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'Like You'

Like You

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Iris:Some thing I made up as I heard this song for the first time.

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A stage lite up and stating in the middle was a beautiful raven haired girl.

She was looking at the floor,her dress was creamy white and flowed down the back in layers,which lay on the floor.

The front was sleeveless and had a black lacy lining at the top,the dress also showed the front her shoes,which was a pair of lacy tie up boots.Her hair was flowing down her back,the silky tress's had a blue shine.

(Think of the cover of Evanescence new cd The Open Door,yes that dress)

The sound of a guitar came from a man wearing a black suit with brown hair in a pony tail,next to him was another man with a guitar,he was also wearing a black suit only his hair was black and long.

Then there was another man siting at a drum set,long white hair was held back in a low pony tail,a man also with white hair was siting at a piano.

The girl looked up as the man at the piano began to play,blue eyes looked at the crowd of people,all siting silently waiting to her the young maidens voice.

Stay low

soft,dark,and dreamless

far beneath my nightmares

and loneliness

The other man with the guitar started to play.

I hate me

for breathing without you

I don't want to feel

anymore for you

The man at the drums started a nice slow bet.

Grieving for you

I'm not grieving for you

nothing real love can't undo

and though I may have lost my way

all paths lead straight to you

I long to be like you

lie cold in the ground like you

The girl walked toward the piano and ran her hand along it.

Like you

Halo

blinding wall between us

melt away and leave,leave us alone again

humming,haunted somewhere out there

I believe our love can

The piano was the only thing playing as the girl fisted her hand above her heart.

see us through in death

The other began to play just like they did before,her hand drooped.

I long to be like you

lie cold in the ground like you

there's room inside for two

and I'm not grieving for you

I'm coming for you

Again they all stop exsect the piano,the girl walked up and put her hand on his shoulder.

You're not alone

no matter what they told you

You're not alone

The band erupted into playing again,the bet a little more rough,the girl dropped to the floor.

I'll be right beside you forevermore

She stood and walked back to the sinter of the stage.

I long to be like you

lie cold in the ground like you

there's room inside for two

and I'm not grieving for you

and as we lay in silent bliss

I know you remember me

I long to be like you

lie cold in the ground like you

there's room inside for two

and I'm not grieving for you

The piano played softly,it and her voice the only noise in the blilding.

I'm coming for you

The curtins drooped as the piano slowed to a stop.

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Iris:This is a one shot but I think I might make it into a story,where Kagome is a singer and Sesshomaru,Koga,InuYasha, and Naraku are her band mates,put a drama filled life story for Kagome.Give Sessho a problem such as being in love with Kagome but she seems to cold hearted to love him.Plus I'll through myself in her by making them need a back up singer or three,such as Sango and Ayame,or Kikyo.Tell me what you think about this becoming a story.Rate and review.

~Iris

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