Shogakukan • Yomiuri TV • Sunrise 2000
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