Twisted Fate by bubbly_blonde

Broken Heart

( Character Room )

me: wow, depressing first chapter

inuyasha: why do you make ME the bad guy?

me: well, because you are

kagome: i think that your being a little harsh inuyasha. it's her story.

inuyasha: i dont care! *crosses arms and jumps up his tree*

me: *rolls eyes*

kagome: inuyasha, get out of the tree and apologize!

inuyasha: feh! *pouts and climbs higher*

kagome: inuyasha! stop being a baka and come down here!

inuyasha: feh, make me you stupid bitch!

kagome: SIT!

inuyasha plummets to the ground. shippou jumps onto kagome's shoulder.

kagome: hey shippou!

shippou: whatcha doin?

me: yelling at mister baka over there

shippou: oh

inuyasha: *muffled in the ground*

shippou: huh?

inuyasha: *sits up* stupid bitch!

sango: *whack*

kagome: sango, miroku, where did you come from?

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Ch. 1 Broken Heart

It was still night when kagome woke. freezing, she pulled her blanket over her head and curled up into a little ball. It had been snowing for about a week now, and she was tired of waking early every morning because of the cold. kagome gazed at her necklace.

it was a very special stone. her grandpa gave it to her before he died. she named it skikon after her grandpas shrine. thats how she accidently came to the feudal era.

hearing a noise, kagome peeked out from under the blanket. inuyasha was stoking a small fire. kagome enjoyed watching him. he stuck the wood in clumsily. kagome smiled. inuyasha turned to meet eyes with her. 'i guess i woke him up. he knew i was awake.' inuyasha cleared his throaght and sat by the fire.

"i heard you wake up, and you seemed cold, so i started the fire." he closed his eyes and lowered his head. kagome wrapped the blanket around her and walked over to sit by him. they were only 5 inches apart, but inuyasha could smell her scent. it reminded him of kikyou. kagome inched her way closer until their side and knees touched. kagome blushed when inuyasha opened his eyes with a suprised look on his face. "i'm cold."

he opened his eyes a bit more and grabbed her waist. kagome tensed. 'what is he doing?' inuyasha felt this, and yanked her down onto her lap. "feh, you said you were cold didn't you." kagome visibly relaxed. inuyasha closed his eyes and put his arms around her, pressing her to his body. "what are you doing?" inuyashas failed attempts to go back to sleep annoyed him. "you said you were cold and i'm trying to share body heat. what do you THINK i'm doing?"

kagome blushed and looked downward. "nothing." inuyasha knew she was lying, but didn't want her to go. kagome felt embarrased and struggled to get up, but inuyasha held her down. "please, will you let me go?" she stared into her face. "no." thats it, thats all he did. "well why not?" "because your cold, that's why. i dont want the shard detector to get sick, now do i?"

kagome felt a surge of sadness. 'a shard detector. thats all i am to him, but i want more.' kagome lept up, which caught inuyasha off gaurd. bewildered, he stared up at her with his mouth wide open. "that's all i am to you?" she whispered forcefully. inuyasha looked up confused. "what are you talking about kagome?" just the fact that he had no clue about what she was infering to, made her blood boil. "just forget it!" she walked over to her bag and dragged it to her bed. inuyasha stood.

"what the hell are you doing?" kagome fought the tears that were coming. she started stuffing her blanket and pillow inside her pack. latching the top, she stood and put on her coat beside her. when that was securly on, she went over to her shoes, but inuyasha was standing there with them in his hands. "answer me you goddamn bitch! what the hell ate you doing?"

kagome just stood there staring blankly at him. no emotion. in a broken voice, she answered. "i'm leaving. i realized that you dont love me, you'll never love me. you only used me as a substitute for kikyou. that bitch! she stole your heart from me! she stole it, and will eventually break it to pieces." inuyasha stood stock still. anger coarsed through him. he balled his fists. "youre right. i do love kikyou. go! leave! i can find the shards without you! now leave before i tear you to shreads! kikyou will always be better than you! do you hear me bitch? she'll always be MINE!"

kagome felt her chest ache in pain. tears now streaming down her face, kagome forgot about her pack, and ran out the door. tripping over some rocks that layed out in front of kaedes hut, kagome broke through the iced over stream. the coldness of the water numbed her almost an instant later. she never fought. laying still, she allowed herself to sink to the squishy bottom of the stream. neverending seconds passed before someone was pushing on her chest, forcing all the water that invaded her lungs to spew out of her mouth.

kagome layed there shivering. she could dimly hear someone yelling. opening her eyes, kagome could see inuyashas pissed face. he was yelling, but she couldnt put the words together. blue lips whispered, "sit." the necklace around inuyasha's neck glowed for a second before inuyasha plummeted to the ground. kagome shakily stood. walking away from him, she couldnt feel anything. no movement, no sadness, no pain. even when her bare feet were steadily walking through the deep snow, kagome felt nothing.

she walked on and on until she could walk no more, her body crumbled beneath her. laying in the snow, the last thing kagome thought was, 'you broke my heart. why inuyasha?' she hugged the shikon to her heart, then fell unconciouse.

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kagome looks at sango, then miroku, eyeing the two suspiciously.

sango: *blushes*

miroku: oh, nowhere. *gropes sango*

sango: *face turns red. knocks miroku out*

girls unision: guys!

me: so, where were you two anyways?

sango: *blushes* oh, i forgot, i have to go see keade about, uh, .................... gathering water! thats it! *runs off*

kagome: *whispers*

me: omg!

kagome: *giggles* isnt it romantic though?

me: i hope they used protection.

miroku: dont worry, we did

we stare at him wide eyed

inuyasha: *snickers*

kagome: SIT!

inuyasha: damnit!

shippou: just shut up!

me: *sweatdrops*

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well, how did you all like that? i apologize to anybody offended by the language, abusive actions, etc. i think my first chapter of my first story ever, of anything, came out pretty well. tell me what you think. ;)